I Can Practice a Hundredfold

I read "The Story of Demons and Gods" at the age of three, entered the "World of Cultivation" at the age of four, studied "The Way of the Heavenly Sword" at the age of five, practiced the magical skills "Nine Transformations of the True Spirit" at the age of six, "Cultivation of God" at the age of seven, and "Seeking Demons" at the age of eight. After going through the "Nine Tribulations", I finally reached great success at the age of fourteen. "Rise to Fame", everyone knows that at the age of fifteen, he obtained the "Divine Seal Throne", and at the age of eighteen he inherited the "Emperor". From then on, he was "unique in the world" and was called the "Prodigy of the Generation". Because he killed too many people and "stained his life with blood", he was called the "Killing God" by the world. However, the "Shinto" is long. Cultivation is never-ending. Together with the "Six Paths Immortal", "Dao Master", "Xuan Emperor", "Sword Ancestor" and others, I took the "Spirit Boat" and "Wu Po Jiuxiao" to "Douluo Continent" and founded the "Peerless Tang Sect". By chance, the "Martial Tomb" was discovered under a "Blood-stained Totem" in the "Gods and Demons Training Ground", and the "Martial God" inheritance was obtained. Obtained his famous stunt "Universe Origin Art", he wanted to "fight to break the sky", "swallow the starry sky", and "cover the sky" with one hand. Later, he mistakenly entered the "World of Immortality" and caused a huge disaster. He was known by the "Holy King" and led the "War Lord", "Dragon Blood God of War", "Evil King of Another World" and "Crazy God". He also invited several immortal masters from the "Dragon Clan" and came from the "Spiritual Realm". They started a "Shocking War" and "Nine Deaths" with me in the "War Sky Continent", and finally killed you all. However, "Heaven's Ruthlessness" took advantage of the old man's serious injury. They attacked me secretly and brought down the "Heavenly Blood Tribulation". Fortunately, with the help of "The Kind God of Death", I managed to survive. Later, I walked out of the "Tomb of Gods" and created two magical skills "Star Transformation" and "Nine-Star Celestial Technique", which were known to the world and finally became the "Peerless Martial God". Unfortunately, I read this book today. I can't calm down the resentment in my heart, which led to chaos in my true energy, went crazy, and finally fell. I am unwilling to accept it...

After reading it, let's talk about it. I feel like I just don't feel it. How can I put it in writing? Could it have been done better? I could have avoided falling into the cliche. The result is still, and there is still half a step of sword intent. The result is that there are beginners and intermediates. This, this, this, this, this, it doesn't feel good.

I've read five pages of the first chapter and would like to share my thoughts. 1. At the beginning, the father of the family leader disappears and then breaks off the engagement. It is a very mature and very persuasive way of writing. 2. The system has to come out at this node, and there is still a choice. If you don't retreat, it will be gone. If you retreat, it will be activated. This is even more painful. 3. Activate the system and walk through the basic steps to get started. It doesn't seem like much at first glance, but you are the young master of a family! You came with a mature three-dimensional outlook! Have you been waiting for Golden Finger for more than ten years? ! Even if you practice a little bit every day, it's more than just getting started!

If you don't want to write an emotional drama, then don't write a heroine. If you stick to chapter 13, you'll die of poison.

I come first Do whatever you want!

Antique literature with new golden fingers

It's just plain, this book doesn't taste like much, it just feels like it's just plain

Forcing the heroine to compete is really a vulgar old routine, just like a running account

Not to mention anything else, the realm of Sword Intent is as follows: Half-step. Early half-step. Mid-half-step.

Um, is the part about the Yaowu Princess meant to disgust people?

Maybe this book is for eunuchs. Baipai is very good at practicing. You should choose to turn on this setting instead of using Baipai at every turn. After reading a few pictures, you can't stand it. You go and see if there is any breakthrough in cultivating at every turn. In the end, it all comes to nothing.

It's too conservative, and it's a hundred times less likely to achieve the effect described in the article.

If you can't write an emotional drama, you don't have to write it. If an important female character falls in love with the male protagonist regardless of the few steps, it will reduce the quality of the character, reduce it to a kind of writing material, and lose the qualification to come alive.

The dialogue between the characters is emotionless, lifeless, and a bit embarrassing. Why are the beauties sticking pig feet on their bodies is not written out. It seems very abrupt and lacks a sense of substitution.

I only insisted on reading to Chapter 14

It is true that the writing and plot feel too bland, and the necklace one is too forced, like forced cheating. And why Qin Yan is the heroine, I don't understand, Yaowu is not better than her? She is a blank slate, and you can make up your own personality and hobbies. Is there any more suitable heroine than this? There are also map changes as the strength increases, the sword intention takes shape, the strength increases, and the relationship between the characters really feels too bland.

I just want to know, does the protagonist rely on imagination to practice? I haven't even seen the exercises before, and I keep making breakthroughs.

After reading the first chapter, I knew what this book was about. Is this book a hundred times bigger? Did the author add ten thousand less in front?

It rises too fast and makes people uncomfortable to watch.

People who eat people, no matter what the reason, have no right to live.

This upgrade goes so fast! It's boring to move up to the next level before you have a good understanding of the power system.

I have read this book 20 years ago. Even the articles are exactly the same. Qin Yan will be reborn in the same era as the male protagonist, and then will he meet the woman who can't get you from before? The name is the same as that novel.

I believe the author can at least write better than this one! This book makes me, who has a high level of acceptance, almost unable to bear it!

This is supposed to be a harem story. I suggest that the number of female characters should not exceed 5, otherwise it will be easy to lose control.