This up Owner Is Too Serious

The author is a bad namer. Readers, if you have a good name, please write it in the comment area. I will take it based on the situation. If there is a good name, I may change the name of the supporting character that has already appeared. Thank you~

The following is my humble opinion. If it offends you, you can ask me to delete it. The problem with your writing style can be seen from the first chapter, because your description of the male protagonist is too straightforward. You are writing a novel, not a resume, so there is no need to list your hobbies one by one. No matter how much you say that he likes painting, it is not as practical as putting an easel and a stack of materials in the room. As an up master, the male protagonist will definitely open station b every day and take a look at his results. Also, the male protagonist looks muscular and handsome, so there's no need to tell it through narration. Wouldn't it be nice to let others praise him (I saw what you wrote later). Of course, the author's writing style has changed since then, but the three golden chapters are still needed after all... Other than that, everything else is actually quite good. The material selection is very close to the readers. As a refreshing article, it is easy for readers to resonate with it. The control of the rhythm is also pretty good. Because I really don't know how to praise people, so I can only write here. Come on!

Station B came over to give me some opinions, and after browsing it for a while, I found that it didn't look like the life of the up owner of Station B. It would be much better if the protagonist interacted with the up owners of station b. I saw that you wrote about Chinese Boy Super Gorilla, and you just posted a barrage. Why don't you think of a way for the protagonist to interact with him? You can arrange for the protagonist to go to station b headquarters, go to bw, go to the top 100 sites, be cheated on, be randomly selected, and be united to join together...

Demon Xiaoyu, Blue Rabbit Palace Master, Empress Shiji, Miss Jiaran, gender-transformed Doraemon, gender-transformed Tiger King, No. 18... Book friends, please choose which one will appear first? Or if you suggest other roles in the comment area, I will consider them as appropriate!

Harem! How can such good writing be limited to just one female protagonist?

Isn't this character the main master of Station B UP, Mu Yuan?

I'm super, station B's master Mu Yuan?

Fast forward to the Don't Laugh Challenge, and the Eat Rice Challenge

I feel that cursive writing can be added later. The author should know what cursive writing is, right? Then, like Wuhe Qilin, we can draw a satirical picture of a major national event, and then make a few comments to highlight how powerful the protagonist is and subvert our impression.

You can write down your favorite online name, and it will be used in the book as appropriate.

Pain! It hurts so much! My reader, why, why did you leave me😭😭😭

Brothers, I feel like I'm in good shape lately, and the more I write, the better I feel. This book is the first one, so if you have any uncomfortable reading, you can mention it here. The author is a person who humbly accepts pertinent suggestions. Please communicate more 😜

Isn't the author writing about Lu Master Mu Yuan (only read the introduction)

My suggestion is to remove the Wuhe Qilin part from the introduction and add it to the plot. Adding it directly to the introduction will give people the feeling of being a copywriter. Those who like this type of novel may not like it. Those who don't like Wenzhao will be able to cross it out as soon as they read the introduction. Moreover, removing it will not affect anything. You can also add some ups and downs to the plot. Just write it in the resume and wait until you get to where the plot develops. There will be no freshness. Briefly introduce the introduction. You have caught up with the spoilers in this introduction.

I was scared to death yesterday. The forty-nine chapter of the Pokémon series was originally the most satisfying chapter for me to drive, but it was almost blocked. I learned from this painful experience and will hold the steering wheel firmly in the future.

The character that will appear in the next issue is Haibara Ai from "Detective Conan". Ahem, think about what you want to do with Ai-chan 😏 Post it in the comment area, and you may have a chance to write it into the book.

Netizens in the barrage and comment areas asked for famous buildings. The more "connotation" there is, the easier it is to introduce it into the book😏

Asking for more refinement

Now, is it serious or not, is it not serious or not?

Can I still write novels by following the settings on site B?

Who is faster than me

I voted for the first chapter of this month