Hamster's Sanctuary

I evaluate this novel and hope that the author will not blame it.                                                                                                       .

The author's thinking is still too narrow. If you don't have enough money, you can take out loans with high interest rates or online loans. You can go to large companies to buy food, medicines and medicines in bulk and then pay for them (you just need to get them and trust them anyway). You have six months to go abroad to buy weapons. Anyway, there is space. What are the ghost towns above the shelter and air-raid shelters underground.

The writing is quite to my liking, but the updates are a bit slow. I hope the author will not write monster-fighting and upgrading novels in the future. Many shelter-type novels have nothing to do with shelters in the later stages. I feel that focusing on describing how to develop, grow and strengthen shelters is the most enjoyable part of this type of novel. Come on.

I feel that this protagonist has extraordinary things from the beginning, a portable space. As long as he demonstrates it, at least his parents can believe it. In this way, the resources for early development will be more sufficient. I can't figure out why I didn't tell my parents, and the protagonist has traveled back. Will it cause phenomena like butterfly wings to advance the end of the world? Tell your parents, at least they will not let them have an accident without knowing it.

It is not recommended to watch, it is not recommended to watch, after watching Chapter 60, the pig's feet just tricked the parents into the shelter, and no explanation was ever given, and it was just there.

I thought it was an interstellar hamster, but it turned out to be just a post-apocalyptic farming article

I can't bear the thought of buying 4 knives for 50,000 yuan.

I saw some people saying that just spending 10,000 yuan to buy a vacuum machine, First of all, let me explain that my family used to be a processing factory for rice, millet and other grains. The cost of this is much higher than expected. Normally, you can earn a few yuan from a bag of rice. The rest of the money was earned from the grain and oil store. A normal 50-pound woven bag costs about 40 cents a piece if it has a customized pattern, or about 30 cents if it is not customized. We are talking about wholesale here. Needless to say, the vacuum ones are more expensive. A 20-pound bag costs about 8-9 cents. (I don't know the specific situation now, but rice is much more expensive than before.) It has been explained here that we have negotiated with the processing factory and bought the rice almost at cost price. However, due to the problem of vacuum packaging, the protagonist has to find many stores, so the cost of these bags and labor costs are definitely paid by the protagonist. In addition to dozens of tons of rice, flour, grains, etc., 300,000 May be a lot more. But it's definitely not as cheap as you think.

This kind of is suitable for cooperation with the country

Really! Don't get your hopes up.

I found that he didn't know how to live his life. Don't you know that there is a kind of person in this world called a doomsday phobic patient? You can search the doomsday forum, where there are many senior talents on alcohol engines, how to make firearms and weapons, and how to generate electricity. They can develop from scratch to modern technology. You really should take a look. You don't even know how to use outdoor facilities. How do you write doomsday texts? Moreover, there are contradictions in the book. It is the end of the world and everyone is huddled in the base. So, how does the government control it? Is the Internet disconnected? Is there any problem with the satellite? What is the intensity and scope of government control? Which places have fewer monsters and which places have more monsters? Have you ever considered stealing? There is a storage space that you don't know how to use. Did you know that in every city, there is a place called the Disaster Prevention Material Reserve Center? You can steal it. The place is monitored and destroyed with a gun in advance. It is basically yours.

I bought weapons, but I didn't think of buying protective equipment. You can use crafts to buy armor.

Shelter Design

A eunuch? It seems that I have another sin, sin, sin.

Why don't you buy a professional off-road vehicle? It's better to replace the engine and beam than just replace the vehicle. Cars like the Dakar, and cars like the Siberian. Isn't that better than a big card? It's really not possible to use a big bicycle

The content between chapters is discontinuous, a bit confusing, and the content is often irrelevant. The writing is not smooth enough, as if I just write whatever comes to my mind, which makes it a bit confusing and feels like a novice enjoying himself. Evaluation: Some newbies with creative ideas, a little too young.

The way you write is wrong. If there is a country, then cooperate with the country. Otherwise, you will not be able to maximize your interests and there will be problems in everything you write. If you write about an individual, then don't think about other things. You must have a mentality that people will be destroyed if they don't do it for themselves. The world is doomed and you can't achieve great things if you still worry about the future.

It's poisonous. It costs 50,000 to buy a few knives. I bought a weapon before I even wrote my horoscope. It took 6 months.

The writing is okay, but there are some contradictions in the background design, such as the issue of national control. In the case of invasion by foreign enemies, the possibility of national collapse is not high, but transportation is cut off. It is likely that there are many hills, and there are many supplies that are stable, and there are few supplies that are chaotic. There are also officially organized production and raw material issues.

The front is fine, but how can a hamster keep so many people? Is it still a hamster?

In the end of the world, the official will still care about your loan repayment. I am really speechless. Even if it does, do you know what "out of reach" means? . . .

The protagonist is a complete waste, even if he is reborn. There are several pictures at the beginning. Luo Liba Suo

Your son, who is just waiting to die, says he wants to build a wasteland tourist attraction and spend most of your fortune. Do you think any parent would agree? This is where you can see the quality of this book. It really makes me laugh that you hide the magic of the system without showing it. What the hell are you writing about? The creativity is okay, but the details are too childish.

Author, instead of creating a refugee system, you might as well give the protagonist a spell book so that he can level up, and then try to get 300 of them to be promoted to legend. The faster ones can reach the level of demigod, and then light the divine fire. No matter how powerful the dragon is, the ancient dragon is only the peak of demigod. No matter how powerful the demon is, as long as there is no too powerful demon lord, such as the Balor Balrog who has taken office as the Executioner, it will be fine.

Faster and faster, does it matter whether the settings are reasonable or not? If the setting is reasonable based on reality, then don't write a novel, because nothing you write is reasonable, so it's just a novel for beginners and it's fun to read.

I thought the main character was a hamster

It's really narrow! Coming back so early, while being a hamster, I think I should be a guardian of civilization! Over the years, accumulated by countless people, the greatest wealth is the fire of civilization, and the fire of civilization is reflected in the collection of books in those libraries, various technologies in various fields, philosophy and poetry, previous history, etc. If I had been so far in advance, I would definitely have to protect civilization!

Where there is magic, there are poisonous gases and all kinds of spells, not to mention dragon breath. What is the point of building a shelter without magic? Don't write an outline? In the first thirty chapters, I have to mention something about magic defense relying on what the system will provide later! Shockingly unexpected

What are you thinking about getting the system five months in advance instead of going to the official? Plus there is still room to prove the authenticity of the matter. Believe it or not, this kind of thing can go directly to the central government.

It can be seen that the author is indeed a newcomer, there are many loopholes and poisonous points, and the logical chain is also somewhat intermittent. The author's biggest problem with light space storage capacity is that the utilization rate is too small. Come on, author