Douluo, the Leader of the Army

Come on, come on, even though I am prostituted for free, I still support you

Should the protagonist's first soul skill be changed? If there is no active skill, he can passively increase his strength by 50%. Dai Mubai's first soul skill is the White Tiger Protective Barrier. A defensive shield also comes with a 50% increase in attack, defense, and strength. The protagonist's martial soul is far inferior to the white tiger's advanced soul skill. Are you sure it's Zhu Yan?

Are Haotian and Double Standard three different? If I want to die, I will continue to read it. I quite like the two supporting characters of Titan and Tyrone in the original book.

It's good that the plot has its own ideas, but your writing is really bad. At the beginning, Dugu Bo wants to find the protagonist for the first time, and then you come to a protagonist six years later looking at the two grasses of ice and fire. Suddenly you make a U-turn and run to talk about titan promotion and founding of the clan, and suddenly you go to the introduction of the protagonist's 20th soul ring and the soul master's strength. You are really too messy, and the writing is not good at describing it. I really can't stand it. It's poisonous and interesting, but it's too messy, and latecomers think it

The old lady's foot-binding cloth is smelly and long. The water content is okay. If it's watery, it makes you want to hit someone. It's your fault. If you don't know how to use water, don't use water. The watery one is dry. It can be solved in one sentence. It has to be watery for half a chapter. I have to explain several pictures in a row. I'm speechless.

This is Tang San, this is the world of Douluo Continent

Traveling through the original characters and forcing cheating to directly change the martial soul, I feel that it is unacceptable. Although Douluo Continent is not friendly to civilian players, with Tai Long's identity, he can completely plan if he knows the plot. If you want to evolve the martial soul, you can also use fairy grass and absorb the top soul beast soul rings, just like Ma Hongjun. If you want to change your martial spirit, you can completely change your time travel with another person.

Brothers, if it's not this statistic, it's impossible for me to know. I'm so confident!

I didn't want to watch it when I saw the protagonist bringing out a group of criminals from the city of killing. I really don't know what the author was thinking about bringing out a group of evil soul masters from the city of killing.

Coming, coming, coming! Another one comes to Douluo to give away welfare, the Killing City Kung Fu is giving away!

Let me make a statement here. Just the period of working in the slaughterhouse. Stop arguing with me. I actually threw up when I saw that scene. I am a person who can't even eat fat meat, so I drink beef soup in clear soup, which is really unbearable. When I put fat in my mouth, I spit it out, and the smell of that offal smell makes me uncomfortable. When I was in elementary school, it was the first time I watched someone kill a pig. When killing a pig, the internal organs are taken out and cleaned, especially the pig's heart. When people wash it, the pig's heart will spurt blood if pressed hard. I...

Starting from Chapter 16, it is basically a long running account. . .

I'm quite interested in it. I wanted to skip the plot of admission. I was looking at the table of contents. Oh boy, seven or eight chapters of this shit? Okay, now that I know the level of the author, I don't need to read it anymore. If you want to read it, look through the table of contents and you will know whether it is worth reading. I will say goodbye directly.

I can't stand it anymore, Titled Douluo Dabaicai? Counting the next Titled Douluo plus Tang San, there are only 50 of them. Are you going to defy the heavens? Excluding Poseidon Island, if you do the math, your titled Douluo has become a fairy grass?

This Zhu Yan looks quite similar to a gorilla, so there's nothing wrong with changing the martial spirit of the pig's feet!

The first time I saw the title of the book was, Douluo, King of Soldiers

I feel that what the author wrote is not a novel, but an essay. The protagonist has no sense of existence at all. It is very biased. There is no big steel. He just writes whatever comes to mind. He completely forgets to write with the protagonist as the theme.

Commander, I thought it was Chi You

The title of the book is Soldier Master. I thought it was Chi You's Ten Fierce Soldiers or something like that.

Photos of Zhu Yan

I feel a little uncomfortable today. I stayed up late and played all night yesterday. I have no energy all day today. I only managed to type out a few hundred words after opening the assistant for an hour. I am really out of shape. Please forgive me, brothers! By the way, I wish all readers a happy May Day holiday!

I have a cold today and have to take a day off.

The subject matter is quite good, but there are a lot of typos in the front, and many places don't make sense. Especially the author doesn't distinguish between "which" and "that", they use them completely opposite! It looks quite uncomfortable. I have seen book friends point out typos in paragraphs, but they have not been changed. I think the author converted speech into text?

Tailong's foreign trade should be changed. It's too ugly.

Brothers, I have written a book. If you are interested, you can come and take a look

Dou Wu's comments are better than Dou Wu's. If you don't have any fan points, you can only come here.

Your punctuation marks are really awkward, and there are also a lot of typos.