Xiuxian: Everything Is Wrong with the Heroine

I have been following the reading, and I feel that the conflict in the later plot is not intense, it is too bland, and not as attractive as the previous one

One: Unparalleled appearance Two: The eternal blessing of the goddess of luck Three: The body is always eighteen years old Four: Mind reading Five: Secondary development of the body Six: IQ increased by 50% Seven: Immune to any negative effects Eight: Can communicate freely with any non-human creature Nine: Immortality Ten: Every 10 likes on your option increases the chance of choosing another option

It's quite funny. I just hope that the dragon slayer will not become a dragon in the end. I complained about the original male protagonist taking a harem, but in the end, what I did was the same as the male protagonist. Those women were attacked just by listening to their voices. That is not essentially the same as being taken into a harem by the original male protagonist in the original plot.

You are so good. This book successfully persuaded me to quit because the main character is bald.

This kind of subject matter is now a waste of time.

It feels like a wholesale article written by a studio

Why does every book have to have a sister? ! ! ! ! Regardless of urban, fairy tale, martial arts, history, and fan fiction, every novel has a sister. Can't there be a novel without a sister? 😡😡😡

As mentioned, this is a supplementary building. If you want to complain or vent your emotions, please build your own building to avoid me accidentally deleting it one day. Called countless wave dragons to make up names. Because the names were chosen too randomly, Zhang San, Li, Si Wang and Wu ran away overnight. Dragon name rules! Villain (actually the decent): name, simple character design, gender (not too long, otherwise the water content cannot be controlled) Decent (let's just call it the Emperor of Heaven faction): Same as above. Others (demons, ghosts, etc.): Same as above. If you feel that the comment area limits your talents, please join the group, just join a group!

I have read ten chapters so far and it feels like I am dancing on a plot I hate. This book is really not for me.

How did a noble family in feudal society manage to scold immortal cultivators for sucking the blood of ordinary people? Didn't he know that he was also a vampire? This wave of double-standard plot is really a bit confusing

The sister is very stiff. The protagonist has traveled through time and is not his real sister. The protagonist is obsessed with her. At the beginning, he said that he cannot go home because of her. After reading more than twenty chapters, I feel that the protagonist is just a supporting character, the real protagonist is the group of heroines, and the protagonist is just a puppet. This system makes people feel uncomfortable when they travel through time inexplicably and are forced to do certain things. After a hard day, reading this novel again makes me feel tired

The voice flow is the most mind-blowing genre I have ever seen, and I see no one that can survive the second chapter.

The language is too vulgar and I can't appreciate it. Swearing people in life may be simple and enjoyable, but writing it in a novel... Feels too awkward Everything the heroine hears when she opens and shuts is swearing 😂 And the heroine's words and deeds are not like women, they are just as foul-mouthed Is the author trolling people online every day...

The author is wrong to follow the trend. The first author to write about this kind of subject has always written about how tragic the death of the protagonist is. He will deliberately avoid the specific emotional issues between the heroine and the original protagonist. The author's writing is a poisonous point for this kind of article. It is equivalent to the heroine having been taken in by the original protagonist without the protagonist's knowledge. And it is voluntary. The protagonist does not do anything. It is as clear as a slander. Obviously the plot has collapsed, but I still have to torture myself. Originally, writing on this subject is a cool article. Writing like this means that the author has given up the core for the sake of creativity. This book will probably be very interesting if you can read the back. But the early processing is really not good. I see many similar books with similar problems. I am not happy. The author just deletes it if he feels uncomfortable. You don't have to listen to the readers to write a book.

I really don't know what the author's bad taste for baldness is, so why did he insist on writing that the male protagonist is bald? It's still an inexplicable reason, it's hard to understand

To be honest, after reading this book, I feel that I have a few issues that need to be mentioned 1. It's not that exciting. Although some books will suppress it first and then lift it up, but the foreshadowing is too long and then it feels refreshed, and it's not raised high enough, which makes it feel like a sadist. You can see that the difference between the lives of the protagonist and Ye Fan is not a little bit 2 The system plays a role in promoting the development of the plot, but this book has a very small effect, and the plot is not clear enough. If there is a system, it must promote the plot to make the audience feel better, but this book does not. 3. The combat power is not clear. In fact, this problem occurs in ordinary light novels and daily novels, because they do not need to defeat powerful enemies to make the audience feel better. However, the setting of this book is not like the daily novels. The protagonist One Punch Man is similar to the invincible novel, but no one knows every time he exerts his strength. There is no general description of Ye Fan's true strength. It feels like the author himself has not thought about it 4 It can be seen that the author wants to set the protagonist to be an ordinary person living in reality, a person with empathy and his own little selfishness, so he should not set it as growing up in a different world. After all, the protagonist is not very old in his previous life, and people will change. Moreover, after living in a different world for several lives, a normal person is basically reluctant to return to reality and become a social animal when the time comes to wear clothes and eat. 5 As a novel with multiple female protagonists, there are too few interactions with other female protagonists, making it difficult to tell whether they have their own feelings. 6 For a fairy tale novel, the world view must be large, and the world of low-level martial arts can be smaller. It doesn't matter if it focuses on love, hate, and hatred in the world. However, after reading this book, the setting is for medium-level martial arts or even high-level martial arts. I feel that the world view is a bit small, maybe because of the unclear setting of the force value Overall, this book is not very enjoyable as a refreshing novel, but it is too trivial to be considered a refreshing novel. There is too little interaction between the characters and it seems that the IQ is not enough. After several plots, the protagonist has no profit and feels frustrated. My personal opinion is for discussion. Newcomers can ignore it if they see it. After all, everyone has different visions.

I think the author wanted to write an anti-conventional book and then overturned😅

The author's subject matter is good, but it is too messy. The plot is messy, the relationship between the characters is messy, and the dialogue is even messier. It becomes less and less clear as you go on. There is no main line, and it is like the author just writes whatever comes to his mind. The highlight of the subject matter is that the heroines overhear your thoughts, but after going to the palace, he starts to put the cart before the horse. Except for the first heroine, the appearance of other heroines is too abrupt, with insufficient psychological description and insufficient foreshadowing. I hope the author can correct this kind of putting the cart before the horse next time.

Write more s b and have s b

Author, it's okay if you are bald. Don't write the protagonist as bald. If you don't feel involved, you won't be able to watch it.

I bet on a pack of spicy strips, if the author is willing to write about the corrupted dog who broke off the engagement, more people will come to see it. (We need more fun! Fun! Fun!)

This is full of complaints about diaosi style

Garbage, just one word "chaos"

The more I look at the back, the less I understand. It's the same as you🐎Sha Giao Wen. Secondary 2

You, the first heroine, are disgusting.

The writing is so messy, the more you read after chapter 20, the more messy it becomes.

The author has definitely seen Tang Bian, and some contents are 90% similar.

The writing is average, don't read or skip reading

I've read about 210 chapters, and I can only say that the first part was okay, but the later chapters become more confusing.

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