Transmigrating to the Three Kingdoms: This Adou Needs No Help

Brother, your book does seem a bit immature. Write according to your outline and ideas, paying attention to typos, and let it mature gradually. Don't worry too much about what others say; I'll give you two thousand yuan as a reward. Lay a solid foundation and develop a clear plan, and remember not to give up halfway through. Writing, like life, requires perseverance; be willing to face challenges and make corrections!

At least the author's attitude towards this book is commendable, which is already quite good. The plot arrangement actually references inventions and events from other historical periods, so it's not too far-fetched. As for personal tastes, if you don't like it, don't discourage a new author. It's better for everyone to choose a book they enjoy.

The story of two countries arranging a marriage alliance, with the princess attempting to assassinate Liu Shan (A Dou), is so ridiculously absurd it's like finding a dead fly in a bowl of rice after only a few bites.

The first few chapters are fine; if it doesn't fall apart later, it should be able to get into the "Excellent" category. Getting "Excellent" status isn't difficult these days, because there are so many books that have collapsed.

The thought of being reborn as Liu Shan (A Dou) always reminds me of that wise man who said if he were to be reborn as Liu Shan, he would first have Zhuge Liang executed to seize power.

Regardless of the book's content, in terms of the subject matter alone, Liu Shan's problem wasn't his own. When he came to power, the army was nearly depleted, resources were scarce, and his generals were inferior to those of the Wei state. How could he possibly win? Even Qin Shi Huang, if he were alive, couldn't solve the problem. I don't believe that a second-generation emperor who could survive in chaotic times was an incompetent person.

This is suitable for people with absolutely no historical knowledge. Giving children lowly, two-character names at the end of the Han Dynasty would make anyone who doesn't know better think the child was a criminal or convict. Or maybe they've played too much Dynasty Warriors and are taking characters like Sun Shangxiang and Lü Lingqi seriously!

The author is unfamiliar with agriculture. Before the Republic of China era, rice yields would not exceed 200 jin per mu, and wheat yields would not exceed 150 jin per mu, with a typical yield of around 120 jin per mu. Before liberation, my family were landlords with over 800 mu of land.

Sigh, I can't stand it anymore. How could Zhuge Liang not know Liu Shan wasn't in the palace? He could just launch a direct attack. And even if Zhuge Liang wasn't aware, how would you transport 10,000 men, supplies, and logistics? Who would provide those resources? The court is full of Zhuge Liang's men; would they be willing to give them to you? That's too idealistic.

The writing is alright, but the way the protagonist threatens to abdicate in favor of Zhuge Liang after getting married is a bit too far-fetched. It's like trying to kill Zhuge Liang! And he even advocates monogamy? Don't be ridiculous. In modern times, what young person with money and status would be monogamous?