Higher-Dimensional Earth: One Thought to Track, One Thought to Max Out

After seeing the latest chapter, I feel that both the setting and the plot are pretty good, making me want to read more. But the plot still lacks some depth and is a bit shallow. It's too much, and there's no climax. It's just too popular, but not satisfying enough. And it could obviously be written a little more in-depth, and the artistic conception could be laid out a little more, and it could become a very good novel. For example, after the male protagonist has achieved results in the first world, you should take the opportunity to spend some time paving the way for the male protagonist's state of mind and state, and give some growth experiences and growth processes. Then final settlement. In my opinion, the male protagonist's hundred years are simply brushed off, but the most nihilistic way of writing is chosen, which neither brings satisfaction to the readers, but also despises the centuries. The male protagonist is just a person who has lived for more than twenty years. After a hundred years of accumulation, a person must gain something and gain weight. Instead of just falling back into shape after taking a nap. Unless you add a setting to exit the world, the years in the world will be blurred. Maybe someone here has the idea of ​​​​refuting. It's just a simple article. Why do you think so much? Just be funny and pass the time. But only by doing things better can we make progress. Otherwise, you will just stand still and gain nothing. As a reader, I give some feedback after reading, which can also be regarded as giving the author some directions for reflection. Even when the masters in the past wrote short stories, the plot was smooth, the writing style was refreshing, and the ideas were clear. Even if there were constant routines, the plot would definitely grow and gain something every time. This is the reason why they are the masters. Otherwise, everyone can write trivia, so why are they so popular? Routine is one thing, but the setting needs to be self-consistent. Even if the villain is deliberately given a mental aura, he will deliberately weaken this in the plot description, and instead make it more exciting, so that everyone will naturally ignore it. Even if it feels very routine afterwards, it is very refreshing when watching it. Finally, I wish the author will write better and better, and all the friends who read this comment will gain something, have thoughts, and be happy, whether in reading or in life. [If the previous remarks are inappropriate, please comment and correct them]

To be honest, I couldn't stand it after reading more than ten chapters. The opening scene was too big, but the feeling was not written. It looked like the emperor was using a golden pole to carry a golden hoe. Reading this book, I felt as if the protagonist was the only smart person in the world, and everyone else was a fool. Especially when I saw the ninth prince, I really couldn't stand it anymore. I was wondering when children from aristocratic families and ordinary civilians would take the same low-level exam for adult assessment. The resources they enjoy are different, and the requirements are definitely different. In the later stages, it is still possible for common people to compete with aristocratic families on the same stage. As for the early stages, they will not encounter them because the standards of aristocratic families are countless times higher than the standards of ordinary civilians. Like the Ninth Prince, I saw him say that he was already above the second level before reaching adulthood, but in the end he still entered a world where the highest level was only the first level? Are the resources he enjoys in vain? Don't his parents know that he's such a fool? Finally, it's not me who said that you yourself emphasized from the beginning that the high-dimensional earth has been developing for hundreds of thousands of years. The power of high-level powerful men is unfathomable. Doesn't a direct descendant of a fifth-level family have some trump cards? Even if the rank is strictly limited, a high-level strong person can still use the same lower-level rank to exert the strength of the higher rank. Otherwise, how can he be called a strong person? Even if the protagonist has a cheat, even if the protagonist's cheat is really awesome, now is not the time to go head-to-head with the direct descendants of a fifth-level family. How can a level 0 brave person challenge the four kings of the Demon King's army, and most importantly, actually win? So what do you think of this book? I just thoughtlessly said that the protagonist was invincible and pushed him all the way! Everyone calls the main character dad, which is great, the whole book is finished! ! !

For Tianlong, it is basically Wuliangdong Beiming and Lingbo, then Dali's Six Meridians, Murong's Douzuanxingyi and Shenhezhi. For Subduing Dragon, it is included in the Dragon Slaying Knife, but it is not needed. Then there is Shaolin's Yijin Jing, and then go to Xiaoyao Sect to pick it up, and then go to Tianshan. That should be about it. One more thing, I have a relatively high resistance to poison. Some poison spots are not poison spots in my opinion, as long as they are not too outrageous. In my opinion, as long as women's affairs don't develop into the main world, it doesn't matter if they mess around in the dungeon world, as long as they don't be brought to the main world.

It's been hundreds of thousands of years. Aren't the techniques of the lower world already useless? Is it still necessary to grab it in the world of reincarnation?

Novel has a saying of three golden chapters. The first three chapters introduce the protagonist's origin, talent, world setting, etc., Setting the tone for the novel. The beginning is that the population of Blue Star reaches tens of billions, and the will of humanity awakens, turning Blue Star people into the fourth natural disaster to go to other worlds to plunder the origin of the world. Blue Star swallows the origin of the world and becomes larger than the solar system. The sun becomes a satellite and the Milky Way is a moat. As a novel setting, it is acceptable, but it makes people want to complain. The will of humanity is not the will of Blue Star. It does not have to be that Blue Star becomes super big. People can fully bloom in the Milky Way. The following is an introduction to the dangers of time travel. Based on this, time travel has to meet the XX standards before being allowed to travel (this is an alternative college entrance examination), and then a fair-skinned, beautiful and long-legged woman appears. This is 100% a poisonous point. She has very little role in promoting the plot. , The author may want to use long legs to introduce some simulator-style things in the next plot (lucky golden light, enlightenment card, natural physical strength, soul master, etc.), But I think it can be introduced regardless of whether there are long legs, and a poisonous point is included for no reason. Chapter 2 introduces the situation in another world (the universe of heaven, earth, black and yellow). There are no questions to skip ahead, but the questions will come next. The first experience of a novice traveling through time is a yellow-level world. The yellow-level is completely controlled by human will. Over the past hundreds of thousands of years, I don't know how many times I have restarted the timeline. Then, it is a problem to have a daughter, I am mentally obsessive, and if I have a bad relationship, I am a bulldozer. Finally, the third chapter is about entering a different world for the first time. It is finally mentioned here that the protagonist is a time traveler among time travelers (he is a person who has traveled to this world and can travel to other worlds). Goldfinger is what the title of the book says. The protagonist does not dare to use it on the high-dimensional earth for fear of being discovered by the humane will. He only dares to secretly open plug-ins in the other world. The author just said that the world he traveled through is a yellow-level world. The yellow-level world is completely controlled by the humane will. I don't understand the difference between opening it on the earth and opening it in a yellow-level world. Okay, the first three chapters gave me this feeling. They are not very suitable for me to read. I hope the author can greatly improve his writing skills.

Is it the Zhutian Stallion novel again? 😅

The author can refer to it Wizard World: -Wizard Apprentice (Level 1~3) -Formal Wizard (Level 1~3) -Stigmata Wizard (Ring 4~6) -True Spirit Wizard (Ring 7~9)—Martial Arts World: -Third-rate martial artist (disciple of the sect, passerby in the world) -Second-rate warrior (elder of the sect, master of the arena) -First-class martial arts master (sect leader, sect elder) -Xiantian Grandmaster (sect leader, land god) *The sect that once had a "Xiantian Grandmaster" is called "Zongmen" Technology World : -(Cell) Evolver (Town Level) -(Gene) Awakener (National Level) -(Life) Ultimate (Planet Level) -(Existence) Transcendent (Universe Level) *The Speed of the Ultimate is at the speed of the second universe to the third universe *—： -（） -（） -Refining the Gods and Returning to the Void (Returning to the Void~Combining the Body~Mahayana) -Refining the Void and Hedao (Earth Immortal~Heavenly Immortal~Golden Immortal) *Due to the large gap between the Golden Immortals at the same level, they are divided here: Jinxian; Taiyi Golden Immortal; Daluo Golden Immortal— —Sword and Magic: -First-order apprentice (apprentice knight; magician apprentice) -Second-order formal (formal knight; magician) -Third-order master (elite knight; magician) -Fourth-order master (grand knight; magician) -Fifth-level King (Earth Knight; Great Mage) -Sixth-level Sky (Sky Knight; Mage) -Seventh-level Legend (Tiled Knight; Magister) -Eighth-Level Epic (Knight of the Knights; Great Mage) -Ninth-level Legend (Sacred Knight; Holy Mage) Master) -Level 10 mythology (demigod; magic god) -Level 11 gods (gods; masters of magic) -Level 12 domination (main god) -Level 13 supreme (supreme god or the only god)— —Super world: -G level (ordinary) -F level (cutting iron) -E level (broken monument) -D level (collapsed building) -C level (broken river) -B level (destroying mountain) -A level (Zhenhai) -S level (destroy the province) -SS level (destroy the country) -SSS level (destroy the world) *Divided into lawful camp and chaotic camp—World of Beasts: -Beasts -Ferocious Beasts -Spiritual Beasts -Beast Generals -Lord -Leader -King -Emperor -Holy Beast -Sacred Beast— —Weird world: Zombies: -White zombie (one month after death) -Black zombie (afraid of people, but secretly sucks human blood at night) -Jumping zombie (black zombie absorbs blood essence for decades) -Flying zombie ( Hundreds to hundreds of years) - (hundreds to thousands of years) - (thousands to ten thousand years) Blood race: Can be divided into: pure blood, half/mixed blood, fallen And pure blood can get the following titles according to age -New life Son (under 120 years old) -Noble son (120 to 240 years old) -Knight (240 to 480 years old) -Black Lord (over 480 years old) -Lord (currently the highest ruler of the family, generally more than a thousand years old) -Elder (formerly) The supreme ruler of the family or the most respected person) -True Ancestor (passed the king's selection and received the blessing of the highest level moon) * The loser (reached the age of the Black Lord but failed the knight trial) * After the king's selection, the family was divided into one royal family and twelve distinguished families

Old women like Li Qiushui and Tianshan Tonglao, who have lived for seventy or eighty years, can still be shy, proud, and resentful in front of the protagonist. They are still almost a hundred years old. Even the main character can talk about it, it's so disgusting, and the character of the original character has been changed beyond recognition. If the fairy tale or fantasy world can still be accepted,

The idea is very good. I have read a book with a similar idea before, but I abandoned it before it was finished. To be honest, isn't the overall situation created at the beginning very good? As soon as I started writing the story, I started to exaggerate. You cheated the protagonist and reduced the villain's intelligence. How did Zhang Wuji survive and retain his magical power under the gaze of a bunch of time-travelers? Wasn't it just to be born to become a qualified fourth natural disaster? That's it? Qualified? Today's players are not that fw, let alone those who are professional players In terms of making enemies, like the assassin in the Great Movement Cave, it is not clear where he came from, whether he was infiltrated from outside or from the Mingjiao. These are all ways to describe this character. What is the result? Ah, I've been cheated, ah, I've been discovered, ah, I'm dead Of course, if you write a self-titled yy article, just pretend I didn't say anything 🤐

If the heroine is a descendant, and if she gets married and gives birth to a child while the mystery of the womb is still unsolved, does the protagonist count as being cheated?