Knight: the Journey of Hope Begins with Legend!

Kamen Rider. . . . How many people were deceived?

Kamen Rider wizard

This is the author. First of all, I would like to say thank you to my friends for their support. Thank you (❁´◡`❁)*✲ﾟ* Then, if you have any weird legends and stories, you can share them for fun. Maybe in the future, I will write in the game Q (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡

After keeping it for more than half a year, I came back and read it again. I personally feel that it is almost the same as the better Kamen Rider fans in the starting point. I like this kind of protagonist who implements the spirit of chivalry, rather than the kind of novice male protagonist with an empty belt. Come on, author 🌹 Also: I hope the update will be more stable, I don't dare to continue chasing it

I even learned Kamen Rider's medlar syndrome. In summary, the main character is a Madonna character. The setting says that the sheep-headed monster at the beginning said he had the IQ of an adult, but it seems to me that he only has the IQ of a 6-year-old child. There is no plan in his mind, and he is still hesitant in doing things. Basically, instinct accounts for 80% of his brain. The transformation is based on Hibiki and Emperor Xia. They are all more suitable. They emerge directly from the body and wear the belt directly. They are all magicians. All the extra equipment and actions used to sell toys are completely copied. It is completely incomprehensible. You don't sell toys and you are in this weird world. The character of the Virgin is very weird. It is reasonable to change the setting and change the main protagonist to directly soul travel here.

Good-looking skins are the same, but there is only one interesting soul. The original definition of Kamen Rider is not to act cool as a hero, but to fight with the spirit of suffering and not wanting others to suffer the same pain as him. Therefore, it has the same origin and meaning of protection. Nowadays, most authors just write about the knight who is more powerful and ambitious, leaving the spirit behind. But the real thing we like about knight works is the spirit, the knight who abandons the spirit. There is no difference from a weirdo. Articles written for pleasure do not last long. There are very few people like this author. Come on. I look forward to your future works. Novels that can truly serve as original Chinese heroes.

This world is full of monsters and the atmosphere of despair, so leave it to me, because I am the magician who turns despair into hope. I am your last hope, believe me! You are stupid, but he is very good at transformation. Can you alone change the hopeless future of this world? This world is full of weirdness, full of negative emotions, full of madness. It depends on what you can do alone. I am not alone. Behind me, there are thousands of people who are full of hope in their hearts. My magic ring was bred out of the hope in their hearts. You seem to have never heard a sentence, destruction, the first day of birth. One child is darkness, the second child is madness, the third child is destruction, the fourth child is hope, and the fifth child is miracle. As long as you don't give up hope, miracles will come. I am the magician, Kamen Rider, Wizard who guides miracles. I will protect all the hopes in this world now.

Although the author has been eliminated in the test promotion, I still want to work hard. Please look at the pictures (｡ò ∀ ó｡) Thank you very much~

After reading a little bit, I feel that the author has not departed from the original image of Kōma Haruto, but just changed the name. To be honest, the image of the wizard knight hero is not liked by many knight fans. The biggest feature of many knight fan fiction is that the outsiders are completely incomprehensible, and readers think that there is something wrong with the protagonist's head, which leads them to think that there is something wrong with the author's brain. I haven't watched much of Showa, but most of Heisei shows first give you a protagonist who makes you think there's something wrong with your brain, and then spend forty episodes writing about the protagonist's previous experiences. There's actually nothing wrong with that. But the key point is why do you write fan fiction like this? It's not Toei, and there aren't that many fans. The author should write something for all readers to read, and then some people will stay, not just for Knight fans, and then some will stay. You must understand that the advantage of doujin is that it can naturally attract some fans of the original work. This is equivalent to losing the watermelon and picking up the sesame seeds. Unless it is for fun, it is not recommended to write in the Heisei style.

I can only say it one by one over there. Let me make a summary here. I just represent my personal opinion. All the events that the protagonist solves are passively solved after the protagonist is passively involved in something. There is a feeling that the plot is pushing the protagonist, not the protagonist is driving the plot. I don't feel good about this. Take the incident of the little girl Qianqian! This is actually a good starting point for the protagonist to actively promote the plot. For example, if the protagonist wants to save them or the sleeping soul in the little girl's body, then he will actively read various ancient books, look for clues, and then lead to the plot. Now all the plots are passively triggered. This passive triggering of the plot feels like watching a TV drama. I hope you will write the protagonist later to solve this matter. Love, but this matter is too big and involves other things. It is not good to be driven by the plot and passively accept everything, and the protagonist is invincible at the same level. This setting is not good. You are not good at describing battles. At least you have to give the protagonist an external pressure, so that the protagonist wants to gain powerful power, or become deflated and join the army of open mouth and closed eyes. No matter how you write the basis for the protagonist, it will become an abacus? Move the plot as soon as it is pushed. Your protagonist is already halfway established. Now it is up to the protagonist to actively promote the plot. Only then can the protagonist's image be completely established. Don't let the plot push the protagonist, let the protagonist take the initiative to trigger the plot. The above are my personal thoughts. If you don't like it, don't criticize. Thank you.

Is there any chance of the next Kiva book? 🤔🤔

The protagonist has a positive outlook on life and the author's core thoughts are positive. It's rare to see this at the starting point. I give it a thumbs up. The bigger problem is that the author's writing style is a bit poor and he talks too much. Especially the descriptions of battle scenes are not clear enough, and they often use too much force to create a battle atmosphere. It is recommended that you refer to religious books such as the Bible, which can make it easier to create the coercion of the characters on the scene. Looking forward to the improvement of the author's writing skills, come on!

It's written in the style of a Japanese drama. The theme is obviously Kamen Rider plus fantasy. After reading it, I might as well just write a pure fanfic.

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I don't know why, I always think of Hope the Emperor

The author, for original magic, I think we can refer to some Pokémon skills, such as the wood element absorbing sunlight and using photosynthesis to restore blood, the sun's blaze, and the sun blade, which is close and far away. For example, the bullets fired are replaced by seeds, the ultimate move is crazy plants, and it can be further transformed into wood escape. A total of 18 attributes are quite valuable for reference. I will give you double the reward. The Mirror Coat is also very useful if it is turned into magic. By the way, will there be a special attribute magic ring in the future? And just search the Pokémon list directly on the browser.

I feel that the rhythm is very strange. Except for the protagonist, everyone else is of no use. Now I have read more than seventy chapters. It is like the first dungeon. Except that the heroine provides some common sense inside the door, and then explains a theme of a little girl selling matches. The other extraordinary people who came in together feel that they have no effect at all. I don't know what to do every day. They say they are looking for clues. How to find them? Search door to door? I feel like a fool, everyone is not communicating with others, and then one day passes, and I feel cold. Please help me. How can I put it, the plot feels a bit too monotonous. In the second dungeon, before I even started looking for clues, many things came to the protagonist as if they were delivered to his door.

Magic (to turn on) Magic (to turn on) Magic (to turn on) Show time! The intersection of the scorching sun and the bright moon The impact of overlapping Who would be willing to believe in such a miracle Time passes quietly How to live a helpless life Even if there is nothing you can do, never be trapped in place Then don't give up and find the energy you must and your own sincerity In the dream, find the reason and courage to return to reality Three! Two! One! Show Time! Magic Time! It's definitely not a child's play Showing magic is not trivial Mahaluto Hallelujah! Dive into the memory to find out the truth Guard the heart of hope [Show Time! Life is show time with countless surprises Chasing this destiny without stopping for a moment Mahaluto Hallelujah! No matter yesterday, today and tomorrow Burn all the pain and tears Show Time! All transformed gems are dedicated to you Magic (to be turned on) Magic (to be turned on) Magic (to be turned on) Show time! Rather than staying where you are It is better to act immediately to implement the decision Think carefully and don't ignore the possible turning point Bathe in the sunshine. Even if it is destined this ending, you must always be vigilant Fight to the end with the shadow called uneasiness Three! Two! One! Show Time! Show the magic. Decay becomes magical No problem at all. Miracles can be recreated [Mahaluto Hallelujah!] Never give up until the end Give all hope back to you [Show Time! Life is Show Time Don't run away Be aware and run to the end Mahaluto Hallelujah! Let the ridicule and doubt go with the wind And the despair in the world Show Time! Everyone fell to this stunning kick Magic (to be turned on) Magic (to be turned on) Magic (to be turned on) show time! This ideal is always higher than the sky Although it is always difficult to fully realize But time waits for no one, this is the performance Continuously opening and closing until the last moment Three! Two! One! Show Time! Magic Time! It's not a child's play Showing magic is not trivial [Mahaluto Hallelujah!] Dive into the memory to find out the root cause Guard the heart of hope [Show Time! Life is show time with countless surprises Chasing this destiny without stopping for a moment Mahalut

If the form is the five elements, how can gold and earth distinguish colors? 🤔

Show off your belt every day

Great progress. Compared with the dragon sword, it looks more interesting 🙂

Kiva kiva

The plot setting of the knight in this book is pretty good, but the writing is too slow and there are often some nonsense.

How should I put it? What the author wrote is pretty much the same as the first two. There are some very clumsy words in both.

Does the author want to write it to the end in one go?

Hey hey

I still like you some Kamen Riders

Which knight should I write in the new book? I recommend Ji Fox or build Kivat.

Which tokusatsu is the new book about? For knights, I recommend Kiva, Black, Kuga or Ghost.

Is the new book Jihu? I've been looking for a long time but haven't found a few books about extreme foxes.