Hogwarts: Slytherin

To avoid lightning for everyone, the article describes the protagonist's unreasonable thoughts about Lily. Regardless of whether the writing is good or not, this paragraph alone is suspected of breaking down Sili's CP, so everyone can directly avoid lightning

In fact, the author made it very obvious in the story that the bosses are all single. The protagonist will eventually become the boss. At first I thought about starting a harem, but I personally thought it was impossible for a witch to accept such a thing, so I couldn't bring myself to do it.

Seeing that the author said that The Eunuch does not have a female protagonist, I will post some of my humble opinions on Harry Potter in the hope that it can help the author. Regarding the issue of wizard blood, I think magic is chaotic and disorderly, equivalent to high-voltage electricity. The blood is a current stabilizer. The higher the purity of the blood, the more stable the magic power will be. Otherwise, it will become a squib or the magic power will break through the blood body and become an obscurus. The wand is equivalent to a transformer to stabilize the disordered magic power and transform it into 220 volts of direct current or alternating current. The spirit and will are equivalent to the functions of ECU and wires. The above is the output terminal. The magic gesture is equivalent to circuits and electrical appliances belonging to the active party. Several of them complement each other, or one party is so powerful that it can partially or completely replace the role of other aspects. The 28 pure-blood families have a long history and must have a path suitable for their own bloodline. The Phoenix Pact of the Dumbledore family, the weather magic of the Razer family, the wand and alchemy of Ollivander, and the dark magic of Slytherin or the Gaunt family. Perhaps lost or lost to history or conquest, but certainly there. The First Wizarding War was fought for dominance and benefit between wizards and Muggles. But as Dumbledore rebelled and personally sent Grindelwald to prison, the wizard lost, so the wizard basically shrank. But the problem is that Dumbledore retreated to England and took control of the only Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry and firmly stood on the side of Muggle half-blood wizards and resolutely combated dark magic. That would be a big problem. Originally, the 28 pure-blood families in the British wizarding world had the final say. However, with the betrayal of some pure-bloods and the transfer to Dumbledore's command and the support of Muggle-born wizards, the interests of the British magical community belonging to the 28 pure-blood families can be said to have collapsed. And in one magic school, the children of the family enrolled and stayed with Muggle mixed-race classmates for 7 years, becoming friends or husbands. Here comes the problem. Intermarriage leads to diluted bloodlines. If the first generation can guarantee it, what about the second generation? With a large number of Muggle half-blood wizards, some rebellious purebloods, and Dumbledore's prestige and power, Deng completely had the right to speak. Deng's support caused the pureblood interests to collapse. In addition, Deng controls the only nursery school in the UK, Hogwarts, which makes the bloodline problem also worrying. So Deng was completely digging for the roots of pure blood. Therefore, the second war between pure blood and Muggle wizards is inevitable. For pure blood, it is either fight or be cannibalized. So when Voldemort stood up, the purebloods were wildly supportive. As for Voldemort, not all but a large part of Tom becoming the second generation Dark Lord was Deng's problem. Tom himself was born in an orphanage. His mental and physical deprivation coupled with the powerful power of his magical talent made him like a wounded lone wolf. Deng led him into Hogwarts, but he was sorted into Slytherin and all the items were second-hand goods, which led to him being discriminated against again. Deng, the only one who could feel some warmth, was wary of his dark magic talent and was wary of prohibiting him from learning dark magic. So Tom grew up, from a wounded lone wolf longing for love and warmth to Voldemort who recognized reality and pursued magic and his own strength. So in general, I personally think that Voldemort is right. If I can't get love and warmth, I will pursue my own strength. When I am strong enough, I will start pursuing immortality and rights. There is nothing wrong with being a pure blood. Take back your own voice and interests, and ensure that the blood purity of your family's descendants will no longer be slowly cannibalized. As for Dumbledore, from the perspective of wizards, I think he was wrong. The failure of the first war caused wizards to huddle in a corner and keep secrets. Deng Fang won the second war. Then, the wizarding society of the Ministry of Magic basically belonged to the Harry Potter and Willis families. The pure-blood families were wiped out again, and the older generation basically died of old age. It can be said that Deng has cremated the pure-blood heritage of the British wizarding world and the heritage of the older generation of wizards and wizards.

In the first four chapters, it is no longer a question of whether it is good or not. There are too many secondary settings. If you can accept it, it's not bad. I don't like it very much. When reading fan fiction, I like to read the ones that explore the settings of the original work. There are so many secondary designs that you're not afraid of conflicting with the original work?

The protagonist himself was beaten with blood everywhere Lily had a mark carved on her face that could never be removed As a result, the protagonist couldn't even take revenge! Even when readers are feeling angry, the author writes about this matter lightly, and the protagonist looks like nothing is wrong! I can't even give the violent Rozier enough punishment to relieve his anger! After five or six chapters of various depressions, revenge was just a stroke of light, but it was not successful yet! I'm really mad. Are you writing a torture article? Is the reader a masochist?

I couldn't listen to it for more than forty chapters. The first part wasn't very surprising, but at least I could still listen to it. The second part was because the protagonist Lily was stabbed, and everyone got beaten together after the protagonist was incompetent and furious. It was written inexplicably. It's not that you can't write like this, but what you wrote gives me the feeling that if you ask ordinary people why they go to work, they will say to make money. If you ask robbers, they will also say to make money. Then you go and ask the working people why they don't commit robberies, and the robbers why they don't go to work. Others will think you are confused.

I quite like Bella. Although she is a villain, her enthusiasm for Voldemort makes her look even more charming.

So?

There are too many private settings On the daily guide, there is no other meaning, just to say something

The Room of Requirement isn't just teleportation, it's going to start a war with the entire wizarding world. After all, you can even get into Gringotts, but is it someone else's vault or secret old house? This is too buggy

Again, the protagonist is forced to suppress after being given a golden finger. Many meaningless plots are all designed to suppress the protagonist.

Bellatrix Black

The setting is okay, the plot development is, how should I put it, a bit speechless. I don't understand the specific image of the protagonist. He was targeted by James but did not take much revenge. Snape was attacked but immediately took action. It was obvious that Snape was also bullied by James. The portrayal of the protagonist's brother feels too deteriorated. The author seems to want to develop according to the original plot and also want to write his own things. It's a bit messy. There is no content in these dozens of chapters.

Withdrew, Shennong retreated

It's very interesting. I sincerely hope that the author can write more about Snape, and if he can have other friends besides Lily, he can have normal social activities. It would be good to distract yourself from being a dog licker and follow the protagonist to make a big career in the future. He is a friend worth making friends with and a helper who can be of great help in the future. A rare normal Slytherin, both in public and in private.

To be honest, if you have put so much effort into adding so many personal settings to a fan work, you might as well write an original article. Personal settings are a deducted item.

I have read many fan stories, but I have never seen one that has a relationship with Narcissa, which means a husband-wife relationship. I just couldn't figure it out. Her performance in the original novel was also very impressive. He only cares about his husband and son, what a good person!

At first I didn't understand how he awakened his magic power, and why did he think he could awaken his magic power at that time?

Armor protection cannot protect against the death curse.

The writing is really good, I enjoyed reading it, the setting and story line are very smooth.

May I ask what kind of sentiment is there? ? ? Love for men or women? I heard there is no female protagonist. So is this love for men? This book is about fujoshi? ? ?

Just say a little. This author divides the strength levels of wizards into apprentice magicians, junior magicians, and intermediate magicians. I don't know if there will be a half-step peak Dzogchen or something like that later. . .

Consider poaching Death Eaters

The writing is quite good. It can be said that it is the best among the new Hogwarts fics. The first one I came into contact with was Bloodline Wizard. At that time, the writing was quite good. Nowadays, it is not easy to find such a good book with so many new releases.

It's very well written, I support you!

Does anyone know how to explain to me why so many time-travelers in HP fandom have never considered using transformation spells to produce daggers or firearms? Even if it is an ancient flintlock gun, it is faster than shouting magic spells to attack waves. The distance between wizards shooting magic at each other is not too far. Even if the magic power is empty and you are forced to fight in close combat, bringing a knife is better than bare hands, right? Why do the protagonists of HP know that Muggle technology is higher, but they still compete with their enemies in terms of magic power in life and death? If they are not strong enough, they find ways to outwit them instead of borrowing Muggle technology to take advantage of them.

Has the author not updated yet?😭

Is it updated yet? I ordered them all