Elf Games: Odyssey

After reading about forty chapters, there are no big poisons, but the average number of small poisons is one every two to three.

The Bug-catching Boy and the Green Hair Insects

Raise a Vulcan moth! In the insect type, only the Vulcan Moth is top-notch😘

It's really hard to pamper readers of elf novels these days. They don't want heroines, they don't want dark novels, they don't want unpopular elves, they don't want systems, they don't want four skill settings (I don't want this either)… (additions are welcome) Originally, elf novels are niche literature, but with so many requirements, are you not afraid that there will be no elf novels to read in the future? I'll be honest here, there are no two books that catch my eye right now from Qidian (still being updated)

Sudden? ? ? ? Isn't it too sudden for you eunuch? ? ?

Aren't paper people delicious? Mei Yi is so good. When the time comes, the whole game invades reality, or can bring things out of the game. Then we can directly get married on the spot. What kind of bullshit is this? Senior sister, get out of here. She wants this or that, and the protagonist is not her father.

After reading the first few chapters, I felt that the author was rubbing my IQ on the ground repeatedly, a fixed battle. If I successfully passed the first level, I would just let all my friends pass the level. What else would I need from others? ? ? Are there many people in the first twenty? Or is it that people in this world are so selfish that they don't tell their friends? If their family members are playing, they would be reluctant to ask their relatives to clear the border? I have been repeatedly reminded of how difficult this challenge is. There has been no one for a few days. Just give benefits to the protagonist. You keep reminding me that you want to pretend to be 13 The second point is that I haven't arrived at the novice village yet. I hide my name. In such a short time, I sent a woman who said "This person is so good-looking" to the protagonist. I didn't bother to see if there would be any scenes later, so I slipped away

Don't write the emotional line of the heroine, brother, I was shocked when I saw you wrote the heroine's appearance.

Suddenly I was in prison Σ(っ °Д °;)っ

It doesn't matter if there is a heroine, or how many there are. The most important thing is whether the author has the ability to write it well. It would be fine if the heroine is written as a vase tool, but some authors don't know how to write but insist on writing it. As a result, the plot of the heroine being alienated is very confusing. At least from the book review section, it seems that the author did not write the heroine well, and judging from the comments in the book review section, it is not that the heroine is not wanted, but that the author's heroine might as well not have such meaning. To be honest, the female protagonists in elf novels are the best to write. Either the heroine is the original heroine, or the elf is directly used. The original heroine is a test of the author's skill. If it is not written well, it will make people feel uncomfortable. The character of the original heroine naturally has a constraint. As long as it is not too OOC, most readers can accept it. Just like Xiaoxia, I believe that most elf readers can accept the setting of Xiaoxia as a violent and arrogant woman, but if you write an original character with this kind of personality, there is a high chance that you will be criticized.

If the elven world really has that world view, then bonds can really be used as food, and it is possible for Rattata to kill quasi-gods and even mythical beasts. But if it is a game world view, it is not impossible. It really depends on how the author sets it. But there is something wrong with the qualification settings in the game, the author, right? It doesn't matter if qualifications are divided by color, but you can't unify all business qualifications. Are Little Lada's golden qualifications and Kuailong's golden qualifications the same? Shouldn't this thing be divided according to individuals? God tnd Yu Sanjia has green qualifications and quasi-god has red qualifications.

Why do you want to write a plot about being robbed by Team Rocket? Is there any use?🙂

After all, this is a game novel, and theoretically anything can happen. Plot. If the fire thinks of any interesting plot events, such as Christmas is coming, the entire Christmas event in the game will be like this. . Original npc. And NPCs, such as Abi from other areas appearing in the forest. Support player. Come on some interesting player names, sprites, characters, appearances... Needless to say the boring ones. Crowdfunding to write a book, any good ideas you have can be expressed here. 🌹

How can the Edelweiss moth be compared with the Vulcan moth? Please don't randomly improve the status of the elf. It's full of poisonous points.

Who is this

I really liked it, but why did I suddenly become a eunuch?😭

It's all set, but the plot is really too protracted, a bit like a running account

I hope the author can work harder and stop writing those childish and poisonous points. I really should just confront Boss Banmu. He knew clearly that he would be robbed, but he insisted on delivering the items. There really was no place to put the items, so he just carried them all with him. It's a bit outrageous to play an open game without any awareness of saving things. The book is okay, I hope the author will work hard.

The protagonist can collect the stone slabs so easily, and coupled with Zhenghui's weird behavior... I understand, they want to use the protagonist to transcend 🐶

And no matter how popular your game is, it can't be related to reality, right? What kind of diaosi mentality is this? If you go to high school or university, what kind of teacher, classmates, in class, and after class, they will still play this kind of game with you?

Let me ask, is that senior sister the heroine? A small suggestion, Tutu Dog's daily life with unstable moods can be written in detail. It is meaningless to upgrade the elf novel purely. What is needed is cultivation and bonding. I feel that the author's pace is very fast, but this is inevitable. It is set as a game. It is really not easy to slowly develop feelings. After all, it is a "player" and not a "reality".

……

Before Pokemon Odyssey is launched, One Piece Odyssey will make its debut

The author's two chapters a day are not enough

Will the author write a giant swamp? It's very useful in PVP.

The protagonist still lacks a flying pet. If you don't use a mythical beast, it is recommended to use the evil crow head.

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