The Girlfriend Who Doesn't Play by the Rules

It's a very good novel, with a good plot, but it's updated with some annoying parts, and some pleasant parts. When I first read the book, I thought it was a novel (novel) because of the existence of the bonded spirit, which was obviously a refreshing point. However, I thought wrong. When I first read the book, I thought it was a campus romance (novel) because Xun Nai and Ye Cheng are in the same university, and college students are free to fall in love. However, I thought wrong. When I first read the book, I thought it was a martial arts novel (novel) because Ye Cheng is a martial arts instructor, but... However, tmd, I was still wrong. That's outrageous. These plots are obviously there, but there is no feeling. I wonder if other readers feel the same. Above

Author, I really admire you for updating every day. This is a fish. The plot about the review (Kazuki) is actually quite classic (Japanese), but it feels too sudden, especially with the plot (Xingsha), which makes things worse. Moreover, this does not seem to have any effect on the main line. It is mostly used to shape the image of Kazuki, Chie and the committee. In short, this is a bit of a waste of time. The reason why I say this is not to give pointers or anything, but... I suggest that when creating characters, just follow the main line naturally. Who is Qianhui and who is Kazuki? After writing it later, we will naturally feel these intimately. What is worthy of recognition is that the dialogue skills are indeed wonderful. The insidiousness hidden in the words of each faction is highlighted. The content of the dialogue is addictive.

I saw it in the group and came to support it

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It must be a harem! By the way, the author came to the website to sign a contract and will notify you~

Carefully post the photos of Kaoru Nai in my heart

It's just that the season may not be suitable...

Take it, author. 😏

The status changes so quickly, too fast!

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I've read a few chapters and commented. It's well written. Please give me more support and let the author make more updates 🤭🤭 I usually read the finished book and it's my first time to catch up on the update. Cheers, author!

The writing is good but not colorful enough

Come support, I will give you three consecutive reviews, hope it will sell well! Take off!

Feel. . . No. . . Very enjoyable to watch

😭Eunuch?