Those Days When I Was Mixed up in the Hong Kong Variety Show World

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This protagonist is a bit low-key. The woman is second-hand, the daughter is someone else's, the car is second-hand, and the beautiful partner is still a teenager...😵

After 5 chapters I felt it was okay. But I don't think it's okay if you want to create an Affen.

As they say, women are second-hand, and their partners are not important. The main reason is that the transformation of Chen Jingyi during the twenty years of chasing the murderer is too far-fetched. The beauty of the police who hates evil and wants revenge is still the original one. Just because of the author's inexplicable arrangement, was she given to the dwarf Zeng Zhiwei? Actors Chen Jingyi and Eric Tsang's wives in these two movies are not the same person. Goldfinger was not very good at first. Now the defense is broken. See you again if you are destined to be in the world.

The logical flaws in the character's behavior are too serious. The male protagonist alternates between a prodigal son and an innocent little virgin, and his performance is too dramatic.

It's not very comfortable to write scissor legs like this. I think it's still the first character in the movie that's better. He actually still wanted to chase the murderer for twenty years. It was a pity that the police wanted to let him go. Can't stand it.

This book has a heroic style [I like wives! ! Mature woman]

Forced recommendation? That's it? It's over at 180,000 words. It's so funny. It's not that short.

You can also add by to what you are writing temporarily.

I really can't stand this plot anymore, so please don't write nonsense╮(╯＿╰)╭! ! !

Except for the rejection of Lin Shufen at the beginning, the rest is good, keep up the good work.

The settings are very good and the system is not ridiculously powerful I hope the content in the future will not be cool! There needs to be a little bit of logic, and other plots are involved, and I hope it will also integrate the timeline of this drama! Don't join Lei Luo in the 80s! You can't do it mechanically just to be included in the video! I hope that after the inspection, I will be more cunning and more cunning than relying on recklessness!

In short, as long as the protagonist of this kind of Hong Kong drama is a bit different from ordinary people, and there are not a lot of gods and ghosts, and the main character is not abused, the general performance will be the same, such as flying LV, with a bunch of Vietnam war brothers at the beginning, a bunch of guns, and a super large storage space, and it will take off directly.

Brother, I really think it's a bit much to control the issue of killing. Punishing evil and promoting good is not just killing people.

To be honest, although you are trying to impress Li Er, your writing is really not as creative as Li Er, and Li Er is not poisonous. You are full of poisonous points. 1. The police ranks of the supporting characters are too high. 2. You, the heroine and the supporting role, are confusing. 3. You care too much about Li Er's rhythm, and you just want to copy Li Er's way, and you have no new ideas of your own. 4. Since you chose to be a policeman, why do you want to be a killer? Why can't you take credit for these people first and then kill them legally? You're not Li Er and you don't have to choose the "system mandatory task"? ? ? And I don't believe your system of punishing evil and promoting good is so crude.

Although Chen Jingyi and Chen Wenjing are played by the same person, they were born and raised differently. Is it a bit awkward for you to directly switch identities like this?

The writing is good, but could you please stop writing about winning prizes all the time? Poisonous.

The author must not have looked carefully at the testimony pioneers. Ma Guoying's parents invited her to have a drink in the village to get married. Later, Ma's grandfather got sick and needed money, so her father and her stepmother came together.

Well written and seems very enjoyable.

I would like to make a small suggestion. After it is put on the shelf, don't check the system package frequently. A large number of words are copied and pasted, which is very stupid. . . Come on come on

To be honest, the writing is not bad. I have read at least forty chapters and it is above the average level. I read some reviews and said it was like a running account, and I was speechless. I write essays like a running account. If I could write like an author, I would be happy in my dreams.

? By the way, why do I feel after reading Li Er, Zhuang Shikai and Xu Yifan that your writing is still full of poison?

Why are the main characters in Hong Kong dramas written by police officers? Can't they be written if they are not police officers?