A Super God Who Started from One Person

To be honest, I saw it from the web page. You wrote the first 14 chapters well, but why are you becoming more and more rubbish in the following chapters? It made me go directly from the website to scold you.

I'm having a hard time writing it. I've finished writing the timeline now, but I still have to go to the heavens next? Everyone is like this...

If the protagonist activates Vajra to subdue demons, there is currently no Vajra.

I'm a little speechless, the sentences don't make sense, and there are a lot of typos. I really can't stand it anymore. The more I read, the more my head hurts.

If the protagonist has too many skills, it feels too messy. In my opinion, an offensive skill or an explosive skill is completely ok. If you want to force yourself to add another movement skill, you can't add more, otherwise it will be like the Ninth Magic. It's because there are too many skills. In the end, there were a lot of complaints in the comment area. Otherwise, the protagonist used a hundred kinds of skills when he finally defeated the old Celestial Master. As a result, the old Celestial Master used the golden light spell to overwhelm the old master from the beginning to the end.

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The writing is not very good, the details are not handled well, and the text time is not indicated, so just think of it as a practice.

So cute, so cute, so adorable

The writing is rubbish The system does not directly transfer the experience of the exercises You defeated Wang Ye You have only practiced for a few days You defeated someone with more than ten years of skill Smashed Awesome

It's not a good review. This book doesn't feel enjoyable.

One thing to say. There is no need to set the conditions for the ultimate move so harshly, and there is no need to follow the game settings. As long as you have enough physical strength and Qi. It can always be opened. There is no need to set up a progress bar in the game settings, and the Buddha body can be set up. For example, the real Buddhist body is much better than the simple game setting. It can enhance the understanding of Buddhism and cooperate with the godhead mask to take off directly. After all, he is a time traveler. There is also a system, there is nothing wrong with strengthening the Godhead Mask, just like the Tathagata of the Great Sun, which is like the heavens, it is not as cool as it is now. The protagonist said that he wanted to learn the Godhead Mask, but what did he learn? . . One word after another, everyone is conquered by King Kong. So shouldn't the protagonist be the kind of person who can fight hard and get physical? The current protagonist feels very different to me. All in all, it's not bad. Come on.

How can I put it this way, the front is okay, but the back is not so good. After seeing you write about Super God, I feel like I don't want to read anymore. Why don't you upgrade yourself with tens of millions of points? If you plan to write about a super god, then you have to be a technological god. Otherwise, why not write about a super god... And later on, I felt that the protagonist was too frustrated and had no IQ at all. The more I read, the more uncomfortable I felt. I stopped reading. I just complained. I hope the author has his own opinions.

Ouyang Xiu will have his own armor in the future, probably similar to this one. I found a lot of pictures, and this one is more in line with my idea. After it is put on the shelves, I will find a painter to draw it after I get to Quanqin.

Come on~ Well written, destined to be a big hit.

Emmmm, how can I put it, the combat power of one person has been increased, and the combat power of the Super Seminary has been infinitely lowered. The system is different. The protagonist feels like cannon fodder, and the timeline has collapsed. The protagonist is like soy sauce. I can only say that the author's writing is a bit poor, and the writing materials are not well organized. Of course, the author's writing must be passable, at least above the average level. It is still barely readable as a fanfic of one person.

What are you writing about? You have to pay to use a gene engine.

Very important!

It was written in such a hurry. As soon as I traveled through time, I immediately went to fight Da Luo and then went to Biyou Village very quickly. This was too rushed. There are only a few chapters here.

Lots of typos, guess as you read

Aye, it's the same as mine, is it one person plus a super god?

The first time I saw Yongjie's ability, I said that the subject matter must be very good, but it's a pity that my writing skills are not good, otherwise I would have written it.

Brother, are you still updating? I've been in a bit of a book drought lately.

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I don't know how this book was written. Anyway, I feel that the gods of technology are not as good as those who cultivate immortality. After all, the gods of technology have limited means. It takes time to use the ultimate move, but cultivating immortality is different. The time for the ultimate move is short, and the time for the ultimate move is short. It's like I can't understand what is written in this book. It just says that those who absorb energy and cultivate immortality can only rely on elixirs. Technology absorbs energy to a certain extent and cannot replenish it by itself.

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I've read more than a hundred chapters and I feel so bored! More than the best, more than the worst! There are obviously cheats, but no one can compare! He was brutalized like Angel Yangan, and couldn't compare with Wang Ye even with the addition of plug-ins. Is this the protagonist? ? ? ?