Kamen Rider: A Journey of Hope Beginning with Legend!

Kamen Rider. . . . How many people were deceived?

Kamen Rider wizard

This is the author. First of all, I would like to say thank you to my friends for their support. Thank you (❁´◡`❁)*✲ﾟ* Then, if you have any weird legends and stories, you can share them for fun. Maybe in the future, I will write in the game Q (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡

After keeping it for more than half a year, I came back and read it again. I personally feel that it is almost the same as the better Kamen Rider fans in the starting point. I like this kind of protagonist who implements the spirit of chivalry, rather than the kind of novice male protagonist with an empty belt. Come on, author 🌹 Also: I hope the update will be more stable, I don't dare to continue chasing it

I even learned Kamen Rider's medlar syndrome. In summary, the main character is a Madonna character. The setting says that the sheep-headed monster at the beginning said he had the IQ of an adult, but it seems to me that he only has the IQ of a 6-year-old child. There is no plan in his mind, and he is still hesitant in doing things. Basically, instinct accounts for 80% of his brain. The transformation is based on Hibiki and Emperor Xia. They are all more suitable. They emerge directly from the body and wear the belt directly. They are all magicians. All the extra equipment and actions used to sell toys are completely copied. It is completely incomprehensible. You don't sell toys and you are in this weird world. The character of the Virgin is very weird. It is reasonable to change the setting and change the main protagonist to directly soul travel here.

This world is full of monsters and the atmosphere of despair, so leave it to me, because I am the magician who turns despair into hope. I am your last hope, believe me! You are stupid, but he is very good at transformation. Can you alone change the hopeless future of this world? This world is full of weirdness, full of negative emotions, full of madness. It depends on what you can do alone. I am not alone. Behind me, there are thousands of people who are full of hope in their hearts. My magic ring was bred out of the hope in their hearts. You seem to have never heard a sentence, destruction, the first day of birth. One child is darkness, the second child is madness, the third child is destruction, the fourth child is hope, and the fifth child is miracle. As long as you don't give up hope, miracles will come. I am the magician, Kamen Rider, Wizard who guides miracles. I will protect all the hopes in this world now.

Good-looking skins are the same, but there is only one interesting soul. The original definition of Kamen Rider is not to act cool as a hero, but to fight with the spirit of suffering and not wanting others to suffer the same pain as him. Therefore, it has the same origin and meaning of protection. Nowadays, most authors just write about the knight who is more powerful and ambitious, leaving the spirit behind. But the real thing we like about knight works is the spirit, the knight who abandons the spirit. There is no difference from a weirdo. Articles written for pleasure do not last long. There are very few people like this author. Come on. I look forward to your future works. Novels that can truly serve as original Chinese heroes.

Although the author has been eliminated in the test promotion, I still want to work hard. Please look at the pictures (｡ò ∀ ó｡) Thank you very much~

After reading a little bit, I feel that the author has not departed from the original image of Kōma Haruto, but just changed the name. To be honest, the image of the wizard knight hero is not liked by many knight fans. The biggest feature of many knight fan fiction is that the outsiders are completely incomprehensible, and readers think that there is something wrong with the protagonist's head, which leads them to think that there is something wrong with the author's brain. I haven't watched much of Showa, but most of Heisei shows first give you a protagonist who makes you think there's something wrong with your brain, and then spend forty episodes writing about the protagonist's previous experiences. There's actually nothing wrong with that. But the key point is why do you write fan fiction like this? It's not Toei, and there aren't that many fans. The author should write something for all readers to read, and then some people will stay, not just for Knight fans, and then some will stay. You must understand that the advantage of doujin is that it can naturally attract some fans of the original work. This is equivalent to losing the watermelon and picking up the sesame seeds. Unless it is for fun, it is not recommended to write in the Heisei style.

I can only say it one by one over there. Let me make a summary here. I just represent my personal opinion. All the events that the protagonist solves are passively solved after the protagonist is passively involved in something. There is a feeling that the plot is pushing the protagonist, not the protagonist is driving the plot. I don't feel good about this. Take the incident of the little girl Qianqian! This is actually a good starting point for the protagonist to actively promote the plot. For example, if the protagonist wants to save them or the sleeping soul in the little girl's body, then he will actively read various ancient books, look for clues, and then lead to the plot. Now all the plots are passively triggered. This passive triggering of the plot feels like watching a TV drama. I hope you will write the protagonist later to solve this matter. Love, but this matter is too big and involves other things. It is not good to be driven by the plot and passively accept everything, and the protagonist is invincible at the same level. This setting is not good. You are not good at describing battles. At least you have to give the protagonist an external pressure, so that the protagonist wants to gain powerful power, or become deflated and join the army of open mouth and closed eyes. No matter how you write the basis for the protagonist, it will become an abacus? Move the plot as soon as it is pushed. Your protagonist is already halfway established. Now it is up to the protagonist to actively promote the plot. Only then can the protagonist's image be completely established. Don't let the plot push the protagonist, let the protagonist take the initiative to trigger the plot. The above are my personal thoughts. If you don't like it, don't criticize. Thank you.