Dongzhang in the Divine Eagle

After reading it, I like the style, but the character of the protagonist is a bit regrettable, leaving room for leeway

I wonder who the heroine is in this book? If you haven't decided yet... Brother, do you dare to challenge the heroine Guo Fu😏

It has amazed me for 20 years.

The early stage is too boring. If I jump directly to Chapter 65 and start reading, except that I don't know where the Nine Yang Magic comes from, it will not affect the reading at all.

If this book were to be renamed, it would probably be called Japanese Ronin Wandering in the Divine Eagle.

The writing is very good, especially Xiao Longnu, who is very immersive. The protagonist's character is also good, and there are two little girls. It is a very good novel. The only shortcoming is that Dongzhang and Xiao Longnu progress too fast. In short, after reading this novel, I accidentally went back to watch the TV series. The Divine Condor, especially after Xiao Longnu got involved with Yang Guo, I felt that Xiao Longnu was too tragic, with all kinds of twists and turns, injuries until the finale, so I really didn't like it when I saw Yang Guo. Everything was caused by meeting Yang Guo, and Xiao Longnu's originally peaceful life was broken. It was pitiful and sad. If you can suggest me to write about Yang Guo in this book, so as not to give birth to a son. . . This book is very good. Xiao Longnu is protected meticulously by Dongzhang. Although there are some ups and downs, hardships and exciting crises, they can be easily resolved. It is not as heart-wrenching as the original book. Good luck to the author. I sneer at what other readers said about the word water. What's the point of a novel with only one story about fighting and killing? It's impossible to read two of the three chapters about fighting. Personally, I prefer watching small episodes. How can a person in the world not have some small episodes? , There is also a side adventure mission when playing the game, it is boring to keep doing the main story 😆

Little Dragon Girl

It was well written before. In order to make the story more reasonable, I forced Dongzhang to put down his IQ and weapons to fight a group of people in unarmed combat. It has reduced his intelligence.

It feels like everyone is acting like a fool, all of them have lost their wits.

This book has too much trolls and too much delay.

There is a problem with the timeline of this book. I suggest the author read the Condor and the Condor carefully before writing and straighten out the timeline, otherwise it will look very messy!

This is just a bunch of shit. I feel like my keyboard is dirty when I scold you.

Three golden chapters? I'll be gone within two chapters. I won't say that people who do outdoor sports have no food when they travel across time. They have been fooling around for three days. What did you think of the name Dong Zhang?

The characters in Jin Yong's works are all extremely selfish people. They only care about their own inner feelings and don't care whether it will hurt other people. People like Zhang Wuji, Duan Yu, and Xiao Feng always do whatever they think.

Did you buy all the previous chapters? Chapter 20 or 30 clearly feels like it has dropped from the level of a high school student to the level of an elementary school student. It doesn't look like it was written by one person.

The protagonist has no resources, so he practices the art of drawing swords by himself. I hope there won't be any scenes involving the sword-playing skills later on, that would be very embarrassing. Because the sword-drawing technique is used for sneak attacks during duels, after the duel begins, before the opponent draws the sword, draw the sword and strike as quickly as possible. If the opponent has already drawn the sword, there is no advantage in the sword drawing technique. Also, Iai is Iai, and Batojutsu is Batojutsu. Iai is used when there is a sudden fight between two forces in the house. While kneeling, draw your sword and strike as fast as possible, then stand up as fast as possible. Therefore, whether it is Bato Jutsu or Iai, they are both suitable for sneak attacks, but not suitable for frontal combat.

You've read Chapter 45 and haven't entered the plot yet? What kind of magical writing is this?

Write Yang Guo like a fool😥

Dragon Girl

Evaluate it. The author of this book, a Japanese ronin, has a very serious character. Be careful, a good fandom must look like a Japanese.

You don't need to compare some of the contents in the book with our real history. Please note that this is not a historical novel. You can treat it as a fiction. The Song Dynasty is just a reference for background. Many details do not need to be taken too seriously. Thank you.

Very nice, please update more. I finished reading it in a while.

No, there are so many chapters in this book)?

It's really good. It's the best Jin Yong fanfic I've read so far. The relationship between the characters is well handled and the characters are well designed. I look forward to the author's new book.

I like this Shendiao fan. The writing is really great. Great support from the author. I look forward to your new work 🤭

A very special protagonist. Although it may be niche, I like this type. Come on

Don't let it end. Although good things are always short-lived, I still hope to continue writing.

Ouyang Feng, with Jiuyin, adopted son, and power, inexplicably stared at Guo Jing, the victim who owed the life of the Seven Devils and refused to trouble him. . . After the protagonist signed the contract, he forced himself into the Riddler. The protagonist of the original novel, Tuan, was wise and forced to cause misunderstandings and deaths. . . It is completely separated from the person who acted step by step, had a conscience, and protected family and friends before signing the contract. . Guo Jing, the commander of Wu Mu's suicide note, was everywhere, but Xiangyang was still able to persist inexplicably. . . I haven't finished reading it yet. Looking at the title at the end, it's quite poisonous. In the end, it should have been a misunderstanding between Jiangzhi and Wu Jue who forcibly provoked the war and then ended. Yideng's family seemed to be dead.

I think the writing is really good. Although some of the plots are not satisfactory, it is really good-looking. There are only a few books that I can order all of them. This is one of them. I have been resting for too long. Please do some extra stories to explain to everyone and start a new book.