Cultivation to Immortality for Three Thousand Years

It's best not to use Chinese dynasties when writing fantasy. It's really ugly. Only when you create the story background yourself can it be exciting. The ancient Chinese dynasty backgrounds are all poorly written. Without some new ideas, there's nothing interesting to read.

Let me evaluate it. First of all, I haven't read many chapters, forty or fifty, and I'm fascinated by the protagonist's personality. Most of the time, he is a soft-hearted loser. Secondly, many places are just forcibly subduing people. It's okay for the development of the plot, but I really can't stand it anymore. The text is obviously good, and I said I like Lu Suduo, so I confessed my love, and then ran away secretly the next day. Haha, this is something a human can do. If it hadn't happened, I would have thought you were here to have a one-night stand.

It's so perfunctory, it doesn't even have chapter names!

There are no chapter names, I'm so lazy

Someone really turned something into a novel that was not written by me

One thing to say, the author's writing style is okay, but the writing is a bit messy now, so I'll read it later when the normal chapters come out. (Although I don't know if I will remember this book later)

The first 20 chapters are at the level of a great god, and the following chapters are dense with poisonous points. First, a general was ridiculed in front of everyone by the captives he rescued. Then, he was just pardoned by Qin Shihuang for throwing away the Nine Provinces Cauldron, and was appointed as Netherworld General. In the end, he was beaten half to death by a man who didn't care about military affairs for any reason. Was he trying to resist the decree? If the top leader doesn't pursue the case, what he said is bigger than Qin Shihuang? If he refuses to accept it, let him go to Qin Shihuang to argue with him. Will he dare? I have no brains, and then I get an idea, I want to find something, I want to hone myself without relying on others, absolutely, two people are looking for something, and then there are 1800 square kilometers in Peixian County. The training is like this, even the basic logic is not needed, and the previous master-level writing is in vain!

It seems pretty good. Let's save it and take a look. Cheers to the author!

The beginning is average, the middle is pretty good, but I won't mention the end.

The author is very ambitious and his writing style is good, but the poor results may be because he is not suitable for online writing.

There will be smart recommendations after 100,000 words. I think the author should write well and give it another try.