It's Liaozhai, Not Cthulhu

The book is okay, although there are stitches, but good stitching is also a matter of skill. Come on, author! I think the novel will be more mature if the author strengthens some daily descriptions and detailed descriptions. I think the author is talented. If you are lucky and find a good angle, you can become popular. When I first watched Ghost Cry, Catch Ghost, I also felt that this author would be popular in the future. Although it is still not comparable, it is predicted to be at least a small hit.

Martial arts transformation, let's make it into a strong colonization armor that can be transformed with a belt. It will look like you will bring the world to a standstill a hundred years later.

There is no introduction to system rewards, magical skills, etc. There is no introduction at all. There are also some jokes that are confusing. If you want to write it for others to read, I suggest you explain it.

This gram invades the world. This is not the Lifecaster. It is the Persona. You can go to the Velvet Room in a few days.

Let's just talk about how to fall in love with Kathemeow. She is really, good, lovely. Singing is also good, good, and listening. Kathermiao, will you read the street novel I wrote?

The setting of your book is almost the same as that of Brother Zhongdi's The Fifteen Years of Liao Zhai Blacksmith. What does it have to do with him? There are many elements, but his book is more organized. Your power system is messy and may not be easy to deal with later.

The author's idea is quite clever, but sometimes the words "because", "so", etc. Are weird. I would like to give you a little suggestion. Use the appropriate amount of jokes. There are too many jokes in this book. For an old bookworm like me, the two-dimensional version is fine, but it is not friendly to newcomers. It is more like a self-interest novel.

I can't stand watching it since the beginning of Divine Weaponmon. Have you changed the writing?

The avatar doesn't have to be a girl, but it's different to have a trumpet when playing online games.

It's pretty good-looking, but the post-production process was too complicated, and there were too many private goods.

Oriental Iron Heart will make some arrangements, please hurry up.

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Author, let me make a comment here. The transitions in your chapters are too abrupt, making people confused. As the author, of course you know how the plot should develop. If there is anything missing in the middle, you can fill it in with your own brain, but we readers don't, which greatly affects the sense of reading. Often when a chapter is finished and then the next chapter is read, the content at the beginning has nothing to do with the previous chapter or a section is obviously skipped, and the reader just wants to throw the book away.

This little Dragon King is so nice. . . . Ability. .

The book club group number is 760309984. I agreed when I saw it.

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I think the next book, with the author's imagination, knowledge and writing style, can write about the flow of spiritual energy recovery behind the scenes or the infinite flow of adventures across various worlds.

I watched the beginning and found it quite interesting.

The author writes so well, why does no one read it?

The author has a good idea, the plot setting is OK but not smooth enough, and he is a bit too much of a nanny. He leaves the opportunity and beauty intact to the protagonist of Liaozhai, and the protagonist just picks up some scraps to study and improve, but for the readers, it is not that satisfying to take some scraps and work hard to study and improve. The system reward is another cool thing. Although you have the ability, you can't be taken advantage of. If you want to help someone, you must write down the points that make people feel worthy of help. Helping a normal person or someone who is better off than ordinary people for no reason will make people feel irritated, depressed and angry. Only when people who really need help get help can people feel happy (for example, if the subsidy for poor students is received by a related household, it will only make people angry) In fact, the feeling of happiness is not only that the readers feel happy when they see the protagonist improve, but also need to see another layer, that is, the passers-by or supporting characters in the book see the protagonist getting great opportunities and beautiful women to drive readers.