Bright Sword: Join the Independent Group at the Beginning

I have decided to abandon the article. I am speechless for the author. Whether it is Xiao Liuzi or Long Zhan, I can no longer stand it at this point. Those who are reading can feel the feelings. If you continue reading, you are awesome.

Xiao Liuzi should be fired first. This kind of person is the makings of a traitor. The first time he cheated and committed meritorious service, he didn't report it. Then something happened and he reported it and completely wiped him out. This kind of person is a traitor. If you are with him, you may be beaten by him at any time. The report by the surname Wu is more pertinent.

Liang Jian and Li Yunlong have been written about in recent times. Please check Liang Jian. 9.5 Out of 10 movies are all the same. After watching too many, I feel a little annoyed by Li Yunlong. Or I could write about time travel and become Kong Jie or Ding Wei, even if I am a blind person.

The protagonist is childish. He used to be an agent, but what has he become now?

What can I say? The protagonist's IQ seems a bit low.

Originally, Xiao Liuzi was enough. Here comes Ma Lin again. I really don't want to watch it

The author should write about Hong Kong Young and Dangerous

I just don't understand why these authors like to write about protagonists who travel through time and become a soldier king. Is it so good? It's all badly written. The exaggeration written by "The Return of the Soldiers" is so exaggerated that it seems like poison. If a bullet can't kill the "Return of the Soldiers", it cannot be written as a regiment leader or a higher-ranking commander. Are there any other "Soldier Kings" or "Special Forces Soldiers" that make me want to vomit after seeing these introductions 😰

Return to the Dragon War, why don't you just call Long Aotian?

There is a big problem with the wording. Those who don't know better think that all Eighth Route Army soldiers can write eight-legged essays. Moreover, it is too verbose. I repeat one sentence over and over again for a long time. In addition, there is an extreme lack of military knowledge. I hope the author can work hard to change it 😂

The real poisonous person died. The protagonist Long Zhan was disgusted to death by the chapter about Xiao Liuzi. The Holy Mother, 😰

You might as well reward yourself with a few atomic bombs, and the finale will be over in no time. No need to bother.

To be honest, the writing was a bit procrastinating. Did you continue writing Xiao Liuzi's role just to have something to write about? There was a problem with his thinking in the first few episodes. Is the political commissar just for a living? The writing is a bit fake and too dramatic. The ideological work of our Eighth Route Army troops is in vain! ! ! ! Big words of exclamation, in short: 1. It's better not to write about the original plot of Liang Jian, it's a bit new. 2. Hurry up and write about the big events. The pace should be faster and less mindless plots should be written.

Top agents are useless, they are not agents yet