The World's Own Self-Created Exercises, Starting with the Yi Jin Jing

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The No. 10 Huanghuang next door is invincible even at the beginning with his free-form method. Here comes a martial artist who starts by a pound.

Please, can you use less dots and fewer lines when writing? Try listening to it with your own audio book and see if you feel anxious while listening.

Feeling a little silly? You know that you created the technique in the examination room and will not be punished. Why should we be afraid? I don't understand. If we can't create merit, why should we let people create merit in the examination room? It's too contradictory. And if it's not illegal to make achievements in the examination room, why should the protagonist be afraid? It's really strange. Isn't it good to say it directly? Do you insist on pretending to be invisible??

Why do you need the Yi Jin Jing when you can create a Kung Fu just by thinking about it? Isn't just any magical or fantasy Kung Fu better than this?

The setting is good, but the protagonist can't stop. Either others are looking for trouble or the protagonist is looking for trouble himself.

The author's setting is very interesting, but the operating logic is often contradictory. For example, if you create a skill in the examination room, just because the creation is successful, the creator may even be asked to defect. This is inconsistent with the logic of life and behavior. After reading more than twenty chapters, I really can't stand it anymore. The world in the story is a world that deviates from human nature. Except for big forces, as long as it is related to the practice, neither the author nor others belong to the individual, but to the big forces. This kind of quasi-public ownership is completely unrealistic without a core belief. Just like the ancestors who founded New China, they sacrificed their lives for this and made selfless contributions. However, except for some hidden forces, no rebellion or chaos was caused in the article. This is unrealistic and illogical. This goes against normal people's common sense of life and thinking. People are selfish. Even now, when the information is opaque, there is no reason for someone to hand over everything he has. He can succeed under pressure, but the hatred in his heart will definitely break through the sky. But the protagonist is not cynical. If the protagonist does not become a hero in the future, this book will definitely collapse. This kind of forced pretense and slap in the face may have worked in the past, but it doesn't work at all now. Abandoned!

No wonder it's so popular, the author of this piece of writing is so speechless that he doesn't have any protection at all. Such is the blessing of heaven. I don't understand the starting point of the forced sub-protagonist. Is it interesting to deliberately weaken the protagonist in the early stage? The same person who became a god by writing books is not as good as those previous novels

The logic is completely inconsistent. Geniuses who create their own techniques in private will die.

Personally, I feel that the author's worldview is abnormal. He always emphasizes that chivalrous people use force to break the ban. But have you ever thought about why they break the ban? How many people break the ban? Corresponding to breaking the ban, it is called Confucianism using literature to mess with the law. Those who break the law will cause more harm than those who break the ban! There is no denying that there are some people who are powerful with force and have ulterior motives, but there are always a few. Those who violate the law and those who violate the prohibition should complement each other! Personal opinion, don't comment if you don't like it!

I didn't want to express my opinion at first, but I have to say, Yi Jin Jing is just a Xuan-level body-building technique? ? ? The author said that the Yi Jin Jing includes two training methods: internal strength and external strength. In the "General Theory" of the main text of "Yi Jin Jing", it is explained that "Yi" means "change", and "jin" refers to the meridians of the human body; it is believed that the human body has an inside and an outside, "washing the marrow" can "clear the inside", and "Yi Jin" is "strengthening the outside"; and the sweeping monk in the Tianlong Babu practices Yi Jin Jing! !

This. . The college entrance examination questions were based on self-created exercises. Then, the creation was recognized by Tiandao and forced to pass three times. As a result, he was caught by the law enforcement team. . Is this what the author thinks is cool? This kind of plot design to force conflict is probably the same in the future.

All I can say is that if you can only practice cultivation before going to college, does that mean that all the geniuses before are dead? This world is not suitable for geniuses, only mediocre people can live in this world. Especially those who create the practice of public law based on college entrance examination questions. Because as long as they create something, then they have practiced it, and then they have to die. So isn't this proper official fishing law enforcement? Specially fish out those geniuses and let them die. Could you please reply to the author? Don't tell me that the back part is round, but the back part is not round no matter how round it is. Such a big loophole.

I can't figure out how you arranged the plot. The so-called law enforcement team, the so-called no practice before college, the protagonist wrote a Kung Fu method in the examination room, was recognized by Heaven, was forced to wash his muscles and marrow three times, and was about to be killed when the law enforcement team found out? The test papers are unified across the country. Anyone who can write a single exercise method is at least a genius, right? Can a country not tolerate a genius? Anyone who has cultivated a body without reporting to the university will be put to death regardless of whether it is a reward from heaven or personal cultivation, right? I don't know why, but I was so angry after watching it. Maybe I thought too much about the plot, and I couldn't stand it. I hope you won't write too excitingly in the future and be worthy of your setting.

The setting is interesting, but your writing style is totally lacking!

This book is really hard to describe in one sentence.

Big BUG: There is no protection mechanism in the world. How can you protect yourself as an ordinary person but you have repeatedly achieved miracles? Is it really suitable for you to be such a waste without a backing or strength?

Can Huaqing School be returned and corrected? Every time I see this school, I can't help but think of Tsinghua University. Tsinghua University is now a training base for traitors, and I feel physically uncomfortable when I see it.

Introductions and reviews, a lot of plots, only two or three kinds of chapters to create a hundred chapters of exercises, a bunch of scattered plots, the plots are not well written, what a waste of an outline

With a roar at the beginning, the plot depends entirely on water

The subject matter is good, I was looking forward to it, but the plot got too complicated.

It is obviously a novel suitable for Gou's development. In less than a hundred chapters, seven or eight short stories have been written. This is a test of patience. . . Another point is that there is obviously a lack of resources for cultivation, so why not write down the exercises that use all things in the world as salary, let alone a fantasy world, not to mention lack of aura. Level 1-9, a super fantasy skill can be surpassed overnight. Author, how long do you need the protagonist to practice? . . Goldfinger is so powerful, and the protagonist has to practice so hard at level 7-9, but he hasn't even reached level 6 in nearly a hundred chapters, which is so speechless. . . . . . The novel is obviously suitable for the invincible style, but killing monsters and upgrading is not suitable at all, right?

What this book writes is that contradictions open the door to contradictions

The setting is good, but the plot is really weak, and the protagonist is not outstanding. It's all like this. I still think about this and that afterwards. The supporting characters are better than the protagonist. The protagonist's personality is not distinctive. The background setting is too restrictive. I am speechless that such a society has not collapsed. The protagonist feels useless.

The subject matter is good, but the writing is not very good.

First-rate setting, second-rate plot, third-rate literature

Without the caution of Mr. Han, there is only the feeling of ordinary people holding the first prize in the lottery while covering their hands and beaming with joy.

We won't talk about the college entrance examination examination room. Then why did you create the Dragon Breath Technique? What's the use? The protagonist was weak at the time, was it necessary to hide it? Even if you want to hide, create some cause and effect that jumps out of time and space, even if you can't directly reach the full level, is the basic hidden ability not as good as a dragon's breath spell? Moreover, this kind of comprehensive technique has everything from offensive mana to hidden defense. Then there is the martial arts competition. The protagonist has no reason to win, so why not just give up after a few moves? Firstly, you are not sure that you can win, and secondly, you have to expose your own strength and cause unnecessary trouble. Really, I originally created the dragon coefficient to hide it, but I never expected that the dragon breath technique would become a reason for exposure Furthermore, the expression description is really speechless. That Liang, he is just curious about the secret of the protagonist. Is it necessary for him to have such a cold face? What's cold? Did the protagonist offend her? Are you afraid that he has a conspiracy? To put it bluntly, Huaqing University is just an organization. He is the only one who recruits students, but he still has a family. How can he be so loyal? And if this can be achieved by relying on the plot, the cultivation system is too complicated. Can you grasp it?

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The Yi Jin Jing also trains Qi. Xiaoaoli made it very clear. Is Fang Zheng's Yi Jin Jing true Qi fake?