Xuanyuan Jue's Wind Rises in Another Realm

The writing and content are good, but one paragraph is too long. 😁

It is indeed quite satisfactory, and the writing style is very logical.

In the next minute, I will ask five real people to give you recommendation votes at the same time. Do you believe it? 😏

From the plot point of view, it seems to be quite satisfactory, because many people have written it like this. Even reading these chapters you wrote, I thought of Dou Po 😂 But the plot has not unfolded yet, and I don't know what will happen in the future. I look forward to it. By the way, if you want to write fantasy, you must make long-term preparations. You must save your manuscripts, and you must not update them intermittently. If you can't stand it, you must update it every day. If this is your first book, you have to finish it on your knees (even though I wrote the second one...) Ahem, back to the topic, if the contract for 50,000 words has not come yet, you should wait for the 100,000 words to apply for a contract on your own. If the 100,000 words have not come, then you have to be mentally prepared. Of course, generating electricity for love doesn't need to be so troublesome. But signing a contract is really important, because if you want others to read your book, how can they do so? You must have a recommendation position for signing. If not, you can only update one chapter and stay on the update list for 30 minutes before being removed. And during these 30 minutes, how many people can see it? Therefore, it is very realistic. You must write the content brilliantly and use your imagination! ! ! Come on ٩(๑^o^๑)۶

To be honest, it might be better if you could remove the "Wind Rises from Another World" in the title of your current book. I don't know why, but I always feel like it's a bit earthy. Personal opinion, don't worry about it.

Update quickly. If you don't update, go back to the screw factory 🥺

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Before I knew it, there were already more than sixty votes👍😁