Yang Shen Champion Hou

Can't the harem of the champion prince be kept😁 In this book, opening a harem is not called opening a harem, it is called respecting the original work🤓

For the purpose of commenting, I will give you a monthly ticket. If you want to write about Yang Shen, can you change the role or create an original one? Champion Hou was a child of luck before he met the protagonist, and he is completely the template of the protagonist. If you write him so miserable, people who have read the original work will be very upset.

Yang An is Long Aotian, not a loser, but the plot behind it looks okay

I haven't read it yet, but I read the introduction. Based on the luck of the champion and the speed of cultivation, shouldn't he just hang out in Yangshen for a few years, become a grand master or a martial saint, and then start to travel through the world? The world in the introduction, I personally think, Except for one or two, the others are of no use to him. The mortal treasures of Xuantian, the medicinal materials of Doupo, the study of bloodline, magical beasts, strange fires, various divine materials that cover the sky, the reference of skills, holy weapons, imperial weapons, weapon training methods, other worlds feel really useless, Jiuding The spirit of the North Sea in the world is useful for reference in martial arts. It can cultivate a large number of subordinates. If you get the key thing, you can cultivate tens of thousands at once. If the world of Zhetian does not involve the fairy realm, it feels similar to the world of Yangshen, and it has the expressive power of the emperor's soldiers. , Stronger than the Yangshen weapons in the Yangshen world, there is no difference between the Yangshen or Shattering Vacuum and the Great Emperor, each has its own advantages and disadvantages, like the Jiu Shu world, the origin world, and the Chinese story world, if it does not involve the heaven and no gods appear, it will be like that 🤫

I remember that the champion in Yangshen is very talented. Why do you authors like to force levels?

Those who criticize the protagonist and take Uncle Jiu as his disciple know nothing. Uncle Jiu, as the Saint Master of the Ten Thousand Worlds, has produced many supreme giants. Yang Shen's cultivation system is just a rudiment. The golden finger is to be a disciple honestly and strive to be the junior disciple of those big guys.

The protagonist has traveled through time and become a champion, so what does he care about? The champion has a large harem, besides Han Bingxin, there are Ouyang Qian, Mo Xiaojie, and Huang Yanyan. Doesn't the protagonist accept all of them? Isn't the highlight of being a champion a harem and inventions, and breaking the fate of becoming a boy who gave away treasures to Hong Yi, and achieving the other side? I hope the author can put more effort into the world of Yang Shen, and don't write too superficially. The world he travels through should be of a higher level and more famous, and the world he travels through should not be too low in power and not many people know about it.

The book is good, but is this what the author calls a cool article? Getting injured before each time traveling is still very deliberate. It's good that you can save your life by traveling multiple times, but does it have to be done only when a life is needed? Every time the energy is full for the number of time travels, the enemy will come. Can't it be said that after the number of time travels is full, the energy will be traveled to improve the cultivation level? Maybe the protagonist is afraid of revealing that he has the ability to time travel, but there can't be someone around the protagonist every time, right? And it's only been one day since I traveled back to the main world.

I don't understand. The Yang Shen system is not low. Even if you travel through life and death, the author puts the protagonist in the world of Uncle Jiu. This has been a routine for many years. After all, Uncle Jiu's Saint Master of All Realms is famous and spreads all over the world. The system of Uncle Jiu's world allows the protagonist to step on ghosts, immortals, punch, martial arts, and kick the Creator. And you have nothing to do with asking Uncle Ninth to be your disciple. This is an old routine from many years ago. My world's Yangshen system is no longer good. And your Uncle Jiu world has more than 40 chapters in one writing. Can it end quickly?

I remember if the champion had a bunch of beautiful wives and concubines,,,

If you are writing about a champion, you must have a harem, otherwise you won't respect the original work.

I remember that the champion in Yangshen liked to hold meetings. I asked the author to describe the meeting process in detail, as well as the posture, expression, voice and smile. Subscribing to collect and reward is not a problem! 😏😏😏😏

Yang An, luck, inexplicably thought of something strange

Every time I read the plot about Uncle Jiu in the novel, I feel that the literary talents and Qiu Sheng who exist for the sake of comedy in the movie should commit suicide on their own in the real time-travel world, right? Everything has no importance, and the dual quotient is so low that there is no lower limit. Whether it is secular power or strange power, he should be killed several times. Anyway, I feel disgusted when I see these two guys!

In the original book, Yang An has been at the peak of martial arts for more than two years, and the protagonist has been practicing for at least seven or eight years, which is comparable to human immortals. It feels like it is a bit suppressing for the protagonist to upgrade. It feels like we have to wait for Hong Yi to accumulate a lot of experience before the protagonist can advance faster. Can't he advance faster? Also, looking at the performance of the Divine King Body, the Heaven-Shading Dao King is about the same as the Peak Martial Saint, so the Yang Shen is probably comparable to the Red Dust Immortal. It's obvious from the performance that the king is at least a human being.

The start of this dungeon is not only awkward but also silly 😰

If the champion doesn't play poker, is he still the champion? 🙂 If the heroine of the original plot falls in love with someone else, will it count as cheating?

This is the first time I've seen someone write a fanfic about Dreaming into God's Machine

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