Start Fighting from the Black Robe

I actually don't really like super-powered protagonists receiving technological rewards. A hammer in one place and a hammer in the other are too unspecialized. The semi-invincible protagonist who is a genius scientific research type feels more realistic and more in line with reality. "Control the water flow", then he is invincible, right? He is now at level three. Although Naruto is often complained about, he is just right to learn Water Release at his current level! After level 6 and level 7, it turns to scientific research type, pure water, nuclear fusion of "deuterium" and "tritium"! Haha 😄 Invincible

Finally, he is no longer a protagonist with no muscles at all in the world of American comics. Personally, I feel that the character drawing style of Hong Kong comics matches well with American comics.

The writing is a bit poor, with typos and sentences. If you check the author, you will find that the content is inconsistent and has no main thread.

What the hell are you writing? He replaced the copycat Sea King, but he continued to do the same dirty things that the copycat Sea King did, and his outlook on life was completely shattered.

There are a few chapters in this world and a few chapters in that world. There are quite a lot of worlds to run in, but none of them are well written. The plot is basically a running account, as if rushing to reincarnate.

? ? ? What did you write? ? ? Do you think I'm confused? ?

He must be a newbie, and he has made all the mistakes...

I'm convinced... What the hell is this writing? It's a messy anecdote, off-the-wall thinking, and there's no main plot. The plot is all a short-term quick-travel story. Even if it's a eunuch, it can't be long in the first place.

The protagonist's abilities are too complicated and featureless, and the superman's serum was obtained so quickly. How do you write about it later? Sooner or later it will collapse.

When did the protagonist go to another world? It's inexplicable, he's in another world

It's a mess, and it doesn't look good starting from the time the timeline is changed with one punch, and it reflects the chaotic character of the protagonist. There's nothing interesting to see in the back.

Don't tell me that you want to ntr yourself. . The new plot is a bit sudden

It may be the first time for the author to write, so his writing style is not very good, but his ideas are good, keep up the good work

. . Why don't you just brush your teeth and then go on to let yourself go?

Good idea, but poor writing...

It's quite interesting to write. It's not the Holy Mother nor the Killer. It's the reaction of ordinary people getting power. Even if they lose their memory, they will naturally maintain their nature and strength. They will be crushed when they should be crushed. It's quite comfortable.

The protagonist becomes stronger too quickly and becomes invincible later on.

It's a running account without any polish. I suggest the author learn how to polish the article. I have read the content of 50 chapters. To be honest, you can actually polish the content of these 50 chapters and write 400 chapters without any problem.

Is the protagonist a native of the motherland? 😏😏😏 He has the strength to do whatever he wants 😏😏😏😏

I found that the author missed a lot of things. For example, what is the first mission of One Punch Man and when was it released? I didn't see it at all, so I jumped to the main character and asked Saitama to join the Heroes Association, and then received the second reward... There is a reason why so few people read it. I suggest that after the author has finished coding, he should read it himself first, and then show it to his friends and ask if there is anything that needs to be modified. This is what I did.

There are really disgusting people who don't dare to mess up the plot for fear of not being able to write well. They just promise to stabilize the plot, and they still imitate those perverts. Such people should die quickly and don't deserve to live.

After reading two chapters, I wish the fire goodbye.