The Legend of Yun Yun: the Passing Time of Yan Yun

Hello all book friends, the update of the fleeting time is almost coming to an end today. In this situation where the anime is garbage and disgusting, I hope you can like the ending of the book 😜

Brother, when I get rich, I will definitely remake Yanyun Fleeting Time into an anime.

I recently found a new job and am getting used to it. Updates will be much slower, but the majority of Yun fans can rest assured that this article will not be eunuch.

As soon as Xiao Yan turned his head, Yun Yun, who was already prepared, stood up on tiptoes and kissed Xiao Yan's lips. She put her arms around Xiao Yan's neck, and after wreaking havoc in Xiao Yan's mouth with her sweet tongue, she withdrew before Xiao Yan had any time to think about it. The original kiss scene in Chapter 4

The biggest problem between the couple in the first few chapters of this book is Xun'er - she was originally the heroine of the original novel, but this book followed the pure love route of a single heroine, so she had to become a supporting role. Originally, I didn't think about the arrangement of the two original heroines when I was looking for a fan, but the author obviously thought more carefully than I did. She was the first woman to be sincere to Xiao Yan. Xun'er's kindness to Xiao Yan cannot be described in one word. After all, we cannot imagine that the daughter of one of the strongest men in the world from a powerful family is originally rich, but she has suffered a lot for a brat. How to balance the relationship between Yun Yun and her, instead of being considerate like the original text Xun'er and taking care of the queen's affairs hastily. Although I am a man and do not understand what women are thinking, Doupo's solution is too casual. This book surprised me a lot. From the very beginning, it was clear that it had a single female protagonist, which clearly showed the difference between this book and other fan fiction bloggers. The male protagonist can have many people who admire him, but in the end there must be only one person who will truly accompany him for life. She cannot be touched by anyone, let alone have any excessive intimacy. This also makes me feel that this book stands out from the rest. Unfortunately, this is clearly reflected in Xun'er. Xun'er is not entirely Xiao Yan's first love, but Xiao Yan's commitment to Xun'er predates his first love. However, regardless of the original text or this book, Xiao Yan still had some frivolous and excessive behaviors in his early years, including peeking at the queen's bath, and some lecherous behaviors in this book. Although it can also be explained by his youth, after that, after he really had a lover and someone to accompany him, compared to taking the initiative to avoid suspicion, it was obvious that he did not completely regard Xun'er as a lover at that time, but more as an important goal in his heart, an important sister. The interpretation in this book is very good. When Xiao Yan was growing up, he truly fell in love with Yun Yun from the perspective of love, instead of falling in love with Xiao Xun'er out of guilt. Under Yao Lao's guidance, Xiao Yan completely clarified the relationship between the two. This shows that the author has really put a lot of thought into it. Who can let go of the flesh on the palms and backs of his hands, but he must let it go, but how to let it go. The process and method are where the author of this book shines. The original article has pregnancy energy, but pregnancy energy is ridiculous. He does have true feelings, but he insists on creating this thing, and then prevents another person from forcing another person out, which is also ridiculous. It always feels a bit... It's not that modern monogamous people can't understand polyandry or polygamy at that time. I have seen a lot of harems. The main reason is that I have never eaten fine rice bran. This comparison confirms that this book is indeed not vulgar from the perspective of online writing. Including the previous kiss between Xiao Yan and Yun Yun in the desert, which turned into a hug. The kiss in the original text was because the two people really would not have much contact in the future, and they wanted to leave some marks or thoughts about their lover. But they have a future in this book, so they don't have to be like this. Therefore, I personally think that this book is still detailed in some aspects. The fact is that Xiao Yan did not really fall in love with Xun'er in the early days, but was more than a brother and sister, the lovers were not satisfied, coupled with the promise to Xun'er, the guilt for her and everything that happened later in the academy, it was the true love between Emperor Yan and Xun'er that was established. This is one of them. Secondly, everything between Yun Yun and Xiao Yan from the mountains to later is enough to make people marvel at the greatness of love. Personally, I think the magic touch of this book is the self-creation of the story of the two of them in the desert - Yun Yun's life-saving help, and the lifelong agreement between the two to express their feelings to each other and finally establish the relationship between the two. In fact, it is a great time to look at Yun Yun from the perspective of a bystander. Xiao Yan is fighting for Xun'er's promise, for his own future, and for his own glory. Although no one is around at this stage, his hard pursuit of the goal will continue to deepen his emotions for the goal. If no one else disturbs him, Xiao Yan's future feelings for Nizi will definitely be love. As in the original article, it has not grown up at the beginning. Yun Yun's arrival coincidentally interrupted the changes in Xiao Yan's feelings for Xun'er. Xiao Yan only has family affection for Xun'er, which is true at the beginning. Think about it, after all, if two people are in love, no matter how reserved they are, even if they don't confess, but I don't believe that if the relationship between the two is love, it is impossible for two people to leave something behind even though they may not necessarily confirm the relationship when they set off. You must leave a thought for your lover when you go on an expedition! Don't say that companionship is the best gift, the key is that she doesn't have it. The difference between keeping your lover waiting and keeping your sister waiting is still not comparable. Xun'er is very important to Xiao Yan, and Xiao Yan is willing to risk his life for it, but there is pure love between Yun Yun and Xiao Yan. Xiao Yan's lack of attention to Xun'er and his budding love put him in a dilemma. This is one of the amazing parts of this book. When Ling Ying faced each other with swords at the engagement banquet, that moment actually surprised me. When I think about it carefully, Ling Ying's attitude towards Xun'er is absolute loyalty, and her confusion about Xun'er's feelings for Xiao Yan has long been reflected. In the original text, there is a test to see if he is really worthy of the young master. In addition to loyalty, Ling Ying's attitude towards Xun'er also shows some adult care for children. When I first saw the marriage, I was a little surprised. Although Xiao Yan was always around, he was about to die, but he didn't come out to save him. It turns out that he couldn't bear to see Xiao Yan betraying Xun'er. It was too real. Although it is the young master's order, I am outside and do not accept the master's order. I am very independent and not stupid and loyal. I know that I will do something or not do something if I know I will be punished. Ling Ying knew that her young master was devoted to her, although she also knew that Xiao Yan's feelings for Nizi were the affection between a brother and his sister. It came more from his debt to her than from his true love for Yun Yun. But he looked down on Xiao Yan for cheating on Xun'er, and couldn't stand it. He wanted to question him despite his life or death. The author's interpretation of this character was very good. The reason why Yan and Yun entered Canaan College was to resolve the dispute between the three of them. This story was at least fascinating to me. Xiao Yan is not half-hearted. When he sees someone who loves one person, he doesn't really yearn for three wives and four concubines, so he must make it clear to Xun'er. The relationship between the two women is more subtle. It is difficult to say who is the third party, and it is impossible to say who loves Xiao Yan less. Yun Yun came late and had more intentions of stealing the house, but her sincere efforts and gains later gave her the capital to confront Xun'er. Therefore, even though Xun'er had good intentions, she lacked the important factor of companionship, and Xiao Yan only regarded her as a sister at first. Later, he missed her every day and felt indebted to her, and he had a little unique love. It was the light on the lonely and miserable person's struggle, of course it was only spiritual. In this book, Yun Yun gives Xiao Yan physical and mental strength, reducing his suffering. Just like Xiao Yan took good care of Yun Yun when she was fragile, Yun Yun became the leader of this sect and was admired by countless people. He also lamented that he had been alone for many years but fell in love with a young man. This book shows a side of Xun'er that we have never seen before. What would happen if Xiao Yan failed? What happens to the people around her? In any case, she has not personally experienced everything that Yun Yun and Xiao Yan have experienced. Otherwise, from the perspective of a bystander, Xiao Yan is definitely a heartless person towards Xun'er. Among the eight ancient tribes, the daughter of one of the strongest people on the continent at that time had wronged her for many years for an unknown boy, giving up her precious youth, her future (partnership), and all opportunities (in the eyes of others, of course), just to wait for a brother who was not related by blood. That guy broke the promise and got engaged to someone else. He looked like a scumbag. After all, everyone knows that Xun'er's feelings for Xiao Yan are love, not family affection. But only a few people know that Xiao Yan's behavior towards Xun'er is more like that of a brother towards a girl. Although there are signs of a change of taste, the author not only considers the changes in Xun'er, but also the changes in the people around him, including his classmates in the college and Ling Ying. If I were to say which chapter in this book I think is the best, I personally think it is the Canaan Academy Love and Eternal Life chapter (actually the name alone is pretty good, much better than the Canaan chapter). Of course, the core is still the emotional dispute between the three people. Although the author does not spend a lot of words on this part of the emotion, it can be seen that the author put a lot of thought into it. This fanfic can also be regarded as a parallel universe. In order for the author to give Yan Yun a good but not completely different story, the author must write it according to the original text without changing it too much (this only refers to the characters, etc., Not the content of the story). From the official reunion of the three to the final separation, Xun'er was completely the one in the fight. He lost Xiao Yan's heart. She was extremely sad, she had nowhere to talk, and she regretted it so much. Although Xiao Yan would not be indifferent to her even if he failed, he would never cross the boundaries of family members, especially when Yun Yun was already there. So from the beginning of the confrontation between Xun'er and Yun Yun, they will never back down. To be honest, Xun'er has the aura of a wealthy daughter, very much like a female supporting character in a bad vulgar novel. You can ask how much you want (this book also has an innovation that at least I have never seen before: "You can get any item by its name"). Both sides know that the other's feelings for Xiao Yan are not adulterated, so they can only find fault with each other, find out the imperfections in the other's feelings, and occupy the emotional high ground, except for such useless things as the personal conditions of both parties. Yun Yun also affirmed Xun'er's contribution to Xiao Yan and did not doubt her feelings for him. Fortunately, he had been with Xiao Yan long enough and understood many things that Xun'er could not know through the powerful intelligence system, especially companionship, which Xun'er later seriously lacked, which pointed out this flaw. Coupled with the fact that Xiao Yan's love for Xun'er Love has not fully grown up. There was really only brother-sister love before. This is the confidence gained from Yun Yun's long-term companionship. From a rational analysis of both sides, it was obvious that Xun'er had the upper hand in winning, but the outcome was a complete defeat. The key to turning things around is feelings. In the final analysis, Yan and Yun have true love, but Xun'er is indeed one of the few people in the world worthy of Xiao Yan's sacrifice for his life. The budding love between the two was blocked by Yun Yun, so Xun'er could only find the immaturity and irrationality of their relationship. Although she wanted to win over Yun Yun, she did not deny that the two had feelings, and the same was true for Yun Yun. At the same time, this book is quite extraordinary in that it has a single female protagonist. Both of them want to monopolize Xiao Yan, but they know that Xiao Yan will never be half-hearted and will definitely choose one and let the other go. Who will be married? Who was let go? This is a battle between two people. It does not rely on good luck like pregnancy as in the original text (it is always a bit of a joke). Xiao Yan is both a real man and a softie. It is said that Yun Yun is the only one who promises, but the relationship between Xun'er and Xun'er is not very straightforward. Fortunately, Yun Yun is reasonable and has Xiao Yan's undivided attention, so that they can truly end the relationship later. He was said to be a bit of a softie, but it wasn't entirely his fault. Xun'er was someone he couldn't bear to hurt, and he knew he had let Xun'er down. Xun'er was well aware of Xiao Yan's character, so he would never give up at first. After the battle was decided, he would not disturb him anymore and quit at the right time. However, he was also hysterical and heartbroken. Both parties were actually reluctant to give up when they said goodbye at the end. The author allows me to see the different reactions of Xun'er in the same fight under different experiences. It is so real. I can see that the author is sincere, not nonsense, and has a serious attitude toward the character. Let's talk about the other original heroine and now the heroine, Queen Medusa. In the original text, she began to harbor great hatred for Xiao Yan. Without the influence of the little snake's soul, Xiao Yan would have died countless times. Therefore, at the beginning of this book, I was actually a little surprised by the magnitude of the Queen's changes. It was indeed very different from the original text, and when I think about it carefully, it actually doesn't make any sense. Even though Hai Lao fought against her and suffered many losses, the queen was able to let go, almost only because of her sister's words, not to mention that in this book, Xiao Yan gave her sister (the only person the queen valued before falling in love with Xiao Yan in the original text, and the only person the queen could truly rely on physically and mentally). A second life, and pointedly pointed out the problems of the snake people at that time, which shook the queen's heart and began to He began to doubt himself, and then helped the queen to break through the Douzong regardless of past suspicions (you must know that this is a very bold move, because Xiao Yan is not stupid, he knows that if the queen recovers or even breaks through the Douzong, it may directly pose a threat to his life after waking up, and the subsequent reactions of several parties also confirmed this). Perhaps if it were some brainless female characters in other vulgar novels, they would have given up long ago. But the queen is different from humans. The snake people only respect their strength and blood. However, the snake people have less twists and turns in their hearts than humans, and they can win their loyalty with only sincerity and strength. Just like the original text, Xiao Yan captured the queen's heart with his sincerity, and there is no human being like the queen, whose status, strength, and bloodline perfectly surpass those of the same tribe, just because His status requires his tribe to be as loyal and worshipful as a god. He is so high up and so cold, but he is easier to get along with than humans. His natural state of mind is very different from humans (although he kills people at every turn, but like Ebi, he treats you as a friend and is a true friend, unlike those who change their faces in Gaixingtian). But the attitude change is indeed too sudden compared to the original text. No matter what, the original text has gradually gained popularity over time and smoothed away those dissatisfactions bit by bit. What's more interesting than the original text is that since she was promoted to Douzong, the queen's attitude towards Xiao Yan has been the same as the tsundere after she was named Cai Lin in the original text, and before she really fell in love with Xiao Yan. I personally think this is very interesting. It does not completely end the queen's identity, but also allows us to see a rare and interesting side of her. Especially when she provokes Yun Yun, the real owner who has not yet fully confirmed her identity, to snatch Xiao Yan away when she is not prepared, it is indeed reasonable and surprising. Compared with the original text, where she gradually moved from being jealous to being in love, this change is really unexpected, but if you think about it carefully, she is indeed a snake girl who has never been in love, especially because of her aloof character, she seems to be distant from others, but she is also very kind. However, just as Die commented, the Queen did not really fall in love with Xiao Yan (although it was mixed with the purpose of persuading a fight), but if this is incorporated into the Queen's character, this sudden change is quite reasonable. After that, Yun Yun officially established her identity as the main character, and no longer had to worry about whether Emperor Yan would be abducted. Although she only had a little more confidence, she was able to calmly look at the queen's different feelings for Xiao Yan. She really didn't have to talk to the queen like a child worried about her toy being robbed, and in a real sense, she won the battle to defend love. Because of this, the Queen did not completely fall in love with Emperor Yan, so she could not be as gentle as the original text, and would only always maintain a sense of arrogance. Therefore, in this work we do not see Cai Lin, the wife of Emperor Yan, but Queen Medusa, an alliance ally. This was the case in the subsequent national war of the Gama Empire. Only Yun Yun, Hai Lao (purely because of their mutual love with her sister, and Hai Lao is sincere in treating others, otherwise they would have to fight), Xiao Yan and others can get the queen's favor. This story added later by the author also sublimated Cailin's character to a certain extent. Even if humans treat her badly, even if his own tribe is treated unfairly, he can still put important things first, never forget private matters, and deal with the common enemy before delving into the details. Just like Lian Po and Lin Xiangru, the queen has her own mind and puts national concerns first before personal enmity. After all, the queen's thoughts are different from those of humans. They are purer. Starting from Yun Yun, the queen was jealous and even worried that Emperor Yan would be abducted. Later, the queen was recognized, and it can be seen that the sincere love between Yan Yun and Yan Yun was revealed.

Good afternoon to all Yun Guangda friends, the chapter on the turmoil in the imperial capital has been completed. Considering the change of work and the temporary unknown of the accommodation environment, the start date of the chapter on Canaan Love and Eternal Life is temporarily unknown 😁 Please wait patiently, Si Yun wrote 😊

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First of all, I am very lucky to have come across this book. In fact, from the perspective of a bystander, this book is only of slightly higher quality and more thought than those fan fictions with exaggerated titles and eye-catching content. The word "Yan Yun" seems tasteless at first sight, but upon closer inspection it is endlessly memorable. Just like the introduction of this book, this is only dedicated to Yan Yun's dreams and love. A dream and a love, how real, how illusory, how desirable. I actually don't have much love for the original work of Fighting to Break the Sky. I have read some famous books, although very few; I have read some articles, but not many; I have read some novels, but I don't have much nostalgia. Perhaps it is because I have not been exposed to many online articles, so I have no resistance to the characters and stories in novels. After all, it is different from reality. Reality, regardless of any story or emotion, good or bad, joy or sorrow, is more or less mixed with realistic factors, and is not always as pure as online articles. The emotions the novel gave me are extremely sincere and not even half-hearted (although it is illusory in itself). Their joys, sorrows, sorrows and joys all affect my nerves. Although more depends on the author's level, their happiness and regrets do not need too much modification. But the only one that has truly left an immortal mark in my heart is "The Passion of Time". Yun Yun only exists as a supporting character in Dou Po, and her description is only a few dozen chapters, but I was attracted by the story between her and Xiao Yan. A seemingly simple parting, but it drove me to embark on the road of looking for a fanfic for the first time, just to make up for my regrets. Sigh... Maybe I was too greedy and found a lot of followers of the two of them, which obviously fit the style of Tiancan Tudou, were so similar, and were even their real future. But no matter how I looked for it, Yun Yun would die alone. After all, Xiao Yan couldn't give him an identity. It wasn't that Emperor Yan was not a good character, but because of his good conduct, so he couldn't have a third wife. The best ending I have ever seen is that Emperor Yan split into a clone to fight the Emperor, named Yao Yan, who stayed with Yunzhi who had sealed his own cultivation for the rest of his life. In the end, Emperor Yan came from the world to pay homage to the old Yunzhi. Together with Yao Yan and Yunzhi's children, Emperor Yan did not die, and Emperor Yan was not around. Yun Yun could not live forever. The ending was only separated by life and death. In the end, the two of them did not have a perfect ending like the two mistresses (of course this is the reward that the two people deserved for their efforts). Fortunately, the author rewrote as little of the plot as possible, and gave the two of them a future in this book, with almost all-the-time intimacy. Although it is a bit boring, compared to the original regrets, I also understand that although it is boring, it is always difficult to satisfy. In the original text, if we exclude the days when the two met in the Warcraft Mountains and the three days they met on the Empire's Yunlan Mountain, the other days would add up to less than a few hours. The time is really too short, but every time the two of them would talk to each other, hug each other, and kiss each other, it is indeed better to say goodbye than a wedding. When the two met and fell in love, Xiao Yan was just a young master who came from a down-to-earth family and practiced hard on his own, while Yun Yun was the leader of the strongest sect in the country. However, the two of them were able to put aside their barriers and overcome all obstacles, regardless of class, status, or status, just to embrace each other for a moment. They were deeply in love but could only embrace each other for a moment, and then they were separated by the ends of the earth. Since the last time they saw each other on Yunlan Mountain, Yunzhi was completely dead, and Yaoyan no longer existed. The future of the two people given in this book (although I only saw the Canaan chapter, I will only see the Canaan chapter) has already satisfied the purpose of embarking on the journey in the first place. I am not good at writing, and my Chinese language performance is also poor, so I don't have the courage or ability to comment on the writing style of this book, nor do I dare to say how it was written. Therefore, I will only share here some personal thoughts, feelings, and memories after reading this book. [All are personal opinions]. It is not for anyone to read, but just to express what is in my heart. In addition, I didn't read this article just because I heard about it, like when I read a famous book, but just what I wanted in my heart, so I didn't get too entangled in the logic of the book. Although there are problems, I know them (there are quite a few), but what I value more is the real feeling in my soul that this drama brings to me, rather than what it looks like. The logic of forensic reasoning and criminal police reasoning is so clear. No matter how big the problem is, I don't have much feeling in my heart, so I won't talk about it anymore. I will only talk about my feelings and my inner thoughts. Unfortunately, the original agreement was limited. The content of these words (cannot express my heart) and modifications are still insufficient. Don't laugh when you see the problem. Let's start from a young age and start with the supporting roles. Of course, I am influenced by animation and let's talk about Hai Bodong first. One of the ten strongest men in the previous generation of Jia Ma Empire, an accident turned him into a waning old man with no strength, trapped in a corner of the desert. The author only added one thing - the thousand-year ice soul, which made up for Ebi Lao's biggest regret. In fact, this was an unexpected surprise to me. I originally just wanted to see a better possibility between Emperor Yan and Yun Yun, but I didn't expect to meet Ebi Lao and Die again here. A prop saved the tragic past of two people, which really makes me overjoyed. For me, the past of the two is second only to Yan Yun's story. The cruel environment of the desert and the more dangerous human heart have created a new relationship between the two. One seems to be inexperienced in the world and pursues freedom, while the other is mature and indifferent to everything. The two met, got acquainted, got to know each other, and redeemed each other, secretly feeling affection for each other, and then directly confessed that they were very much in love despite watching the old cow eating young grass or the kind of cow playing the piano to the cow. Their love and separation also made me feel the injustice of their fate. The rules and traditions of the snake people made her run away, and her childhood experience and mission made him return. This unfairness not only made them know each other and fall in love, but also caused them to separate from each other. From the heart of a ruthless person, you finally understood the preciousness of waiting and companionship. Unfortunately, you only left all regrets and made you close your heart again. After regaining strength, you did not become as cheerful as when you were together with butterflies - indifference is destined to be accompanied by separation forever. The author used a prop to give every opportunity, and the two reunited until they were inseparable, and finally the lovers finally got married. Everything became just right because of the author's small changes. In fact, Ebi has become a little too lively. Although his personality will definitely change when his lover comes back, he is also a bit too good at complaining. Both Hai Lao and Xiao Yan are strict with their wives. Let's forget Xiao Yan and the older Yun Yun. Although Hai Lao may not have high emotional intelligence due to the task, they are not henpecked. Although they are showing their love for their wives, after all, there are no men who are afraid of their wives in real love, only men who love their wives. However, Xiao Yan can hardly beat Yun Yun and she is slightly younger than the woman, but doesn't Hai Lao defeat Die? Although there is no difference in cultivation or fighting spirit between them, no matter from any aspect or other aspects, Ebi and Die are like a 1.8-Meter-old man and a strict wife of a 1.65-Meter-meter petite wife. The contrast is too much, and it is always a bit strange. The author is indeed rigorous. Under the seal of Medusa, although Ebi's fighting spirit cannot improve, it does not stop everything. After all, in 20 years, as a generation of strong men, who have gone through ups and downs, and various life and death situations, it is impossible to just wait for death. So I think this book is better than the original text. Ebi made rapid progress after recovery, instead of still having the same strength after 20 years. There should be some changes after breaking through the seal. At any rate, quantitative changes lead to qualitative changes. As supporting characters, Ebi and Die's scenes are just right, not too much and not too little, but enough to make up for the regrets. After enough, adding more would be too much. It is a bit biased towards the style of a romance novel, although this book also has a bit of it. Hai Lao was no longer so indifferent after his lover came back, and his friendship with Xiao Yan was no longer separated forever. Next, let's talk about the woman who made Xiao Yan become Emperor Yan, Nalan Yanran. What surprised me was that Yanran and Liu Ling also had a follow-up. Indeed, Yanran's role in the fight was undoubtedly the most special, although it didn't end well in the end. There is a high probability that she would die alone or find someone to spend the rest of her life with. In the original text, he followed his teacher and stayed away from his hometown, relatives, and friends. He was no more than ten years old when he went out to practice. Although she is not an important role, the author of this book actually gave her a future. The supplement of her life experience, the improvement of her personality, and the description of her family undoubtedly made her more vivid. Why pursue strength? The love for the dazzling Yan Xiao (with Yun Yun's supplement) is also more real. It is also her first love, plus some complicated relationships. After Xiao Yan's identity is revealed, it is not that easy to change his attitude. After all, the girl has just grown up and her mind is immature. She also used her as a springboard to show us Yun Yun's confession to Xiao Yan (finally made it clear, no longer as hazy as mist). What surprised me was that she didn't say it to Yao Yan. Although the two of them knew it well, it was okay to talk about it. I didn't want to watch sugar-coating, but this kind of sincere expression could never be too much. Returning to the topic, Xiao Yan was able to truly understand the situation of the parties involved through the identity of Yan Xiao. With the help of several long dialogues and in-depth analysis, we truly understood the causes and consequences of the breakup of the engagement. Xiao Yan used the identity of Yan Xiao to understand the experience of being a party that Xiao Yan could never see, and then truly let go of the past. Different from the original text, the fight against Xiao Yan was just because of his strong heart, he looked down on the past, won the three-year contract and let go. (In this book, the author is very cautious. Because Xiao Yan has not experienced the pain of separation or even loss of his relatives again, he has not experienced too much suffering of loneliness. Instead, he has a beautiful woman to accompany him and a teacher to wait for him to deal with the ups and downs. He has less experience, so some aspects of his maturity are not as mature as the original text) and use this opportunity to allow Xiao Yan to truly reconcile with Yan Ran. Although the original text also contains a third-person review of the breakup of the engagement, Xiao Yan does not know it. This book cleverly arranges and reasonably narrates stories that are very different from the original text. At some points, it even surpasses the original text. It is not easy for the author to just love it. If Nalan Yanran is a supporting role, then Liu Ling is a small supporting role, a hypocrite in the original text, but he still has judgment in the face of right and wrong. The presentation in this book is more three-dimensional, more vivid and more vivid. He also has an unchanging love for Yanran, which is much better than his master Furukawa. The image of Furukawa in the original text is not very different from that in this book. This book is clear and the author obviously looks at things in the desert from the perspective of the person involved. Although Furukawa is also a bit greedy for life and afraid of death, and a bit forced by the current situation, he is obviously mentioned in this book. Of course, it is a bit more irrational than the original text, and the relationship and one-sided pursuit between Yun Yun and Yun Yun are also more realistic with the details added by the author. Like his apprentice, Liu Ling shamelessly pursues master Yun Yun. Personally, I think it is really wonderful to compare the two together. In the original text, their supporting roles are not important, but in this book, Liu Ling can clearly understand the big things and his performance is very good. Even if his completely invincible love rival (who unintentionally stole the heart of the one he loved and hurt him) came to ask for help in the name of the country's survival, he would immediately put aside his grudges and focus on the overall situation, and also persuaded his master to put aside his grudges and put the country first. A sixth-grade alchemist is not as good as a fourth-grade alchemist. Furukawa has fully sublimated Liu Ling by becoming a master. Of course, his hypocrite attributes in the original text have not been forgotten. At the same time, his love for Yanran may be much younger and purer than that of his master. His collapse after knowing that he has indeed lost completely reflects his sincerity and character more than Furukawa's desperate jump after losing. He can accept failure but is not discouraged and finds the right opportunity to strike again later. He shouldered a huge responsibility at a young age when the country was in dire straits. At the same time, he sincerely refining medicine for Yunshan, sharing the burden for Yanran, and relieving a lot of pressure for his sweetheart, even though he was obviously a little reluctant. This kind of practical action warms the cold heart of the sweetheart bit by bit, allowing her to accept herself and share the joys and sorrows, so that she can truly embrace the beauty. It is much better than many brainless fan fiction harem stories where a hero suddenly saves the beauty and then wholeheartedly follows others. A very interesting scene happened when Yun Yun and his wife met them eating hot pot - when Dahuang's daughter was unruly and shameless when she was found in her room, but she was found to be very shy, it really gave the two of them a future. Yanran doesn't have to be with the teacher, doesn't have to care about pursuing power, and will definitely not die alone with the teacher. The author even adds a very real past to Nalan's past. As the granddaughter of the Imperial Marshal, she has the spirit of a soldier, the courage of a woman, and the aura of not shedding tears even though she is wearing a skirt. As a younger generation, she has her own opinions, just like when she broke off the engagement. Although she was only arrogant and domineering at the beginning, many years later, the young people have grown up and are no longer so arbitrary. They know how wrong they were at the time and have the courage to admit their mistakes. I also know that what I want to protect is not the royal family, but the country, and make real progress with the older generation. Comparing Furukawa and Liu Ling side by side, they are both geniuses. The person they like falls in love with someone else. One is furious and the other quits at the right time. The relationship is tortuous and not sweet. Although both of them are known as geniuses, Furukawa has obviously never let go of his pride due to the catalysis and fermentation of time. Even if he has become a dog or loses, he will eventually be like a dog jumping over the wall. In fact, judging from the past, Furukawa is undoubtedly more hopeful than Liu Ling. At any rate, Yunshan agreed to Furukawa's marriage, but Liu Ling's words were even worse and even impossible, because Yanran's grandfather almost looked at him with evil eyes. Liu Ling relied on hard work to overcome all hardships. They were both masters and apprentices, but their endings were completely different, which also reflected the fundamental difference in their personalities. This book is much better than the competition.

I don't know how lucky I am. Even though I don't like reading, I can still find the reason why I fell in love with this book from the few words in my mind - the representative work "Oh!" By a female writer Tie Ning. "Xiangxue" shows an innocent and pure girl who tastes love for the first time. Although love is not the main theme, I once again saw the true and pure humanity. At the same time, Yan Yun and the other two have the same pure regrets that have been made up for, the long-term companionship, the sincere agreement, and the interesting daily life, not to mention the supporting characters who sincerely exchange hearts with the male and female protagonists. These are all my favorite parts. But this raises another question. It's not that I haven't seen people who treat each other sincerely, whether it's family, love, friendship or anything else. Although it's rare in reality, I've been lucky enough to see true love, let alone in online articles. It's unclear why I only have such love for this book, but I don't want to think about it anymore. It's pointless to figure everything out. To borrow an inappropriate metaphor: "A gentleman's deeds do not care about his heart, but there is no gentleman under his heart." Just saying that this book can actually be labeled as a romance, but the love between them and the regret left by Dou Po really makes it difficult for me to extricate myself. [Personally] The various incomplete regrets in the original text overshadow the perfect happiness (the ending of Fighting to Break the Sky is very good, and the last three people have suffered all the hardships, which is what they deserve. But there are always some imperfections, which is impossible to achieve in the original text, and Yan Yun's regret is just one of them) Just talking about Yan Yun, if the two of them are together, this Emperor Yan will be somewhat of a playboy, and this regret is doomed. The problem lies in the Yunlan Sect, which is also Yun Yun's home. The home is destroyed, the lock is gone, and she is free. It is also the sect that destroys the possibility between her and Xiao Yan. The relationship between them has long transcended identities and connected their hearts, but people cannot be together and can only miss it forever. Although there is an official sequel to Dou Po, which gives the two an open ending, she cannot have a status.     ，，， A slight shift in the gears of destiny in the parallel universe created new possibilities. It was Yun Ling who was recruited by the Soul Palace, not Yun Shan, and Yao Lao was not captured by the soul. Yun Yun and Xiao Yan were never separated again. Under the premise of making as little changes as possible to the original text, a new future was created. The two finally got married and faced a brand new future together. This book makes me feel that the author has put a lot of thought into: 1. In the original text, Xiao Yan was captured by Yao Lao, hunted by the Yunlan Sect, and grew up through various hardships. In this book, because there are no such hardships and he is accompanied by a beautiful woman, his character is not as mature as the original text in all aspects. Second, the number of words and the time the author wrote are quite exaggerated, and the number of words written in each article is far better than others (but there are too many typos, which is understandable. Only after writing this time did I realize what it means to "not know the difficulty until it has happened"). 3. As far as I know (maybe not comprehensive), like the author of this book, writing a book based solely on his interest is time-consuming and does not make much money. The author is still looking for a job when writing. It is not easy to generate electricity for love. 4. The author has many good original plots. 5. The author's politeness among various forces in the chapter "The Storm in the Imperial City" is very realistic. 6. The author is very concerned about handling memorials (is this the grievance of workers)? There is also a deeply buried foreshadowing. When Xiao Yan was in the cave early in the book, he commented that Yunzhi fell into the world like a phoenix from the sky. When they got married, they used the allusion of the phoenix leading to the nine chicks and used it as an embellishment on their wedding clothes. [There are many more, time is limited, I will add them in the future] In fact, when I read half of it, I thought the author was a woman (if I guess wrong, please bear with me if I am offended, hold my fist). The author's portrayal of female characters is so delicate and real. At least I have never seen a man with such a deep understanding. However, the careless portrayal of men is somewhat insufficient and unclear. There are many things that lovers should pay attention to, especially for women, but of course for men too, it's so true. Compared with Tiancan Tudou, the author of this article allows us to see the confidante of Emperor Yan, as well as the various subtleties of the psychology and behavior of various female characters. The addition of two new characters, Yun Jiao and Yun Shu, has cultivated the character of a little girl in Yun Yun, giving her a simple side in her heart, making her more ignorant and shy about love. This has led to a lot of flirting and scolding between the two, making the image of Yunzhi more reasonable, and making it easier for the two to be together. After all, it is not so easy for the head of a sect to be captured by a young man. Before winning her heart: "In the cave, the beautiful woman sighs at the passing of time; outside the cave, the young man looks at the moon and is in love." After winning his heart, Yun Yun will cry secretly for the relationship between the two, grieve alone, work hard and sacrifice, and will bear and face it together. I began to think that the reason why this book attracted me was the contrast between Yan Yun's regret in the original text and the perfect future in this book. This seems to be true now, but it is not limited to this. The original text of Dou Po is mainly about the passion of young people, coupled with the precious or poor character of many people, which has given rise to some tragic or happy stories. In short, the ending is definitely very good, it is excellent, but it is too good, good is not so real, and high is hard to make people have the courage to look up. It is hard work, gains in exchange for one's life, etc. Needless to say, but there are always those feelings in my heart, not like negative, not like positive, similar to loss, but also With a bit of envy, regret, reluctance, and congratulations, the writing style of "Waste Stream" is almost like a potato. The protagonist is inferior to ordinary people at the beginning and is not worthy of being looked up to by other heroes in the later stage, let alone ordinary people. Watching Xiao Yan grow from waste to Emperor Yan, I have mixed feelings in my heart. I can confirm my feelings from the original text, "In fact, they do not aspire to win the championship like Xiao Yan and stand upright, but they can only be two-star fighters throughout their life." Personally, I don't like the greatness of classics, although they are indeed great and do not leave memories in my mind. But for those original works, I only admire or deeply respect them in my heart. Even though they praise ordinary people who are obviously very similar to themselves or the people around them, they can never feel any real feelings for them. But I am more likely to be attracted by some stories that others seem vulgar. Yun Yun, a young and beautiful strong man, was unattainable to Xiao Yan from the beginning, but from the unknown people when they met to the indomitable ones later, there is no objection to their love in every aspect. Perhaps the essence of novels is to attract people's attention, and masterpieces are convincing from the bottom of the heart, but this mere novel really arouses happiness from the bottom of the heart. It's not the growth of Emperor Yan that makes people excited, or their unwavering love that fascinates me. It was when I finally found a bright future for the two of us that I felt a sense of happiness that I had never experienced before, or even heard of, from the bottom of my heart. I have also tasted the taste of happiness, which comes from family company, understanding, unity, etc.; I get what I want, I am overjoyed, I meet again after a long absence, I meet old friends in a foreign land, and I find them again. I thought those were already happiness, but for some reason I was lying alone on the bed, enjoying an ordinary Internet article that I thought was cliche (although I had been looking for it for a long time), but in many of the clips I felt happiness that I had never experienced before. It was so fascinating. It's not that I haven't seen or heard stories about lovers who finally got married after going through hardships. Regardless of reality or fiction, at most I only have blessings in my heart. There is no so-called happiness at all, because it has nothing to do with me. Of course, this book has nothing to do with me, but I unknowingly learned from this book. Their happiness is essentially different from those mentioned above, or not at the same level at all, so I wish them both from the bottom of my heart, no matter how virtuous Yun Yun is, how outstanding her beauty is, no matter how perfect she is; no matter how chic, powerful, or enviable Xiao Yan is. Looking at each of them individually, I have the most appreciation for the two of them as two virtual characters, but for their story I have the purest and unprecedented happiness, so I bless the two of them from the bottom of my heart, so all my names are Xiao Yan, Yun Yun (except sometimes Yao Yan, Yunzhi, etc. Are used to suit the period), including Xun'er, although no one cares, but I will only say this. I don't really long for love, especially since the reality is so virtual (I have never seen it before, even after reading this book. Of course, a lot of it comes from the fact that I am quite ugly). I even hate novels that overly describe love, including romance. Although that is their main theme, even the world-famous David Copperfield, Jane Eyre, and Dream of Red Mansions are indeed good books. Although their love (regardless of the beginning and ending) is still fresh in my memory, it never arouses any interest. Yan Yun's story is also about love, but I prefer this article, even though it is indispensable for the regretful contrast of the original article. Emperor Yan's situation back then was indeed difficult, but if it weren't for others' fault, the two of them would never have missed it. It's not that I can't let go of their regrets. After Emperor Yan, he also had two happily married wives. But precisely because I am a young man, I would rather get less than lose what I have now (I just want to cherish what I have now, cherish what is in front of me) Even if I have the chance, I don't want to live forever with regrets and happiness, I just want to die with happiness in my arms. I have only read the Canaan Academy chapter. At the same time, Xiao Yan has already matured in fighting against him. Xiao Yan is still a bit childish in this book, but only for Yao Lao and others. If it were me, I would rather choose the latter, even if there is no immortality. I know that life is not something I can control. I also know that there are seven sufferings, four joys, and four sorrows in life. The future will eventually be very different from the present. So I prayed and took action, just to always have room in my heart for the past, present, and future to coexist. No matter how mature the appearance is, the trace of purity remains the same. Although Emperor Yan's growth was helpless, my current father and the teacher who loved him and his son were suffering at that time, as if his lover's sister was waiting, and he was not going to die soon. The reality forced him to grow up. If it were me, I would definitely not be able to bear it like him, but I don't want to lose the person I used to be. The author gave Emperor Yan such a possibility. Xiao Yan at the same time had a lover, a teacher, a father, and four kinds of strange fires, but they were too perfect. I really hope that I can have a utopia in my heart, but I am not escaping reality. I just want that my future will not completely let the past make the present feel strange, so I dare not read on. I regret it, and there are even a lot of unexpected joys. If I ask for more, I have really lost my heart. I am not here to read the story of Long Aotian, nor do I want to make love break up, let alone make the story twists and turns to increase the excitement. I just want to make up for the regretful story in my heart. After all, for me, there is no priority between parallel universes. So far the agreement has been made. Yan Siyun dedicates this book to Yan Yun's dreams and love. I will use these paragraphs below to dedicate these few paragraphs to the happiness I encountered by chance in my lost youth - the author of "Yun Yun's Biography: Yan Yun's Time": Yan Siyun.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                  .

I am the same age as Yan Yun when I first met her, and it has been more than a few months since I first read this book. From the 100-day countdown to the college entrance examination to only one month left now, I have only read one or two chapters a week, either to relax or as a buffer for future study. It is not a waste of time, and I will never forget this book. When I open and close this book, I always have something to realize, think about, and remember (I don't know how to wander around in school). I don't like words, and I have no feelings for love, but this book can always nourish me to a place I have never felt before. I explain it as - if the heart has this destination, the body will not wander. During dozens of sunrises and sunsets, the words in the book give me immeasurable strength, and I can fight for the rest of my life. Therefore, I made a promise here. After the blade is sheathed and before the world is settled, I will use the method below and express my gratitude in words!

The author has written the book with great care, especially the scenes before Zhongzhou. The plot and details are designed with great sincerity. When reading, one will also be delighted with the development of the couple's relationship. It is far beyond the original work and ordinary fan fiction. It is undoubtedly a masterpiece of re-creation. Thanks again to the author for his sincerity, and I hope that all readers can find their own charm and fire in life. 🌹

The Canaan chapter has been completed. We will stop updating for a while to prepare a new special chapter. Dear friends, we will stop updating for a while.

Dear author, is this book based on anime? The first few chapters are all anime contents 😭

Because daily work consumes a lot of energy, although the starting point is updated with about 10,000 words each time, I actually have to write and revise for several days, so I usually update every Thursday and Friday, and there will be more updates on holidays.

Not bad, not bad, the flowers are finished! I started watching again😁

There are many characters that can also embody Yanyun love. One is Yafei and the other is Yunshan. Personally, I think the shortcomings of this book also include these two. First of all, Yafei was directly written as Tengshan's granddaughter, including Tengshan's drastic change in personality. These are actually harmless, but the first time he and Xiao Yan met was a hug, and it did feel a bit eye-catching. Although after this incident, Yafei later explained to Yun Yun, it fully demonstrated her shrewd and capable mind. Not only did she apologize to Yun Yun, but she also took back the initiative. With just one sentence, Yan Ran should like strong people and poked the opponent's lungs. She also helped Xiao Yan take back the initiative. He attacked Yun Yun's weakness directly and simply in a tactful way. He could also prove his identity to the real owner without interfering with the feelings between the two people. He did more than one thing with one stone. The characters in the original novel have similar characteristics. Yafei knows that she is in love with Xiao Yan, and at the same time she also knows that the two of them are from two different worlds, one is a businessman and the other is a practitioner. They are both talented but not even remotely possible. Therefore, she never expressed her feelings, although in the original text of Dou Po, she was like a queen, provoking in front of the future rightful owner. When the original text was in the Yunlan Sect on the third day, Yafei's intimate behavior with Xiao Yan in front of the queen who had just been named Cailin, without saying a word or making a move, overturned a jealous factory. The same is true for this article. Yafei and Xiao Yan are equally unlikely. Although some people always regard Yafei as a loser, this is indeed the case. But there is a big difference between doing business and practicing cultivation. Xiao Yan himself has no thoughts at all. Yafei himself is more like his elder, and his confidante is already quite good. Moreover, part of Yafei's popularity comes from animation modeling (the same is true for Hai Lao), including later similar to the original text. Xiao Yan's full support for Yafei, Yafei can only be grateful in her heart, and blames herself for asking for too much, but she still longs to go with him. In the original text, he is determined to control the family. In this book, he cried and laughed, knowing that this was a rare good thing. Because the relationship between Yan Yun in this book is so sincere that she dare not intervene and cannot express her feelings, so she can only grieve alone. In this book, she perfectly embodies a shrewd and capable businesswoman, but she has unexpressable feelings for Xiao Yan. Expressing them will only embarrass both parties. Although the relationship may not be affected, it will not be of any benefit. The downfall of this book is her hug at the beginning. It can advance the plot but is always unnecessary. Compared with the author's patient portrayal in other aspects, this part is really redundant. The characters created in this book help to reflect Yan Yun's emotions, including Yunshan. Overall, the portrayal of Yunshan in this article is actually very good, and he is also one of the characters that I personally find amazing in this article. In some aspects, it is better than Dou Po, but it is not because the image of the original article is too negative. Some people say that he seems to have no brains, confronting the protagonist, and is a must-have brainless villain for a good hero. But if you put yourself in Yunlan Sect's shoes and compare it to your own family, you grew up in a world where strength is respected. Your family has already been powerful and can control the entire country. It's just a matter of time. Regardless of Yunshan's own strength, just one Yunlan Sect can already compare to a country. A young boy with a slight future comes to the door and brings a bodyguard (the kind he can handle easily) and says he wants to kill his butler and wants to avenge his family, just like the young Auburn. Before Heimo developed the atomic bomb, he went to Hitler and told him that he wanted to kill several of his generals. He was a ghost, and the compensation given to him was based on the man's future, not to mention that he was already unbeatable in this country. It would not be difficult for Yunshan to challenge the entire royal family by himself. He almost didn't have many reasons to give Xiao Yan a satisfactory answer. Although this kid gave him too many surprises later, the gap was already formed and there was no room for relaxation. A little analysis of his strength revealed Yunshan's confidence. Yunshan could kill Dou Huang with just a thought, Dou Huang could kill Dou Wang with a slap in his peak, Dou Wang could kill Dou Ling with a few punches, and Dou Ling could kill a great Dou Master with a smaller punch than an adult. A child is still simple, not to mention that there is a world of difference between a light star and a pinnacle. In terms of superficial strength, Xiao Yan can never be Yunshan's opponent. Except for the protagonist, few people can casually talk about leapfrog fighting, including the Yunlan Sect in the original book. If Xiao Yan killed Yunshan without the bug-like fire lotus, and with the blockage of his fighting spirit, it would be difficult for him to win alone, so Yunshan's arrogance and domineering is not unreasonable. It is true that Emperor Yan's growth rate is so astonishing that only Hai Lao can accurately predict it. Yunshan is certain about Xiao Yan's future, but this genius can be easily nipped in the bud at the beginning. Yunshan's confidence is also the Soul Palace. Although he is also controlled by it, it also helps him fulfill his lifelong wish and break through the Douzong. This kind of transaction can even be said to never be a loss for a long time. After all, Yunshan is not at a certain level, and the guardian bird will probably not take action. After all, he is a good chess piece. Without the support of the Soul Palace, Yunshan doesn't know if it can be done when thinking about Douzong. How much time and energy it will take to do it is also unknown. To sum up, I personally think that Yunshan's character does not have many flaws and is just a typical villain. For Yunshan in this book, he has indeed changed his appearance. Personally, I think the author's overall image transformation of him is very natural. The key is that when the Protector Wu came to the Yunnan Lanzong many years ago, Yunshan chose to refuse to be complicit. First of all, he did not talk about the injustice of using other people's souls to practice morally. After all, people at that level do not have so many scruples. The key point is whether Yunshan chose strength. The choice of yes is as dreamy as the original text, and the sect is strong and he can break through as he wishes; if he chooses no, it is also reasonable. Yunshan has not been dazzled by his cultivation, and he knows that there must be a lot of reason for Soul Palace to do this. If we borrow a sentence from The Escort, "The people of the Central Plains have honey in their mouths and knives in their sleeves" in Dou Qi Continent, Yunshan's previous choices are normal, and the choice of no is also in line with the characteristics of the leader of his sect, who is not short-sighted. Similar to Xiao Yan's choice of martial arts back then, many people dreamed of the earth-level martial arts, especially for him who was thirsty for power at that time. Another volume of Burning Jue has great potential, but swallowing the alien fire will lead to nine deaths, or even ten deaths. Most people will definitely choose the former, just like a person gives you the position of prime minister, you only need to listen to one, and occasionally give you orders, but you must obey the same emperor. Almost one person is inferior to ten thousand people. Yunshan was indeed human in those days. In this book, all he has to do is to resist the short-term sperm attack like a beast in heat. Of course, the consequence is that the difficulty of his breakthrough struggle is unknown, and his relationship with the royal family remains confrontational. Regardless of the book or the battle, the arrival of the Soul Palace is ultimately a misfortune for the Yunlan Sect, not a blessing. Yunshan in this book can almost be said to have created a brand new character. He is no longer a person obsessed with cultivation, but has fulfilled the responsibilities of a father. His daughter is not a pawn, and is not coerced by power. In the battle of Qianxingkou, he is the leader of the sect. Ke Yijun's majestic momentum, even though his old body is dragging the scars of illness, he can still defend his young master and his son-in-law from an objective perspective. In some aspects, I personally think this book is better than Doupo in shaping the image of Yunshan. A person who has been in a high position for many years will not destroy a sect for a problematic subordinate. Yun Yun is his daughter, not a tool. I don't believe that a person who is so protective of his shortcomings will not have any feelings for a daughter he has raised for decades. Here, Yun Yun is his apprentice, his daughter, and even more so his heart and soul. Here, Yun Shan only hopes that Yun Yun will have a happy future, and threatens Xiao Yanyao to treat Yun Yun well. For Yunshan, a person who has seen the dangers of the world, experienced the vicissitudes of life, and is dying in his old age, in the turbulence of power and power, truly understands the value of the people around him, and understands what he really cares about. He is a sect leader with an overall concept rather than a short-sighted villain. This is the leader of a sect, and he has agreed to the withdrawal of all affiliated sects who have added insult to injury when he is in danger. (Yunlan Sect is also the one who committed the crime) It also reflects his iron-fisted methods. He knows that he is old and knows what he should really do now. He spends his last time entrusting and even intimidating Xiao Yan to take good care of Yun Yun. He also expresses his approval of their relationship from the side, telling his daughter not to worry about him, training the future sect master, not so pursuing power, and rejoicing in the remaining years and cherishing this present. And Nalan Jie, this book embodies the unyielding spirit of the lion-hearted marshal of a country. He is loved by others, serves the country and the people, is not afraid of death, and is only afraid of the suffering of the people. Even if he walks into the hospital, he will receive the respect of countless people. This is what a soldier should be like, rather than someone who has a different identity. Although in this book, he is a bit shameless for his granddaughter. In addition, he is also somewhat loyal to the high-ranking officials of the empire. The selfishness, hypocrisy, and stubbornness of the royal family are clearly visible on paper. This is the attitude of a country's rulers towards the powerful forces within their own country. It is impossible for rulers to stay calm and treat those who have the ability to threaten their rule. They must find the right opportunity to weaken their strength, instead of staying calm like Doupo. Another very important character - Yao Lao. To be honest, this Yao Lao is just like the author himself trying to persuade Xiao Yan. The various bickerings in the previous chapter also added a lot of laughter to the book. Yao Lao identified the two of them quite early (I personally feel that in this article, Yao Lao is better than Yunshan, who is famous for his strength and protection against shortcomings). The persuasion of the latter two parties finally brought the two together in the desert so that they could truly be together. Only then did they truly have the ability to deal with various difficulties that the two of them would face if they wanted to be together.

Sick, feverish, uncomfortable group

It feels like most of them are copied and pasted directly from the original work. For example, at the beginning, Yun Yun rescued Furukawa and handed it over to the mercenaries, and then later it was written that Yun Yun thought of Xiao Yan, and then ignored the injured Furukawa. Also, Furukawa exchanged Green Lotus Earth Heart Fire with Medusa, and the elixirs he took out were Transformation Pill and Posong Pill. There is no Posong Pill in the original work. If Furukawa could practice Pozong Pill, then Yunshan would not need to use the Soul Palace to advance to Douzong, and the following plot would be gone.

It's beautiful, I love reading it, and it's well written 😍

Does the author know what cool writing is?

The writing is really good😍😍

Is it wrong?

I can't remember the first time I posted it. From 21 years ago to now, I want to read this article every time I recall the little sect master. I always think of a brand new ending that can suit the love journey of the two. After reading so many fanfics, this one is the one that touches my heart the most.