BUFF of All Heavens: Kill Through Busan Tour at the Beginning

The setting of the first chapter at the beginning is quite novel, and the writing is much better than most newcomers. Although I am just a reader, the writing is so bad that it is really uncomfortable to watch.

Let me tell you my opinion. I personally feel that going to other worlds is like going on a far journey. The real world is a haven for rest. When you are tired physically and mentally from going to other worlds, you can rest in the real world. But suddenly a virus or mitochondria or something comes to you, and it is like turning your resting haven into a place that makes you physically and mentally exhausted. As a reader, I feel tired just looking at it! Of course, this is my idea. I hope the author will listen to it and influence your creation. I'm sorry, but I still hope you can be tolerant.

After traveling so well, a real-life virus pops up again, leaving me speechless. .

The writing in the first dungeon was okay, but then came reality. Something happened twenty years ago or a virus incident suddenly appeared. I felt that traveling through the dungeon could be done in any way. In the real world, I just wanted to write peacefully and relax. The real world has to be full of wind and rain, and the background looks awesome. This is unsettling, and it feels like it is no longer safe. Everyone needs a spiritual harbor, and the real world is such a harbor. If you give up your harbor and make trouble everywhere, how can humans survive?

Write less about real life. At least 95 of the 100 books that Infinite Flow has written about real life are all poisonous.

Train to Busan, Zombie Campus, Sweet Home, Happiness

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In reality, viruses are 90% to 10% poisonous. . .

I quit the Q group. Delete me among your friends. I'm already disappointed. I don't want to wait for updates. I've been waiting for a year for new books and it's still like this. Alas.

The previous one was inferior, and this one is inferior. No matter how well written it is, no one will read it.

I have finished reading it now, and overall it is okay. The subject matter and the transitions are also okay. Many book friends have also said that the problem is too real. I almost stopped reading and jumped on it.

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As a reader, I would like to suggest that the copy should be in one genre. If you rush from modern to ancient times, from urban to martial arts to fantasy, it is too complicated, so you should write in one genre. Since you can write about modern cities well, just write in one genre, otherwise you will change genres later and drive away these people. Those who like martial arts will find it hard to please when you write about the city at the beginning of your book and drive these people away, so you can only write in one genre. Look at those popular books of the same genre. Most of them are like this.