A Scroll of All Heavens

Can you kill Yang Xiao, the damn rapist?

The writing is too mysterious. The author's writing style and settings suit his own original world.

Can Big Brother Time Travel Song Qingshu be called Song Qingshu? Yu Ming always felt it was weird, and the name didn't seem very nice.

No matter how gorgeous the words are, it can't change the problem of forced pretentiousness and weak plot.

This writing is interesting, so ethereal, and so mysterious that it gave me a headache just looking at it. This low-level world of martial arts is like a prehistoric cultivator. I don't know how to evaluate

I feel like the power system is a bit messy. Is it true that Yitian Slaying Dragon is a world of low martial arts? Your power system and the master level are too mysterious. It's a bit unclear whether it's low martial arts or immortal martial arts.

I just skipped reading it. It's too literary. Why did you write it like this? It's a waste of time and effort, and it's also annoying. To put it bluntly, online novels are just fast food. They are just for people to relieve their boredom. If you write like this, you are looking for the wrong platform. It should not be at the starting point. It is almost enough to submit to a magazine.

The vocabulary is gorgeous, but the plot is really a bit exaggerated, and I was baffled by the previous "Song Qingshu Heng Lian Dacheng". In the original work, Qing Shu was called the Jade-faced Man, and his martial arts was not particularly high. His horizontal training was only at the threshold. Definitely not on the list. Good swordsmanship and good internal strength are his hallmarks. He really forced himself to cheat and turned the internal power of the Ice God Palm into several uses. With this ability, the rest of the plot is completely made up. If he wants to become stronger, he can stay in Wudang Mountain and learn Taoism with Lao Zhang.

The writing is so mysterious that it makes me dizzy.

The author's main point is that the people of the six major sects should be killed. They are a group of cousins ​​and there is a chastity arch. I don't understand why Zhang Wuji wants to save them.

Yitiandumo has been changed like this. If it writes about Tianlong, Tang Dynasty Shuanglong, Fengyun, etc., It will directly become Xianxia!

The first world is so high, no matter how you write it later, it will easily collapse.

The realms are divided into acquired, innate, master, and grand master. The protagonists are both horizontal training masters. If you fight an innate and a bunch of miscellaneous soldiers, you can still waste so much effort. Where is the realm of crushing? There are so many psychological activities, so let's just learn to get away with the fighting scenes, and be more neat. Just this fighting scene, I was not interested in watching the rest of the plot development, so it slipped away.

This shouldn't be the traditional way of slaying a dragon by relying on heaven, right? A modified version?

Gorgeous writing! It looks so tiring! Tired! Brain tired!

It looks a bit messy! It just makes me look confused! And it's a good fantasy written in a world of low martial arts! Just like cultivating immortals, the descriptions of various immortal worlds are so elegantly written! Keep it first!

Does the author want to become the fifth martial arts master? ? I feel like the protagonist speaks in a tactful way and has too much inner drama. This style is not suitable for me. 88 Wishes you a big hit!

Isn't Yi Tian a low-level martial artist? How come he looks like a fantasy?