A Perfect Life Starts with Self-Discipline

Slightly poisonous, Qin Tian can't live without his family, and the protagonist can't live without the system. Let's not say anything about the other.

The writing is quite good. It's not like a novel. It has a storyline. I hope it won't be repeated later.

Don't engage in family disputes like those in big families. We are all ordinary people and have no access to this thing. There is no way to bring it in. You can write whatever you want. I will only think that you are trying to limit the number of words and deliberately deepen the conflicts.

The interaction between the protagonist and her sister is very ambiguous and uncomfortable to watch. I also have a younger brother and we have a very good relationship. I have almost never blushed since I grew up. However, we have never had such conversations. It is very abnormal to write like this. Do you want to write a story about a brother-brother love story for the protagonist? I really can't accept that kind of outlook. If not, don't write like this anymore. Sometimes when I see such a plot, I will skip it, but it still can't dispel the discomfort. It's just a suggestion. The decision lies with the author.

The chapter about playing basketball caused me a lot of discomfort, so I was always skipping to watch it.

She was forced to dress up as a woman in all kinds of ways, but she really couldn't accept it. Her sister also agreed not to send the photos to others, but she gave them back later. I would have turned against her if I had this sister. The protagonist is a dog-licker, just like a normal person. Don't you have any temper at all?

"Don't get me wrong, I really didn't want to flirt with you" It's such a pity that I can't make up my mind without seeing the follow-up

The first eight chapters, the writing and plot are divine. What follows is a pretentious plot from a second-rate novel...

Don't get me wrong, I really didn't want to flirt with you. Can you unblock me?

There is no such thing as a perfect life, it is just the fantasy of a dying person.

It's funny that a god-level hacker can't earn 70 million in two or three years. Whether it's a company or a country. The technology is so awesome, I can't believe they don't pay you that much. Little knowledge.

What kind of self-discipline system is this? It's just cheating, not thinking about developing yourself, just pretending to be awesome every day and getting slapped in the face. It's not shameful to write a show of pretentiousness. There is so much foreshadowing at the beginning, and it's just trying to sell someone else's head.

Is the world in this novel set by the author an imaginary world, or is it domestic? The national government has no sense of existence at all, and all kinds of criminals are rampant. Facing the thugs, it was the protagonist who beat them up. This situation does not exist in any country. When something goes wrong, the police are not called, but the bad guys are beaten away and the matter is over. What kind of world is this? A parallel world of Mexico?

C language is too real and causes extreme discomfort

Why is this plot happening again? It's so cliche!

Why do people always report dogs? These comparisons are so disgusting!

Seeing this paragraph, author, don't you think it's contradictory? Since you can't change the future no matter how you change it, and then you arrange a system to change it, it's superfluous

😭 I thought I could write something else, but it's about basketball again. It's a miracle medicine😱

The introduction is very good and attractive, and the first few chapters are also okay, but when I start playing basketball, it seems to be different. I promised to be self-disciplined, but when I wrote about women, I went too far. It's not my cup of tea.

The basketball chapter caused strong discomfort. At the beginning, we were beaten by dogs. As soon as the beauty came, she said what's wrong with giving you a few balls, and started to highlight her pretense. I was so embarrassed that I dug out three rooms and two living rooms with my feet.

90% Of the destination of imitative writing is the word " Send "

Really rubbish, all kinds of yy deletions

Dear author, let me tell you actually, some book friends won't read your writing at all. , They only pick out some faults and hold them to death. When it comes to them, they can't even write a single word. Look at those masterpieces by famous people, which one is not a group of people constantly spraying

Basketball is so embarrassing. Fortunately, there are many chapters, which really affects the perception.

I'm throwing it away. When will the ban on teasing you be unblocked? I've been waiting for the follow-up for a long time

Please let me join the group, please

Hey, another eunuch expert

Just why is it not updated?

Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

Which vest is this?😰