The Age of Global Star Lords

Machinery generally develops towards two extremes. The Dyson sphere or Death Star, a macroscopic megastructure, represents the pinnacle of materials and structure. Microscopic machines—intelligent atoms, even intelligent electrons, protons, and neutrons—are almost magical. The mass-energy field creations of the energy manipulation series are like gods.

The subject matter is good, but unfortunately, the author's depiction of human civilization is riddled with flaws and plot holes. Humanity's current ability to withstand the endless Void swarms relies on the advanced civilization developed by the Star Lords, but not everyone can become a Star Lord.

Why give me poison when I have such a great subject?

I really dislike novels that deliberately put the protagonist in the spotlight. In reality, everyone has their own life. Who would pay attention to someone for no reason?

I'm so upset, I'm posting this specifically to criticize the protagonist, this simp. These days, it's rare to see someone as adept at licking women as the protagonist in this story. If the author wants to attract female readers, they like strong women, not the kind of useless woman in your book who only knows how to accept handouts (meaning she's so far inferior to the male lead that she's…

The idea is good, but it would be even better if the writer had some knowledge of physics, chemistry, biology, and mechanics. Right now, it feels like something a middle school student would write, and since there's no internet at home, the worldview is quite disorganized.

The idea is clearly good, but it's still stuck in the low-level "pretending to be weak while actually being strong" trope from over a decade ago. Please look at the top dozens of bestsellers; who's still mindlessly suppressing the protagonist? Trying to emulate those ancient masters and thinking you can write a book for a lifetime? Do you even have that qualification? It would be a miracle if this book wasn't abandoned, or maybe one day you'll just give up and leave it unfinished.

There's something a bit off about this. If you're going to write it like this, you shouldn't have written about the original owner being possessed. I think it would be better to just write about being reincarnated as a baby. Otherwise, when I read the novel from the perspective of his parents and his girlfriend, I'll feel that the male protagonist is really despicable.

Pure wish-fulfillment novel. No levels, no intelligence, just constant killing of opponents far stronger than you, and various absurdities, but it's not bad considering the wish-fulfillment genre. A mindless wish-fulfillment novel with a relatively novel theme. Those who like wish-fulfillment novels might want to give it a try.

After reading about ten chapters, I found the book's synopsis and premise to be excellent, but it has a lot of flaws. The biggest problem is the protagonist's behavior; despite living two lives, he acts like a primary school student. Readers who are adept at survival tactics and quietly developing their strength will likely find it hard to handle.