Slice-of-Life American TV Drama

Judging by its appearance, it's highly likely to flop. First of all, firefighters can't be portrayed as billionaires. It's too incongruous unless they come from wealthy families, which isn't the case here. Secondly, isn't it a bit presumptuous of you to release two chapters at the very beginning of your new book?

I honestly don't feel much for American TV shows like Firefighter. I watched a bit, and it didn't seem like it would last long. I hope I'm wrong. This book will probably be over a million words.

I think most people would recognize Luke, the main character.

To the author: it's not that your writing is bad, it's that you've included too many female characters. The more female characters you have, the less space you have for your story and for developing your protagonist. Have you noticed that your Adam, aside from his profession, is essentially no different from the protagonist of this book?

American firefighters, fearing unemployment, started their own fires and put them out themselves—a true story! 😰😰😰

To be honest, the firefighter profession doesn't really resonate with me. American TV shows have covered all sorts of professions—agents, doctors, lawyers—I think it's better to write about tax collectors. The conflicts would be more intense. They'd investigate everything: the Continental Hotel, the Penguin, Bruce Wayne—they'd even investigate Sheldon's taxes with their high intelligence, refuting his tax returns. You could write a lot about that.

The profession of firefighter is not really suitable. When writing American TV series, you need to build relationships or communicate with the main characters. They usually hang out in coffee shops and bars, but you're in a fire scene every day? Lawyers and scientists have a higher social standing and more freedom.

It's too niche, the professions aren't relatable, and it's mostly about daily life with no exciting plot points. Why didn't you create a profession like a police officer or a secret agent? That would allow for so many more film and television projects.

Can the main character not be a firefighter?

Has he lost his mind? Has time been rewritten? He's now obsessed with becoming a firefighter?!