Live Broadcast My Planet Cultivation

Come on, keep writing, someone will read it

How should I put it? I looked at it, but it seems I didn't look at it. It can be seen that the author wants to grasp the rhythm, and also works hard to imagine the reaction of a person who knows nothing about entering the interstellar world. But the overall feeling for me is that it is empty at both ends, not refreshing enough, and not deep enough. The lack of enjoyment means that the protagonist did a lot of things like picking up sesame seeds and throwing away watermelons due to his "lack of knowledge". This was actually a loss, so most of the original enjoyment points of passing the level and defeating the opponent were cut off in one go. Not deep enough means that the differences between civilizations are not highlighted at all, and the characteristics of the planet are not presented. Everything is just the depth of the background board, not the world or even the universe. Hope things get better in the future.

Come on 🌹 writes well