The Virtuous Grandson of Ning Mansion in the Red Mansion

Emmm, to be honest, I didn't watch it until the end of the week. I couldn't stand it until halfway through. What does this book say? Success is also a red building, and failure is also a red building. It is worthy of recognition that the author's writing style is passable, at least it is more satisfactory than that of some great writers. Secondly, the plot arrangement is generally reasonable. He has his own understanding of Red Mansions, which is not completely consistent with the current mainstream Red Mansions. The advantages are probably the same. As for the disadvantages, I will probably list them: 1. There is a bit of literary youth disease, such as the Qin Keqing part, the protagonist tried to stop it, but in the end it still developed according to the original plot; regarding the arrangement of the heroine, many women had a good impression of the protagonist at the beginning, deliberately creating ambiguity, and finally telling you that there is a good match... No matter if it is the single heroine or the harem party, everyone is offended. As for the part about rescuing the Xu family, I suggest you not write it at all, to save some dignity for the Xu family. You have to wait until the female family members are about to be insulted. It is better to cover it up with Chunqiu's writing style, so as not to offend people's appetite, and probably not many people will want to read it. 2. The protagonist is too indecisive. Since he was reborn in the Red Mansion, he naturally knows that Rong Ning's second mansion is basically rotten from the root. Referring to other Red Mansions, basically what should be abolished will be abolished. What about this article? He allowed Jia Zhen to mess around and kept saying that he wanted to separate from Jia's family, but he still couldn't get out of Jia's circle. There is also the corruption of domestic servants, and the final treatment can be said to be painless. Compared with other stories where he should be killed and exiled, the protagonist of this article is really a good person. 3. There are some contradictions in the article. On the one hand, it says that domestic corruption is serious, and there are internal and external troubles. On the other hand, it says that the four emperors of the Great Qian Dynasty were not fatuous and the country was strong... Also, the emperor was written as too weak-minded, cheerful, and too easy to be speculated by his subordinates. Thoughts and policies are basically formulated by Fu Shi. He is not like an emperor who has been in power for 14 years, but sometimes he is unkind and ungrateful, and sometimes he is affectionate and generous. It would be okay if this article positions the emperor as a fatuous emperor. The problem is that the emperor in this article should not be too fatuous. How can I put it this way? It's not unreasonable that the data in this book is not good. The author is a bit self-deprecating. You must know that writing a book at the starting point is just like doing business. You must understand that your book is written for readers. It's okay to write what you like, but there is no need to disgust readers for your own preferences. Also, it feels like the author is dancing with shackles when writing about Red Mansions, unable to break out of the original plot framework. I suggest that it be better to write about fiction directly in the next book. The author is a bit weak in the political field.

I have read the latest chapter of the book from the beginning. Generally speaking, the overall concept is quite acceptable, so I would like to make some suggestions for this book. First of all, there should not be too many female emotional scenes between the main character in the book and Ning Rong, the original Jia family in Red Mansion, because the female channel is already bad at writing stories about relationships. From the fact that there are quite a few books about wearing red written by male channels, it can be seen that it is not advisable to overdo it. Since the male protagonist is set to be a member of the Ning family, he must prepare for the future emperor to liquidate the founding heroes. However, from the current point of view, many of the male protagonist's actions in the book will be used to be liquidated in the future. After all, the male protagonist is not engaged in rebellion. Then there is the characterization and description in the book, which is a bit like a mold. Although this book is based on the structure of Red Mansions, it cannot be written in the same way as the characterizations of traitors and righteousness. After all, some changes must be made. Because I haven't written much about this book yet, I won't interfere with the author's ideas by saying too much. The above comments were made by a reader after reading them. If you don't like them, please don't criticize them. 👍👍🌹😳😳

If Jia Ying and Youshi are in the same room and still drunk, then he has the shame to say Jia Zhen! Look at the serious men in the Red Mansion who are in the same room with women, except for the pink-headed maid, Baoyu is not included! Jia Ying still wants to comfort Youshi, in bed? Nowadays, uncles and sisters-in-law who are slightly sensible will basically avoid it regardless of their age difference! Besides ancient times.

It's really tiring to watch. I'd say the main character's IQ is very modern and commonplace. He would never survive 3 episodes in the ancient officialdom. How will the emperor entrust you with important things in the future? I can guess that what the main character wrote during the imperial examination was nothing more than using modern knowledge about the New Deal to enrich the country. The author estimates that the eight-legged essay has not been reviewed briefly.,,,

I really can't stand it. There are too many descriptions of psychological activities. One chapter is all about my thoughts. The plot arrangement is too unreasonable. I don't know if I want the protagonist to be tough on the Jia people or to be gentle. I can't get up or down. I always thought that I could make Jia Zhen and Jia She in just one or two sentences. Such habitual criminals have clearly arranged their arrangements, and they are all afraid of you. You have to understand that the identity of the protagonist is not close to Jia Qiang, but he is the same generation as Jia Zhen. Jia Zhen not only has a title, but also an official position, and is also a clan leader. Alas, I recently read the Red Mansion Book that Wan Tianqing just read, and you made it impossible for me to continue reading.

I've only read a few chapters, and I just want to say no matter who he is, whoever dares to dig up the graves of my relatives and sleep in the coffins of my ancestors, I will kill him at all costs, but this protagonist actually let him go.

I immediately threw up after reading Chapter 22! Directly persuade him to quit and talk about honor with a current court elder! Demeaning the noble class to nothing! In ancient times, the noble military interest class was the most powerful supporter of imperial power! In the early stages of all dynasties, the noble military interest class was the dominant class, which stabilized the country. Even if a rebellion occurred, it could be quelled efficiently! It is said that the dynasty perished due to financial and other reasons in the later period, but it is impossible for the dynasty to be poorer than when it was founded! So the essence is that the nobles and nobles are killed, and the interest class of honorable nobles and the country will be destroyed only when the interests of the nobles and the country are gone! The civil service system means that whoever has breasts is a mother. It doesn't matter whoever becomes the emperor. In the late dynasty, the civil servants' party interest class often dominates!

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[A brief explanation about the age settings of the Red Mansion fandom and the male protagonist in this book]: I believe many people have a certain understanding of the ages of the main characters in the original work. The author has made a slight change in the ages of several characters. Daiyu is set to 10~11, and the others are listed in sequence. 😀The protagonist Jia Ying is set to be 16, and she will be 17 after taking the imperial examination after the New Year. 😀You set it at 25~27. 😀Jia Rong and Jia Qiang are similar to the protagonist. 😀 Jia Lian is a few years older than Jia Ying. Wang Xifeng is the same. 😀 Yuanchun is around 20-22. 😀 Regarding Jia Ying's origin, the author inserted a setting. It will be revealed slowly in the text. 😀This article will not deny the Jia family, because having shortcomings is the normal state of the Hou family nobles. 😀

Alas, it's hard to explain in one sentence. I can only say that this book has achieved its current results because of the benefits of the Red Mansion.

The most disgusting thing is that Jia Zhen is allowed to climb into Ke Qing's bed. Jia Ying is just like this, a big trash.

I immediately began to wonder, is this heroine Lin Daiyu? ? ? I read carefully what Cao Xueqin wrote. Can anyone like Lin Daiyu's character? Of course, Jia Baoyu is not a good person, he is an old scumbag (reviewed from a modern point of view). Moreover, this book has a mythological background, and the Crimson Pearl Immortal Grass and the Divine Ying Waiter must be dealt with together. It will look awkward if you throw away this big background. Of course, there is one thing to say. I basically looked at the first three pictures and they were pretty good. They just added a white bandit background that I don't understand.

Maybe the front doesn't look good. . But the back is quite nice.

It's true that now all kinds of monsters and monsters dare to write about Red Mansions. Some of them have not even read the book Red Mansions and yet they dare to write about it.

Basically, everyone who wants to visit Red Mansion has to go to Lin Daiyu. I really don't like Lin Daiyu that much. Marry, Xue Baochai, or Qin Keqing. Don't write it randomly. Unless the protagonist is an emperor, some women cannot be concubines. Most of the introductions require all of them. Not being an emperor is unrealistic. Moreover, there is another problem in the Red Mansions novels. The protagonist must be young and close in age. I think those characters are sick and easily become high officials at the age of fifteen or sixteen. The Red Mansions novels are all There are quite a lot of problems with this. The protagonist at the beginning is the original one. Take Er Baozi as an example. He can be six years older or more so that it won't look awkward. It is logical that the protagonist is seventeen or eighteen years old when he becomes an official when he is six years older than them. Six years older can marry Qin Keqing or go to Xue Baochai. I remember that Xue Baochai is a little older than Er Baochai. The protagonist happens to be twenty and he is fifteen, which is better than the protagonist at the beginning who is the same age as them.

The recent ones, especially those written by Li Wan, have a very poor look and feel. And for the original ones, why did you write emotional scenes if you couldn't be with the protagonist? It takes a long time to write to disgust readers, right?

Putting a female protagonist in the Red Mansion is equivalent to putting a general in the Three Kingdoms to fuck the Second Master Guan. That is courting death. The Red Mansion fanfic has an original background, but the original female protagonist pales in comparison and it is difficult to stand up. It is recommended to write less.

He was so poisonous that he wanted to leave the capital, but he actually asked Big Face Bao to help Lin Daiyu. You have traveled through time. You don't know what virtue Big Face Bao has?

Feng Guan

Personally, I think there are only a few good-looking ones in Red Mansions, including Red Mansions, Chun in Red Mansions, and Wu Zhuangyuan in Red Mansions. These protagonists are all decisive in killing, and they are not so disgusting that they kneel down and lick the novel after reading the original. To be honest, if you don't become an emperor or a king, it is impossible for some of those women to be concubines, and some of them are just obscene. Is it possible to do all of them? Is it possible for people to be wives to become concubines? Women only feel good when they are famous. The ones that look good to me are like Red Mansion Chunli De and Yi Ziyu. I think they are very good. They are original characters. There is no need to worship everyone in Red Mansions. Besides, except for the main women such as maids, it is impossible to be concubines. Unless you become the emperor and the king.

I finally came across a copy of "Yang Dai Yichai". Now most of the websites are based on looks. I want both of them. I don't know if they understand the difference between Shuji De and Yong Xucai. "No matter how ruthless you are, you can be charming". His face is pretty but not human. Cold-blooded and ruthless (see the death of Jin Chai to excuse Mrs. Wang), one is unscrupulous and the other insists on the bottom line, what kind of person is matched with what kind of person, and he doesn't think carefully about it. How can he be praised by everyone and everyone is amiable if he is as cold and cold as "a noble man in the mountain with crystal clear snow"? How much money was spent, how much thought was spent, how many people were conquered? If you really eat all kinds of food, people with seven emotions and six desires are stupid NPCs who can increase their favorability points at will. When the experienced Jianghu Jia Mu commented on the twelve zodiac signs corresponding to the twelve hairpins, she saw through it at a glance: it meant that a visiting relative's lady was a rat who wandered around all day long with evil intentions. Now when I talk about White Lotus and Green Tea Girl, I gnash my teeth in hatred. Who can write "The good wind will send me to the blue clouds by force" doesn't feel scary? Everything is about slick management, hypocrisy, cheating, and the pursuit of fame and fortune. It would be so exciting to live with a cunning, hypocritical and utilitarian Cao Cao all day long. No wonder the ending of Guiyou Stone Story is to remarry Jia Yucun. Many judgments and comments have already spoiled it. Jin Yu plots to suppress Mu. Shi Qianmeng, in contrast, Yongxu, who is sincere in his love and nature, seeks benevolence and benevolence, never joins in with others, and has to fight even before death, is so heartbreaking. This kind of ideal personality that is devoted to love does not exist in reality at all, so it creates an unavoidable classic character in the history of Chinese literature. In fact, most people are also very hypocritical. While scolding Bai Lian as disgusting, they lick their faces and admit that green tea smells really good. If you encounter someone like Baochai in the workplace, it is best to stay away from him. To be honest, he is not only annoying but also afraid of him.

Why don't you just marry Lin Xue and have a common room with her? You were very specific at the beginning, but then you actually start to set up the fifth server? I don't know what you are thinking? When you start to engage in Li Wan, there will be no clan. You are no different from Jia Zhen, Jia Rong, Jia Lian and others. It's better to start a harem openly from the beginning. At this time, you can choose according to your personal preference and don't have to worry about ethics and morals, instead of acting like I'm bullying my wife for their own good. The author's amateurism can be seen from the results of the treatment of Qin Keqing and Li Wan.

It is a natural problem of position. It is impossible for the civil service group to trust a top nobleman (wouldn't it be bad to knock you down? Why should we coexist with you?). The result can only be dissatisfaction on both sides, and the civil servants will only use your identity to suppress other nobles and lean towards him. At that moment, you are just a piece of toilet paper. After wiping your buttocks, you will be thrown away when you have no use value. You will never be able to hold your head up for the rest of your life. When all the nobles have been pressed down, even if you are not liquidated as a member of the government, you will have to say hello to every seventh-grade civil servant!

After staying up all night, I was very happy to see that it was past four in the morning. It's a pity that when I got to the last chapter, I realized that the update had been stopped for two years. It's a pity.

I remembered why I didn't read this book. Last time I saw the protagonist's family's high-level results. There were only three people traveling across provinces, one old and one young, they were 6.

To be honest, novels about time travel to ancient times can only be used as entertainment. Really wear it. If it is a chaotic time for the common people, but it is a peaceful time, just wait and see if there is a chance to make a fortune💰. If you are a wealthy aristocrat, you will live a life of being waited on. If you want to achieve the social life of modern China in that era, it is impossible. You are challenging the general trend and system of that era. People are greedy. Even if you find a group of people to rebel successfully, it is impossible to change the lives of that class. People they will not allow will not think about it as long as they stand on the top of the mountain.

The writing style in the first few chapters was pretty good, but after I came to Beijing, I became wiser and my writing style dropped a lot.

After reading the last chapter, I found out about the eunuch

Can the author take some responsibility for saying this? At least it's finished.