The Heavens Shine Anew

Why did the Ming Dynasty fall while the Song Dynasty remained? The Song Dynasty was so weak; it couldn't even defeat a single one of those dynasties.

There's something wrong with it... Since the emergence of the Wuxia (Martial Arts) genre from the Five Directions, its appeal lies in its close connection to the plot. Generally, it involves using a cheat system (either a super martial arts world or extraordinary talent and precognition) to reach the pinnacle in a low-level martial arts world.

The Republican era story is indeed quite long, and perhaps people prefer the main world to the Republican era story. However, I quite like it. I've always felt that regardless of whether one is a high-level or low-level martial artist, although their bodies and souls are vastly different, their experiences and thoughts are the greatest wealth.

Speaking of dragons and snakes, I can't help but think of a recent evolution of a novel genre. From the beginning of "Spare Me, Great King, and Live Long," the revival of spiritual energy has received a lot of feedback from readers. But if we have to say something, similar concepts have also been mentioned in works like "Saint Ruins" and "Star River Emperor."

The Republic of China era lasted too long, at least two months. The "All Heavens" genre shouldn't linger in one world for so long. It's neither Hong Kong comics nor "All Heavens" anymore. Why be so fixated on the Republic of China era?

There are reasons why your book isn't popular. First, there's a problem with the first world's setting. A martial arts world should be paired with a similar world. Even if you want to focus on body training, it should be within the Dragon and Snake system, not the Republic of China system. This makes your book feel strange and gives the impression of misleading the reader.

If the author were to write a Hong Kong comic, what kind of martial arts would they plan to give the protagonist? Judging from the style, it doesn't seem likely to follow the magnetic field rotation route. The pinnacle of martial arts in Hong Kong comics would be something like the Hun Tian Bao Jian or the Tathagata Palm, which are the divine and demonic martial arts in the Jade Dynasty setting. Which one would the author plan to give the protagonist?

Let's not even talk about the filler content... Writing about the Republican era was destined to fail... Because there are too many taboos surrounding it; this can't be written, that can't be written, history can't be changed, nothing can be altered... It just so happened to be released for sale... It was destined to exhaust the initial enthusiasm of its fans.

There's too much filler. People come to see the protagonist learn martial arts and fight movie characters, not to read Wikipedia. The author tries to include every single character's life story, sometimes dedicating two or three chapters to the legendary life of a grandmaster. Are you writing a web novel, not a biography?

Having recently read the first world, I was deeply moved. It truly offered a glimpse into the hardships and unwavering unity of the War of Resistance against Japan. This world, this protagonist—you can feel the author's inner world. I hope the author continues to strive for excellence, unlike those self-centered characters who, under the guise of seeking enlightenment, plunder everywhere, leaving…