The Young Master of the Flame Tribe of Dou Po

I don't want Ya Fei to accept anyone, I want talent but no talent, strength but no strength, brains but no brains, just a little cleverness, a fighter in her twenties and thirties, there are countless people in the Dou Qi continent who are prettier than her, and without Xiao Yan, she is nothing.

Why did the villain's IQ suddenly drop so much 🤫? A group of people in charge of the northwest land brought people to stop him without checking his background. Could it be that when he saw a teenage Dou Huang, he didn't know that he was powerful behind it? Still rushing up 🤫 Also, the protagonist of the Yan Clan did not ask for high-end combat power to follow him, but he is still the young leader of a large clan. It is really illogical for the Yan Clan to not secretly send someone to protect him. And the villain couldn't even think of this? Aren't you afraid of a secret guardian?

To be fair and objective, this book has some poisonous points, but overall it is pretty good. It can be rated 8 out of 10. Advantages: 1. When I watched it, I felt that the author had some ideas and the new plot connection created was actually pretty good. 2. In terms of writing style, I feel that this is already at the upper level among Dou Po fans, and it is not inferior to The Supreme Realm, Wind Rises the Green Mountains, etc. 3. The subject matter is novel. There are many fan novels about the beginning of the Imperial Clan, but they all start with the Divine Veins and then show off and get slapped in the face all the way. This is much more exciting, but it is easy for visual fatigue. Although this book still does not get rid of the Divine Veins, it does have more conflict settings within the clan. This actually returns to the first advantage, with a lot of ideas~ Disadvantages: 1. The opening setting is a bit Controversy, the original story of Dou Po is very rich, but there are also many unreasonable things in the original work. In fact, I personally feel that Dou Po was written by Dou Po, and the subsequent plots were also added in the update process, which has caused many readers to have inconsistent concepts. The second is the anime, and the anime has also changed, so there may be controversy at the beginning of the author, that is, how strong is the heir of the Imperial Clan? 2. The setting of the golden finger is broken. This golden finger is given in a hurry and does not even have a high sense of existence. Throughout the book, there is even an illusion that the biggest golden finger is the protagonist's own talent or super strong soul. 3. A common problem in fan fiction is that it is a bit intellectually depressing, and some conflicts are too forced and too deliberate. 4. There is an issue with the speed of plot advancement. After reading these more than sixty chapters, I feel that the author is a bit out of control, and it is a very dangerous sign that it will collapse at any time. This actually has something to do with the fact that the author is a novice. 5. Update problem, a common problem among authors. Updates are unstable. You can tell at a glance that there is no manuscript saved. The book is suddenly opened, let alone the outline and chapters. The quality of this kind of writing and publishing cannot be guaranteed. Great masters can, but the works of masters are also written and published from the middle to late period. At that time, the world view setting has been stable, and the experience and writing power of masters can basically be controlled. But as a novice author, I think in this case, the author, your book will easily collapse! As for the fighting scenes in the comment area, it is actually a small problem if there are no Dou Zun or Dou Sage around. If the author persists, I think you will succeed, but it will definitely not be this one. It will take at least two or three years for the author to become a starting-level third-level writer. Author, please don't think I'm verbose. I don't know if you like it or not. I'm just telling you that I have been pursuing this book for a long time and have been voting for you and giving you rewards. I prefer the style of this book and the writing is acceptable. What I am afraid of is that you will collapse later or even stop updating. I am a long-time DouPo fan and fellow DouPo fan. I read a lot of people, and I am a slow reader, so I should read more carefully than most people. The last time I was so verbose was when I mentioned it to the author of "The Wind of Fighting in the Green Mountains". Compared with that book, you have fewer typos than him, which shows that you are quite serious and rigorous; but the disadvantage is that compared to his book, your update is simply overwhelming! You are probably a three-minute hot guy! Dou Po fandom has always been a concentration camp for eunuchs. I hope the author can persist. It is difficult for this book to succeed, but I hope the author will not give up. It is also good to practice writing. I will continue to follow you, keep up the good work!

Author, I feel like you are insulting my intelligence. Even a fool cannot afford to offend an army composed of hundreds of fighting emperors. How dare these fighting emperors?

Chapter 47: The deal with Yaolao is over, why don't you return the ring to Xiaoyan?

The young master of the Yan tribe is traveling with a divine bloodline. Not to mention a Dou Zong, he doesn't even have a Dou Zun. He was blocked and beaten by a group of Dou Zong. I'm convinced. It's really too poisonous, buddy. You don't have to do this to create conflicts. Don't be serious. Don't those big forces in the northwest continent have no brains? They dared to intercept and kill Dou Huang's army. . . .

After Chapter 47, you should go to Medusa or the Little Medical Fairy, and take everything you need to get, and don't wait any longer.

I started to lose my IQ when I encountered anti-inflammation. Also, the Dou Huang fight was just like this. Even martial arts fights are more powerful than this.

The strongest person in the Yan clan is the protagonist's father, but someone actually dares to target his son? Why don't you write about the soul clan elders targeting the Soul Emperor?

The early part of the book is good, with its own storyline. The plot of going to the Northwest Continent is a bit toxic, taking advantage of Xun'er's clues to seize the opportunity, but the purpose after seizing the opportunity is unclear, such as the strange fire. The Ancient Clan left the Xiao Clan's Tuoshe Ancient Emperor Jade and didn't want the Yan Clan's protagonist to pick someone up... As the Yan Clan's most talented young clan leader, the Yan Clan's internal resources are enough for the protagonist to be promoted to Dou Zun before going out to wander around. The conflict between the soul clan was transferred during a trial. If I were the soul clan, I would definitely not miss this opportunity to kill the protagonist. Fans of Dou Po do not necessarily have to follow the main line of the original work and repeat it by changing the protagonist. Even if the purpose is so clear that he only wants to destroy Xinyan, it would be a good idea to go directly to Canaan College. The Thunder Clan will not fail to give the Yan Clan face. The plot of a political marriage is too cliche.

If you don't know how to write emotional scenes, don't write them. Looks so embarrassing

Anyone? If you have any ideas, please speak up...

There are too many unreasonable things, and the villain has no IQ at all.

Anyway, Xiao Yan is half useless now. Without medicine, he is nothing.

Why is there no Douzong Douzun around the protagonist, and Gu Xun'er is second?

Not multiple heroines? At least Yun Yun and Medusa can accept it~

Everything is okay, but the Douzong part has some intelligence. People who can become Douzong are definitely not stupid. They don't want to think about 100 Douhuangs.

Huo Zhi

If you don't accept Yafei... Then see you later! Dou Po next door: I am the Medicine King Han Feng and Dou Po Zhi started from being exiled by the Yan tribe~ These two novels are very good

Don't just finish three chapters with a talent list. I'm looking forward to the next plot.

The representation of 2024, putting aside the original line and creating the original Yan Clan line is great. I didn't expect to stop writing for two years.

It's indeed a fanfic with brains and ideas.

I haven't watched it yet and I finished it today

It's a long story that I've conceived. I recently felt that the plot of the Yan tribe in the early stages was a bit too much. But after all, the protagonist is the young master of the Yan tribe. He can't go to Wutan City without any reason~ Try to speed up the progress~

It's a very good book among Dou Po fandoms. As long as it's not too toxic or overly exaggerated, you'll definitely want to subscribe. Come on and update it.

Bro, when did you sign the contract?