This Puppet Master Is Not Normal

It feels a bit anticlimactic. The appearance of the next five major disasters is a bit abrupt and fast. The rhythm of the previous copy is pretty good, but the next five disasters are solved suddenly within a hundred chapters. The turning points and climaxes are almost difficult to feel. Fang Xianren's ten-year plan to save people was suddenly cut when the protagonist told him to cut it. According to the setting, Alon is fine, but for the plot of the novel, it is very abrupt, like It was a roller coaster, and it was about to reach its peak. The next second, he saw that he was already at the rest stop. Aron decided to intervene directly. In fact, the moment he intervened/or when the truth behind the scenes was revealed, the ending was no longer suspense. The process of solving the problem was just flying again, and the climax was difficult to get up. No matter how you talk about it later, it will just feel like watching "talk about it later". Most of the Invincible articles we read are about daily leisurely life. If we want to write a serious drama to arouse readers' interest in reading, it would be a group novel that explores the beauty of human nature or explores the world view.

The protagonist is called Alon. You can feel the feeling of a light novel from the name, and the protagonist should be a full-level rebirth. (Personally, I feel that the name plus the protagonist's ability, in addition to family background, can basically be regarded as Long Aotian.) He is very strong as soon as he appears. You can read it if you like it. I prefer upgrading novels, so I won't comment much. Bye.

I finally came back to read this book. I scratched my head. The student party spent only a small amount of pocket money and could only slowly make up for it (silently). I finished reading the part of Valley Town. The Day After Talk made me feel good, seeing the friendship between Andre and Ruto... This is definitely not the author's first book. The Day After Talk is the kind of dawning feeling of a new dawn after regret and sorrow. Although the story process is too bland and there is an exchange game in the middle to separate it, the climax does not feel like a climax, but it is still very good. The author seems to like writing combat sequences, but with more than a hundred chapters in this book, it feels a bit out of place with the bland main plot. I'm a little tired of watching puppets fight (silent) But it would be much better to watch the protagonists fight in the latest book "Miracle Has a Price".

I think the author's writing in capital letters is quite nice, come on

The writing is good, but I don't know when this counter-mainstream writing style became popular. In the world of summoners, the protagonist must be better at fighting than the summoned objects, and in the world of dolls, the protagonist is also better at fighting than his own doll. As a result, those who like to watch summoned objects or dolls just look at their names, and end up watching the protagonist's appearance throughout the whole process!

It's too slow to pick up. After reaching chapter 40, I don't even know what the main plot is. Old bookworms have basically gone out to work and read novels to kill time. Not many people will ponder the connotation with you. Unless you like it very much, the early start is not good, and few will follow it. In the early stage, the Riddler is old, one and two dolls have secrets, and the protagonist's character has not been established. It gives people the impression that the protagonist in the past life has invincible power that he does not know the source of, and it has something to do with the past of this world. The character of the protagonist is completely uninteresting. It gives people the impression that everyone is a child. I want to hit but no one can beat me. I don't want to hit, so I feel like a puppet. There is no desire or purpose, no thoughts and no pursuits. Buddhas are competing for fragrance. The main line of advancement is completely invisible. There is no poisonous point and no interesting point, which is outrageous.

Just after I saw a few pictures, I suddenly thought that if a puppeteer doesn't make himself a puppet, how can he be called a puppeteer? 🙂🙂

Actually, I just came to see if there are any Rose Maidens or Clueless Girls.

Author, don't end up trying to reason with readers. Not only do you lose face, but you also lower your intelligence. What do those people who talk to the author about the setting think? They just find fault with the world view set by the author. There is something wrong with this.

The color is a bit white, but not bad

Look what treasure I found

The previous writing was quite good, but after the thirty or forty chapters, I felt a little tired and lacked the desire to read on. The main reasons are as follows. 1. The plot lacks a main line, the protagonist has no certain purpose, and the story lacks driving factors. 2. There is no conflict, which means it is not fun. It feels like there is no fun in drawing cards, and it becomes a test-taking protagonist who plays cheats. 3. The character is not standing still. The protagonist wants to be an invincible and idle person, who seems to be capable of anything, but dare not be exposed directly. He also wants to be a child with a big gun, which is a bit childish. Except for the protagonist and his group, we basically didn't see any other characters, and it was very monotonous. 4. The author likes the Riddler, not that it's bad. But the riddle couldn't be solved, and several more riddles were immediately added, which made it feel very confusing. There is no pleasure in solving the suspense, it is like riddles for the sake of riddles. The protagonist seems to know everything but doesn't say anything, making you angry or not. 5. I don't understand much about this world, but a new world has been opened, but it's not the kind of infinite flow, so it's a bit strange. In summary, it feels like the author wants to write too much, but doesn't seem to have a clear outline, so the story is mixed and strange. The subject matter is still very good, and it gives people a bright feeling, but it cannot keep people attracted. It always gives too much suspense without solving it, and when there is no main line, the story becomes cumbersome. I still hope the author will work hard💪.

Herrscher of Ice-Anna﹒ shaniyat

I think it's very cool. Why don't people accept this character?

In fact, the writing was good at the beginning, but then it became more and more complicated. I kept writing about things from the past life. No matter what I did or what copy I downloaded, I always pulled out the things from the previous life to write. Let's put it this way, 80% of the content of this book is about the past life and 20% is about the other world. It is basically the other way around. No wonder the results are so bad. If you put 80% of the content in the other world, it won't be so complicated. You always pull out the things from the previous life to write. Why not just write about the previous life? Just like a married woman who always thinks about her ex-husband no matter what she does, a different kind of tauren🤒

The setting is attractive, but the protagonist's character and way of doing things make me unable to stand it.

I thought it was a novel about collecting materials and making puppets to fight, but it turned out to be a bad review.

I feel like the main character doesn't have that courage and I feel bored after reading Chapter 47

I feel that although this book is slow to gain popularity, Aron really fulfilled my childhood fantasy of a powerful and unmatched "person" wandering around the world. The writing is also good. I think the flaws in the plot are okay. It's a very supportive novel (can the author write a side story?) I'm a bit sorry for the author. I'm a >man<. My finances are limited, dddd, but I will always support you, come on!

The author's writing is too profound, and my brain is a bit weak when reading. There is a lot of fog between the lines. Every time I read it, I have to carefully figure it out word by word, and I don't feel immersed in it. It might be better if it is published as a physical book. Nowadays, people who read online novels except at night mostly read it in fragmented time during the day. It is a bit too difficult to read this book. The writing is not ugly, but the settings are a bit hard to understand.

I think the author actually writes very well, better than most online articles. My classmates and I share the same view that the plot tension and characters are well done; it's just a bit counter-intuitive. In other words, the so-called "traffic password" is not mastered. I personally feel that the protagonist of this book is much less interesting than the supporting characters. Aaron is more of an audience, although he may be on the stage.

After reading it, I felt that the overall story was pretty good, and it was pretty good. As a new author, it was very good to write it like this. However, the overall setting of the story is large without feeling rough. There are many characters and it is very thoughtful. However, due to the overall length, some of the details are not vivid enough. Students can subtract a few. There is no need to write five for several major disasters, and there is no need to write three for Titan's foreshadowing. There is still room for improvement overall. However, the author's writing style and layout are still worth looking forward to. Come on! Work hard to improve and write more. I wish you could become a great or platinum author soon! You have to work hard

The content of this book is simply the daily life of the gods.

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It's hard to imagine that this is a book from the past two years 🔨🔨🔨

I came across it by accident before, but I couldn't find it without saving it. It turned out that the author's second book was also on my bookshelf. I looked at the author's previous books and found that the name looked more and more familiar. I knew it before I even opened it. This was the book I had accidentally read before.

So why did the novel in December 21 include the plot of Elden's Circle 🙂

The writing is very good, but the combat power has collapsed. The previous spirit was fine before, but it collapsed after reaching the spirit. The half-spirit can escape the pursuit of the demigod. After reaching the spirit, it immediately becomes a strong one in the spirit realm. The previous mortals reached the spirit, so many levels. After that, it feels like there is one level difference between the spirit and the god, but the god is very strong. The spirit has no distinction.

Can Star Color eat planets?

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