Eagle in England

Essex is not legendary. It would be particularly interesting if you traveled through time and became King Pendar of Mercia, the last pagan king.

This is a map from 800 years ago. It was searched online and is for reference only. Country names correspond to Chinese and English.

Authors need to continue to hone their writing skills

It kind of means ancient China in European skin. It reads like the Warring States period, not the Middle Ages. Not only the words and deeds of the protagonist, but also the words and deeds of the characters in the plot, and the relationship between lords and vassals are not understood. The currency is also a mess, and the population and soldiers are passable. Generally speaking, the current connection with the Middle Ages is superficial. It would be better if the author is more serious. I am more particular about historical articles, and I can write poorly, but you can't cheat. I hope the author can find and solve this problem early on.

I read the content, and please allow me to make some suggestions: 1. Never consider reform. When you are in charge of your own affairs, and the protagonist is a beneficiary class who carries out revolution, there may be something wrong with your brain. Moreover, if you want to revolution, it will touch the cake of the entire aristocratic class. What you have to face is the backlash of the entire class. It is not just killing a few nobles or kings. 2. The emergence of gunpowder will also be very unrealistic. I have always felt that those who can travel back in time and tinker with gunpowder by themselves are simply nonsense. Unless the protagonist specializes in this line of work, and in a realistic situation, it is impossible to produce gunpowder quickly and then directly put it into actual combat. It is unrealistic. This is just my personal opinion, and I just want to seek common ground while reserving differences. After all, the subject matter is difficult to write. I have one last small opinion. Can the title not use so many Chinese allusions? I just feel like it's a little bit dramatic, so just play with it in moderation, but if you play it too much, it feels a little weird...

After reading the first few chapters, I felt pretty good. The protagonist and supporting characters' IQs were barely online. There are few books about history, and only a few about Britain. I hope to keep it Some suggestions 1. Outline issue, I feel that the writing is a bit messy, I hope the author can sort out the outline 2. Time issue, in fact, the time of writing is a bit early, it may be difficult to write in the early Middle Ages, so I hope the author pays attention to information and other issues 3. Speaking sentences, although the author has good segmentation, single sentences still seem a bit long, making it uncomfortable to read

I would like to give a suggestion to the author: delete the single chapters about asking for leave in the main text on the same day they are published. The single chapters from January are left until now and it is very disruptive to read the book. It's best to delete the single chapters where you asked for leave before, otherwise new people will easily think you are unstable and run away when they see the old person asking for leave.

It's natural to have bad grades, but when you write and read in the West, there is such an obvious oriental flavor.

There is no sense of immersion, the characters have no emotions, and the thinking of the characters is like forcing Western aboriginals into Eastern thinking, which is totally out of character.

I just checked the map on Baidu

Novels written by P Club players are rare😄

The biggest problem is that the battle is too simple. Twenty of the original team of seventy or eighty people died and only fifty people were left. How about stealing from a team of three hundred people who didn't die? There seem to be nearly a hundred more written after the war. It's like I deliberately wrote some soldiers to death to avoid people saying that the war is immortal, and then continued to use Wushuang without any impact.

Essex is not that challenging. The King of Northumbria who killed Rollo should be changed to "The King of Northumbria doesn't want to be Snow Eagle"

This is smaller than a Japanese village battle, right? The count only has a few hundred soldiers.

It doesn't look like the Middle Ages at the beginning. The nobles in the Middle Ages were not so polite. Like the 17th and 18th centuries.

The red is the offensive line of the Kent army, and the blue is the defensive line and offensive line of the Middlesex garrison. The Kentish army at this battle numbered about six hundred, and the Middlesex garrison about four hundred. The cross in the picture is the position of the horse in the article.

The Royal House of Essex, during the Norman Invasion?