Kamen Rider: I Became Agito Too

Author, I took a look and would like to give you some personal insights. First, the organization and plot arrangement of your article are unreasonable. This problem is not just yours, many authors who write about knighthood have it. I don't know why, but it's just an article. The scenes change frequently and the story is fragmented. It's like trying to cram a tokusatsu drama seen on TV into a book. But you are not writing a script. Please, you are writing a novel. The transition between plot and scene will only make people feel messy. Second, the characterization is really not clear enough. Those better-written novels all have unique character descriptions, whether they are wise, sinister, or bold. The characters you write give people the impression that they are tool men who can only read lines, and are dry. Except for their own names, they are just like passers-by like Zhang San and Li Si... The above is my personal opinion. It is intended to give some advice to authors who like knights and write about knights. If you don't like it, don't criticize.

Brothers, I must praise this big brother by name, it's so awesome!

I couldn't sleep most of the night. Let me tell you something. Use polite words when commenting, otherwise the system will automatically swallow it 🙂. And I also feel very bad after reading it. I have a glassy heart. If you try to break my defense, I will draw a circle and curse you every day!

Do you want to consider the power of other angels? Yajituo was originally designed to be the power of the Fire Angel. Even if it evolves infinitely, it is impossible to surpass the Black God. You can try to gather the power of several other archangels. Once combined, is there anything worth watching? Kamen Riders starting after age 10 all have many forms.

Talk about something big, brothers!

I want to change to 21 god master

Hoho, the basilisk is coming, eovl

Saya's knight form

Ever since I read the manga version of Akita in Kuuga, I have never been able to look squarely at the Akita in the tokusatsu film. The manga version of Akita is a person with mental problems. Akita was the power given to him by his sister. Emm, he later became so psychopathic that he killed the woman who liked Kuuga, in the name of protecting Kuuga.

Anyao, Yajituo real bone carving, sic