I Was Kidnapped at the Beginning and Became a Berserker

The writing style is not the kind of mindless and cool writing, but has a human touch and a sense of immersion.

Damn, the main character is written like an idiot

Your book is an imitation of Above the Dome. If you imitate, just imitate. It's okay. You can use more golden fingers and describe the character of the protagonist more clearly. You still need to observe the battle scenes. Your writing is a bit awkward. It's better to write in your own style. Writing in someone else's style will eventually lead to collapse.

This book can only be said to be not very good. It looks like he joined the army or something. I don't know what kind of army it is, whether it is ancient or modern, or what the world is. It can be said that it is not very good. This book is either extremely popular, or it is so trash that no one will even read it. This is how a single strong person joins a modern army. You are really awesome.

The rendering of emotions is too deliberate. These need to be laid out slowly step by step, not mentioned all at once. It's like you suddenly lifted me to the top of the building while I was still in the middle of the building. People watching this suddenly were confused.

I've seen Chapter 80, and I'm still in the recruitment stage. How long will it take to lay the groundwork for this? The background of the plot has not yet been revealed