My Red A, the Treasure Phantom from Another World Is on Sale

After a quick glance, the protagonist is set to be Red A, but the world view of Xingyue is not included. 1. It can be said that the protagonist is Red A. The identity setting is the golden finger of the protagonist himself. 2. The plot is about the protagonist traveling through a new world of swords and magic as Red A. 3. The current main line is the story of the protagonist raising the heroine and pushing the heroine from princess to queen. Personal evaluation. Light novels can be regarded as "good grass". Starting from Dazhong, it can only be regarded as "food and grass".

Moreover, the projection is only downgraded by one level. The magic power is determined by time and whether it can be liberated. The first level is also a weapon made by gods... Someone in a small country can destroy it. The author hopes to borrow the popularity of Fate, but also wants to liven it up himself, but he cannot grasp the reader's g-spot... It is too hard to get up... It hurts.

It's a pity. If the sword was made, this script would be more stable. However, the projection... Suddenly made people feel that the b-block had penetrated the surface of the earth. They thought it was a Muramasa divine script, but then they found out that it was a weed with a fish-like appearance...

After reading Chapter 24, I kept saying that I wanted to live a peaceful life, but then I forcefully arranged the plot and then got into the game again. I can't stand it anymore, and I really want to live in peace. If you can't afford to offend me, can you really afford to hide away? Goodbye

My favorite among the seven hyenas is Miyu's brother, the man who gave up justice and fought through the Holy Grail War overnight.

Damn it, I really can't stand it anymore. Why don't you just write that the protagonist is just an ordinary person who gets the power of Red A? Don't use the banner of Red A to swindle, okay? From the whole story, the protagonist is just a loser who got the power of Red A. He doesn't have any likable personality charm. He has to say that he is Red A. Brother, just feel free to flatter yourself. Don't be disgusting, okay? 😥😥😥

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The plot always ends abruptly at the climax, and there are all kinds of forced wits. What is the title of the book? What are the readers here for? Do readers of Red A want to watch boring palace fighting dramas? I have written dozens of chapters. Except for Red A's default go-getter Moye, the main character uses an Akhara hound, and the overall effect is not much. Personally, I feel that the author I wanted to portray the protagonist as a behind-the-scenes master with a sense of laziness, but he failed to control it and collapsed, so he looked lazy and pretending. Anyway, I didn't realize that this was a person who had experienced the life of a red A. I probably wanted to use fate to gain popularity, but it backfired. There are a thousand Hamlets in the hearts of a thousand people. The poison test is over.

There is no confidence in the dialogue. When reading the plot, I always feel that the nobles are all superior to others, and I am humble and do not have a strong attitude. Once you have the strength, you can directly refuse many things without having to talk nonsense.

Seriously speaking, the author's quality is still there. But the character of the protagonist is not likable... Especially since the protagonist has been in the fate world for so long and has a wife. After reading about 40 chapters, I barely thought of King Da Mao, Rin... Etc. It seems that there is no bond at all, which is a flaw.

Very well written, don't write it next time

The protagonist is too low, just riding on the popularity of Fate Nothing else was written.

Selling projection weapons? Even if you can't read novels with your brains in mind now, this doesn't treat the readers as human beings, so it challenges the bottom line of netizens, right? Let's see if the bottom line of this setting and logic can be squeezed further? Too far off the mark

I wanted to show off but couldn't do it well. I agreed to lie down, but in the end I had to intervene in various things. Could it be simpler? The author is not strong enough to write the pretentious feeling in the anime.

After reading this introduction, you have no desire to read it. A time-traveler uses Red A to travel through a world. It turns out that Red A hates war and sells weapons. So is he a time-traveler or Red A? The anime is Red A hates fighting, what do you think as a time traveler? If you time travel as a red A, experience the experience of a red A, and hate fighting, then write it as a time traveler. Moreover, the main role in the original work was replaced by Dad, which I always felt disgusted with. Goodbye

This red A is a bit useless. Anyone can break weapons and pull them out. I saw 58 swords without even pulling them out. Then I went to the participating countries.

I wrote an article about the political struggle of the crown prince using the red A character, but I gave it up.

I don't write carefully, I just write whatever I want. After reading dozens of chapters, I feel that the protagonist is just wearing the skin of Red A, and there is no core of Red A at all. Reading it is like watching a fake Red A copycat.

It's average, it can poison someone half to death.

It feels more and more ugly. I'm not here to see the palace fight. What are you fighting here? The sword is not drawn out. The more I look at it, the more annoying it becomes.