From Young Player in Youth Training to Mr. Ballon D'or

I know that readers don't like to write about emotional lines, but I still have to describe them. Other authors write about football and try to minimize the sense of family presence. The chapters of this book focus on family, and the heroine is really awkward.

The protagonist is eighteen years old in the opening scene and still plays football in the Chinese Super League? If you don't go to the European leagues to train at the age when you are just about to reach the goal, do you have to go to the 27 or 20-year-old like Wu Lei? I don't mean to look down on Wu Lei, it's good that he can go out

Can you not play in the Chinese Super League? I wonder if the protagonist's current attributes cannot match his average three goals per game. Can a domestic match of this intensity still trigger a mission? What do you think?

Don't try to show off, okay? Do you want to scrap your book? Don't you know that this generation of book lovers are all obsessed with books 😰

You start with poison. This is a football article. Isn't it good to keep it simple? When your grandma is sick, it's okay to work hard to make money. If you insist on portraying your uncle as a white-eyed wolf, even if your uncle is not a thing in reality, there is no need to write about it. If you must write about the city, why write about football?

All emotional lines have been deleted without affecting the plot at all. It might even give you extra points.

Can the author remove the emotional and slap-in-the-face plots, so as to affect the perception? Those who come to watch football are not those who read urban novels.

There are so many scenes of pretentiousness and slap in the face, and the emotional lines in your book don't have any desire to be read.

A girl with a tens of billions of heirs is having a passionate fight with a substitute. What is she doing? If she wants to have a soft meal, then it depends on the hammer. Write about the backstage, people with background, if you don't play football well, you always want to find some nonsense. Poisonous

The various pretense and slaps in the face are too blunt. Does the author have no common sense in life?

You won't be logging into Serie A from now on😄, Serie A is already in trouble, so don't be disgusting. Feelings cannot be regarded as grades

I finally understand why the author is not popular anymore. After reading more than ten chapters, it's so damn annoying and I still don't know how to change it!

The substitute is just a bad guy. If you choose a bad talent, you will be forced to quit in 3 pages.

It's extremely poisonous. I really don't know how to recommend this kind of book. Those who like to see urban pretentiousness and slaps in the face can read it. Those who want to read pure football articles should be careful. Anyway, I almost vomited after reading it.

After reading more than ten chapters, I feel that the author has no life experience, and there are a little too many poisonous points. Please work hard!

I think the writing is okay. The author can listen to the opinions in the comments, and don't worry about them if you don't want to listen. You can write what you want. I think it's good to play in the Chinese Super League first and then go to Europe. After all, there is still a system in place, and you will grow no matter what. As for them saying they want to go to Europe as soon as possible, in fact, if you don't have any ability in the Chinese Super League, don't even think about going out. The most you can do is export to domestic sales. People like Zhang Yuning and David Jun were not trained in the youth training of the Chinese Super League at the beginning and were trained abroad. The protagonists of the novel should be the third brother and Wu Lei who are capable of going out after training in the Chinese Super League. What is the standard of ability? You are the one who has become the top player in the Chinese Super League. The protagonist is also young and has good abilities after relying on the system. Only in this way can he go abroad to play in the European League.

Sure enough, I was fooled by my words and entered the palace.

Today's novels would rather be mediocre than pretend to be pigs and tigers. The former will send readers away slowly, while the latter will send readers away immediately.

Don't write about your daily life. If you don't read it, you'll be addicted.

I met a retired player who said this! If you want to play football and join a professional team, don't play in China and don't register as a player in China.

Let me talk about some of the poisonous points in this book that I personally think. There is nothing wrong with writing about the Chinese Super League. After all, they are Chinese players. However, it is a bit disgusting for readers to write about the personal integrity and bottom line of the Chinese Super League from players to team management. The protagonist has a lot of rotten relatives and is forced to break up with his wealthy girlfriend's family. The emotions are all suffocating. There is even a plot of pretending to be slapped in the face in a shopping mall. I think this book is amazing. Everything readers don't want to read is written for them. I hope these high-energy plots will not be written later. I really can't hold back those who didn't want to complain.