Laoshan Taoist: Backstab the Master at the Beginning

The writing is good, but it's uncomfortable to read. If it's written for fun, that's fine, but if you want to make this a career or make money, then change the narrative style. I really don't like it.

We all have our own reunion in every ordinary or extraordinary story. Happy New Year, all book friends.

It looks like a kind of fairy in the style of monsters.

I wrote so well before, why did I travel back in time again?

It feels a bit like the Seventy-Two Transformations of Earthly Evil, and the setting is also very similar, and it can be worn back and forth.

Seventy-two transformations of earth evil spirits. ? ? ? ?

The plot of "Testing Poison" is pretty good, and it can be considered a pretty good piece of writing in the fairy tale genre.

I don't know if the author will create a female protagonist in the future. I feel that this style of writing is best without a female protagonist.

Did you go back in time to sell those secret books?

There has been no update for 5 days. Is something going to happen to the author?

The plot and writing are both excellent

Taoist Taoist Tongchi's holy light went back and forth, but it got messed up

The writing is pretty good. Come on.

I traveled back to modern times, and then it looked weird

Seven oils (homophone): heat and separate + potassium permanganate + set of chopped pieces + soap and melted iron to prepare points

The plot and writing are excellent, but the scene with the tiger monster in the Buddhist temple gave me a headache.

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How should I put it? It feels a bit like reading Chinese textbooks before, too bland.