Zhe Tian: Born in the Ziwei Star Territory at the Beginning

In the first chapter, it was outrageous to suppress the power of the master and even make the Chaos Body suffer the jealousy of heaven? Are you okay? The body of chaos that covers the sky is his biological son. Even the great emperor of the world can prove the path to becoming an emperor, and the road is smooth.

The comments I read were about using secret techniques to create a chaotic body in the womb, and then suppressing it. Then you took off your pants and farted, and created a chaotic body like a child's play, cheating the protagonist, and then you were afraid that your combat power would collapse, and then you were banned. You can't just give the Taiyin Holy Body directly, but you can't let the protagonist rely on his own talent to realize that Yin and Yang turn into chaos.

No wonder they are rushing to the street, and there are Ji Dao Emperor soldiers, but they still can't shake them. It's so frustrating to watch

Chapter 2 made me feel numb and confused. Is it so popular to curse in the sky? Every sentence is so damn embarrassing😅He also makes all kinds of slanderous remarks about Tianjie. . . Forget it, maybe the author wants to create a funny atmosphere? Although I don't think it's very funny, you met the young boy without beginning, King Bo Lei Jie, before you started practicing? Are you sure you won't be struck to death by lightning if you haven't practiced before? Not to mention whether it is reasonable to have a thunder tribulation without practicing. Isn't Emperor Wang Bo worthy of leaving a mark in the heavenly tribulation? The original text: The Humanoid Heavenly Tribulation is only for the Supreme Being. It is too much to brag about Wang Bo. Wang Bo is not inferior to Wu Shi, and he is here. Wu Shi entered the strange world in his second life. Wang Bo broke into the immortal realm and was chopped into slag. Wang Bo also killed a perfect Tianzun in nine times. This. . . . . .

In this book 🤫 the main character is a child from a restricted area. He walks out of the restricted area. His father is a self-destruction supreme, and he has a quasi-emperor protector. After he is born, he violently abuses the geniuses of the outside world.

What the hell is written in these pictures? This is either to directly trap Gai Jiuyou or to open up a big trap. It is true that the ancient emperor's blood may be able to extend Gai Jiuyou's life, but he must still be alive! The imperial soldiers have no decisive role in front of the ancient emperor. As long as they sublimate four imperial weapons, it's not enough. Gai Jiuyou has to be injured and not die. Unless the Dacheng Holy Body in the ancient forbidden land takes action, Taiyin has to return against the sky, like Vukong and Hengyu (Taiyin has indeed gone a long way on this road), but the Seal of the Human Emperor seems to be incomplete, and this is not necessarily a win. Normally, there is a high probability that they will die together. The problem is that even if the protagonist wins, what will he get, and the Taiyin lineage will be exhausted in the end? Even if he achieves Gai Jiuyou with a trace of background, there is no problem. The problem is that he can't do anything if he achieves Gai Jiuyou. There is no point in extending his life. He may still die in the dark turmoil hundreds of years later, and it is even more impossible to attain enlightenment. At this time, those self-proclaimed dark supremes will not allow anyone to attain enlightenment at this time. It is too close to the opening of the road to immortality. If he really wants to attain enlightenment, he must attack in groups. By then, he may even lose his tribulation ashes. Moreover, if Gai Jiuyou becomes enlightened, he will block the protagonist's own path. The result is that the protagonist has exhausted the last trace of Taiyin's heritage, but can't get anything. Unless the author makes a big mistake for pig's feet and brainlessness, then even if I didn't say it.

It's ridiculous. So many things in Dao Shang have not been cured. The original work is not as outrageous as you, so what will you do in the later stage? ?

Go for it! There will be thunder and calamity even before the Wheel and Sea opens.

When writing about Chaos Body, can't you describe the feeling of crushing the genius? Look at how Wu Shi soared when he was young. You wrote that the Chaos Body was useless. The emperor and the Emperor were one level away from each other and you couldn't beat him. Look at Ye Fan, who was one level away from the Emperor. He could beat him. If you don't like it, don't write about the protagonist.

In the first chapter, there is a problem with achieving a chaotic body. It is impossible to create a chaotic body when the energy of the lunar yin and the sun are fused. But here you write that it has already become a chaotic body. If you make the protagonist a chaotic body, you will no longer be jealous of the sky. You can change this method to create a chaotic body that will be jealous of the sky, instead of a chaotic body that will be jealous of the sky.

I have been abandoning the book for a while, but the most shocking thing is that the protagonist transforms into a dragon and crosses two great secret realms to PK the two powerful immortals. There is no secret weapon, no secret method, it is just brutal. I was immediately embarrassed when I watched it. The author also plausibly said that triggering the divine ban, the immortal has only three small realms, which is suffocating 😜

I originally thought it was a casual fanfic, but I didn't expect it to contain new ideas! Basically all Zhetian fans have seen it, you are definitely not inferior to anyone! There are only a few minor flaws, but they don't affect it at all! The slander is totally unreasonable! I haven't seen this method before, and the writing is surprisingly good!

The author's writing is so disgusting. Isn't it possible to impose restrictions on half of the imperial soldiers and destroy them directly? Still so disgusting

It would be better for the descendants of the Taiyin and Sun Ancient Sect to combine and give birth to a body with chaotic energy but not a chaotic body like the Holy Son of the Wanchu Holy Land in the late stage of Zhetian. It is more reliable than some Taoist injuries. It can slowly transform into a chaotic body, and the secret technique that can change the physique out of nothing is not something that Emperor Zhetian can create even if the chance is low.

The more I look at it, the angrier it becomes. I'll send you some money.

It's broken, I'm on the daily poison! 🤭🤭

I want to write a book about the Son of Taiyin, the holy son of the Duanmu family who took over the Taiyin royal family.

As long as you don't supervise, your grades will definitely not be bad! Come on, author! Keep at it, it will work! I have read too many Zhetian fanfics, basically all with more than 150,000 words! This book will definitely work if it is written along the current lines of thought!

I am the first to vote. Is there a reward?

The first few dozen chapters are okay, but not so much after that. The more I read, the more rubbish they become.

It's too confusing. I haven't finished writing yet. You have to mark the whole book.