Foreign Battlefield: I Can Activate Dual Talents

My personal suggestion is to write less about showing off in front of ordinary people. Once you have awakened your talent, thank the awakened people more. What's the point of you, an awakened person, always showing off in front of ordinary people?

I hope the author can elaborate on the details. For example, if such an awesome talent has been upgraded to a beast and a king, no one pays attention to it? No special move? Shouldn't we protect it and try to advance to the ninth level of the card level? Isn't it because the main character Xing's ability to lead teachers is too awesome to be accepted? Also, Zhao has been promoted to the king. Should the secretary remember and let him go? The certifier can also guide the promotion. It seems more and more illogical. Don't always publish the manuscript at 12 o'clock and publish it during the day. I still like this book. I hope you can work out the logic and correct the unreasonableness.

This book puts the cart before the horse. According to the world view written by the author, the background setting is actually quite good. If the protagonist uses the golden finger to develop step by step and rise to prominence, and writes more plots about experience and adventure or fighting against enemies, it will really be possible to become a god. Referring to Nine Star Poisonous Milk, it is a pity that the author only focuses on unlocking talents for others. The entire text describes these things in a large amount of space, and the protagonist's own experience is completely suppressed! What readers see is that the protagonist is given skills, and passers-by are awesome. The protagonist improves a little, and then he is given skills to improve a little. Although there is progress, there is no plot at all, and it becomes boring after a few times... It's a pity that it is a good setting. It will definitely be popular if it is written as an adventure fighting style.

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After reading the free chapter, I feel a little pity. In fact, the author's framework concept is not bad, but it is a pity that the author does not seem to care about the details. For example, the elite cultivation method emphasizes absolute mastery and improves by 0.1% Each time. Later, after practicing seriously for a few days, the improvement of the earth element is completely guided by skills. The improvement of dozens of times of the cultivation method requirements at a time may even lead to a missed skill understanding. Since such a talent can be upgraded quickly, why bother to create a contradictory cultivation method setting? In addition, I'm actually very curious. Since he experienced the kidnapping of an outstanding student's family and clashed with the local cult forces when he returned to Saturn, the author spent a lot of pen and ink to depict family relationships, but it seems that after experiencing the assassination of a painter at his doorstep, the protagonist never considered the safety of his parents? Just like out of kindness, when teaching skills to the city lord's daughter, do you place your own safety on the kindness of others? How should I put it, what should be written is not written, but what should not be written is written, which is confusing. As for the things that have been commented on in other chapters, I won't repeat them too much. Although there are many flaws, after all, progress always requires a process. It's just that the free chapters did not attract me to continue to subscribe and understand the author's progress.

You, a time traveler, have read a lot of novels, right? No matter which department, it can be very strong. So it is a mistake to beat yourself up at the beginning. This behavior makes readers think that the earth system must be bad. At the same time, it may lead readers to think that the entire universe thinks that the earth system is bad The earth breeds metal, which can be stronger than gold The earth breeds lava, which can be hotter than fire I will not talk about other systems. All systems are related, so the systems merge into a complete universe.

Shouldn't double talent and double talent be the same concept?

Author, could you please be more relaxed in the emotional scenes, make the main character have a normal IQ, and be more cautious when he meets a terrorist organization?

How should I put it? It feels pretty good when I look at it, but I can't stand it when I see that the attitude towards wind instruments is not understandable.

After reading a few chapters, someone in the chapter comments said, "Just write something useless!" I agree with this sentence very much, this is not how it is written every day!

By the way, since when did Invincible in the Same Realm become an invincible novel? The invincible style in my memory should be the one of Diba. No matter how young or old you are, you will be pressed down and beaten. It is called invincible style. If you beat the young and old ones, they will run away or shake people. This novel is also called invincible style.

The author often suddenly suppresses the protagonist inexplicably. It is really hard to persuade him to quit. I really feel uncomfortable if I don't complain...

The writing is too shabby, it's 100 chapters and I haven't even gone to college yet.

The setting is interesting, but the kidnapping scene is a bit abrupt...

I just read three chapters and expressed my opinion. 1. The author is a novice, the text is not refined enough, and it is a bit tiring to read. 2. After reading the introduction, I thought it was a fantasy game with an invincible skill system. 3. The settings are too rigid. 4. There are hammer tanks in this world, and they are called warriors. There is no such thing as damage resistance, and they are not playing games. 5. The writing method of gamification in the real world is very inconsistent, unless you directly give the protagonist a system and directly systematize it.

The setting is okay, but the plot is a bit confusing and the main plot is dragging.

Personally, I really like the big chapter "The Son of Foreign Land", but brother, you have only written more than two hundred chapters, are you sure that your combat power will not collapse... How can I put it, the previous academy was quite satisfactory, but suddenly the plot took off immediately when it came to the Son, as if there was an extra person to write the plot.

Many academic novels have never graduated from the beginning to the eunuch. Just tell me how many chapters the pig's feet will graduate from. Three hundred, five hundred, or one thousand chapters?

The first dozen chapters are really... A bit... Baffling?

It's a pity. This book has a good beginning, but it's still a daily life in Water City after it was put on the shelves. It's a pity.

Let's talk about the shortcomings! It would be best if the author can change it. If not, I hope the next book can be more rigorous. Generally speaking, the subject matter can be good but the writing style is not good, and the transition feels very blunt. For example, the protagonist guides the master. The image of a good teacher was created in the beginning, but then a genius in the wood field suddenly appeared, and the image of this master immediately collapsed? After reading a few chapters after it was released, I saw the entrance banquet. The man named Jiang, who had already established a good relationship with the protagonist, suddenly launched an attack at the entrance banquet. There were so many big shots present, and there were many masters of guarding. Who gave him the courage to attack an ordinary person? What's more, you already have a good relationship with the protagonist, but you suddenly have to change with the protagonist? Even if it is said that the Black Shark God was brainwashed, is this explanation very blunt? There are many places before that have the same problem. The characters fall apart at a moment's notice, and the plot turns forcibly...

It looks so familiar. Ever since Global Gaowu became popular, too many people have taken the plot from Global Gaowu and modified it a little to make it their own?

Too watery. . I haven't even entered university for more than a hundred chapters. .

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Although I am dissatisfied in various aspects, I still give you my monthly ticket because it is not easy for everyone.