Bright Sword: Starting with Temporary Command of the New First Regiment
亮剑：从代管新一团开始
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 634k Words
- Genre
- Military
- Subgenre
- Anti-Japanese War
- Updated
- 4y ago
- Source
- Qidian
Synopsis
222Chapters
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If you don't have any skills, don't write about retired special forces. You are a retired special forces soldier with no marksmanship, yet you have a 15m target that can hit prohibited targets. I can't keep up with physical fitness. I won't tell you. At least you should have some combat and marksmanship skills. How did you become a special forces soldier? Goof around. The poison is too poisonous, what else should you write in this book? There is no need to write it down. It can poison people to death!!!!!
Go home and farm. Even elementary school students can write better than you.
He was poisoned in the first chapter. The special forces only have these two skills and have no skills. Even the recruits who have just joined the army for two months will not only have 15 points of force, and their marksmanship will not be so bad (they can only hit 15 meters).
Is this special forces? I was better at target shooting than you during military training in university.
Just for the review, this is a typical studio mass-produced novel.
The first 3 chapters encourage you to quit, which is awesome👍🏻. Disadvantage 1: The retired special forces have a hundred hits within 15 meters. Not to mention the special forces, the soldiers who have been trained for several months are almost the same. Did you buy this retirement certificate? Flaw 2: The officers and soldiers are described as bandits, and they only recognize Li Yunlong. Even the national army would not be like this!
Take a look at what you wrote, Chapter 2: 'The strong are respected' 'Three major disciplines and eight points of attention', 'Article 1, follow command in all actions', do you know what they mean?
Written by the studio? It's a mess. This kind of book can be approved. Your backend is a bit tough
I didn't want to read it after reading the introduction, but I endured it for a while. It was similar to the novel I read twenty years ago. Brainless writing.
Don't write anymore in this life, this is your peak.