My Steam Daming

I read it well before it was released, but after it was released, I really couldn't help but complain about the ten or so chapters. One chapter on the train is fine, and one on the Shanhaiguan Pass is okay, but Guangshan Customs has about three chapters on building folk customs, tap water, various historical and cultural waters, and two chapters on the military camp, various introductions to personnel, backgrounds, military uniforms, etc., And another three chapters on preparations for dispatching troops.

I am accustomed to suppressing first and then promoting, so let me talk about the shortcomings first Disadvantages: ①The first point, theme This book gave me the feeling of one word: messy, too messy. Steampunk, machinations, powerful nations, passion... There are even some fantasy elements. It gives me the feeling that there are many elements that the author wanted to write about, but in fact he failed to write which one. You could say it's a cool novel, but it doesn't look like a cool novel. You could say it's a Machiavellian novel, but it doesn't look like a Machiavellian novel either. In short, it's very messy. The entire first volume gave me a disorganized feeling. To be honest, if it hadn't been for the author, I really wouldn't have figured out what the main plot was. One moment he is going to conquer Jianghu sects, another moment he is researching steam technology, and another moment he is developing his own power... This is actually a normal thing, but this really does not allow readers to quickly enter the theme, at least for me. It can be seen that the author still needs to improve his plot control, and he is not very good at grasping so many elements. Although this is all to pave the way for the subsequent plot, I feel that it is not a good preparation. The specific reason lies in the second point. ②Second point, plot description In fact, the author's foreshadowing is quite good. From the court to the Jianghu, he introduces the world view of the entire Ming world step by step. However, there is still a problem with this way of writing the plot. It took too long to explain and describe the steam technology. I remember that some chapters, or even half of the chapter, were devoted to this. This resulted in the main plot described by the author being a little short of space and unable to be carried out at all. This further leads to the problem I mentioned in the first point, which prevents readers from quickly entering the main plot. Although these technologies are described for the purpose of future plot development, it is really a bit too much. Sometimes I feel reading fatigue and choose to skip these narratives. ③The third point, the emotional line Having said so much, I finally come to this issue that all writers cannot get around, the emotional line. There are not many female characters described in this book so far. There are only two who have an ambiguous relationship with the male protagonist: Yan Qingbo and Mu Xiyun. Let's talk about Yan Qingbo first. As the author said in the Sanjiang speech, the emotional scene between the male protagonist and Yan Qingbo was really written too hastily. First, the past events between her and the male protagonist were described in a very short space, and then... It was gone? When I finished reading it, my face was full of black questions. An inexplicable encounter, an inexplicable listening to a song, inexplicable memories of five years ago. An emotional line was established just like this. It was so speechless and unprepared at all. Next is Mu Xiyun. This woman seems to be like the heroines of most historical novels. She is a lady who met on a blind date and is also a rich woman. This is actually a very normal line. The male protagonist and Yan Qingbo represent the plot line of Jianghu, while the male protagonist and Mu Xiyun represent the plot line of the court. The two lines jointly promote the development of the subsequent plot, and everyone is happy. But the emotional line described by the author is really awkward... Here is a section: This is the Shura Field, right? Is this a Shura field? The male protagonist just said a word and Mu Xiyun was like this. It was really embarrassing. In fact, the emotional line is very important for a work. It not only plays a role in promoting the development of the plot, but it is even the main line in some works. Good emotional lines and emotional drama also mean that the author has certain abilities in character and plot description, which can also attract some readers. If the emotional line is not well written, it is better not to write it or write less, otherwise it will affect other readers' reading perception. At least I personally have relatively high requirements for the emotional line. It can be seen that the author is really not good at writing emotional dramas. I suggest that in the future, he should reduce the description of emotional dramas and write more main stories. Advantages: ①Theme In fact, there are many advantages of this book. Here are only two aspects. The first is the theme. As the author said, the theme of this book is change. And this is precisely the theme of most steampunk literature. The collision of science fiction and magic, the opposition between the ideas of the old era and the new era, and the huge contradictions and differences brought about by the two eras are precisely the most exciting aspects of steampunk literature. Change is not only a change in social systems and social productivity, but also a change in ideas. Although the author did describe many elements, and the writing was relatively messy, it was indeed to pave the way for future plots. The protagonist wants to lead the entire world to a new era, and he is the helmsman of this huge change. I am very much looking forward to the next story. Compared to the shocking steam technology, I am actually more looking forward to the plot about ideological change, because I personally prefer the history of the Renaissance, which was a period of real ideological change. In particular, the author also said that there will be an Age of Discovery in future stories, so I hope that in future plots the author will not only write about the conflict and collision between the ideas of the new era and the old era, but also the conflict and collision between the ideas of Western civilization and Eastern civilization. This is what I am looking forward to, and I hope that the author can write the subsequent plots about ideological changes. ②Second point, plot description Although the descriptions about steam technology and the history of the Ming Dynasty may make people feel a little unsatisfied and a little boring. But I can see that the author is very serious about researching information and describing these things. Although the author's writing skills do need to be improved, it can also be seen that he is constantly improving and learning. The author has transitioned from urban writing to historical writing, and it is also dual-edited, which is amazing! I can see that the author really wants to write this story well, and every description of steam technology and the history of the Ming Dynasty is extremely serious. I have been fortunate enough to have discussions (confrontation) with the author twice in the chapter discussion area. Each time, the author answered me seriously and told me where he got the information. Naturally, I would do the same. I'm honored that my current record is one win and one loss. Two special pictures: I have rarely discussed with some book authors before, so I was a little flattered when the author responded, and I can see that the author is indeed very serious. If there is a chance, I hope to discuss it with the author next time. Finally, I wish the work will become more and more popular, and I hope the author can bring us a better story!

The book is a good book, both in terms of writing and rhythm! The protagonist is a witness of the times and a bell ringer for the future! I would like to make a small comment here! Chinese civilization has been a celestial country since ancient times. It has always been a trend-setter in science and technology and civilized systems, synonymous with high-end. After the Manchus entered the customs, in order to stabilize and curb various ideas, especially scientific and technological innovation, at the national level, they have always wanted to see a scientific and technological world system dominated by Chinese civilization! I hope you can draw more of them!

The first reason I came into contact with this book was because of the book club activities, so I read it. But because I didn't read it carefully at first, I went back and browsed it again, so the book review was delayed for a while. I generally don't persevere with themes like fictional history and fantasy. It's not because the author doesn't write well, it's just that the novelty has passed, so I naturally let it go and stopped pursuing it. As for this book "My Steam Ming Dynasty", I hope I can follow it. There are several points that interest me. First, while adding fantasy power, it also adds elements of technological progress. The popular point is the collision between the fantasy side and the technological side. This is a good discussion point. If the author describes this, I think it should make many people comment. (I don't know if there will be scenes in the future where Wan Jian returns to his clan and cannons clean up the ground and fight) Second, it is the charm of the protagonist. After the protagonist travels to this world, he has his own position and code of conduct. Coupled with the contrast between money and hunger, the character does become interesting. Third, it is the aspect that is enduring and easily debatable - position, thinking and behavior. I usually dive into the arguments of both sides. After all, in most cases, the public is right and the wife is right. I usually try to figure out why they say this. After all, I need to be more understanding and tolerant. After that, I just hope that these many elements should be well described and portrayed. Otherwise, if I write on one side and write on the other, it will look a bit messy. Finally, I hope that the author will work hard and write his own world and colors to give readers a better story and reading experience. May the novel shine brightly and prosper.

Book card: Book title: "My Steam Ming Dynasty" Author: Gu Ququ Category: History Number of words: fifteen chapters One sentence summary: A decent novel Story review: I will test the novel, and find good books here. Hello everyone, I am Jiang Liuer, an ordinary salted fish book friend. Closer to home, what I bring to you today is a new book with hundreds of thousands of words that has been put into the library with selected pages. The author found this book in the new book library. The novel tells the story of the male protagonist traveling to a steampunk-style Ming Dynasty, becoming a marquis and heir apparent, and realizing his ideals and ambitions in life. The novel as a whole is very satisfactory. Let me briefly talk about the book in terms of its title, plot characters, and story structure. First of all, there is the title of the book. It is a simple and crude title, which directly points out the theme. It is in line with the naming method of today's online literature market. There is nothing to say about it. The second is the introduction. Regarding the introduction, the author would like to say that the entire introduction seems to be listing the background of the story, but in fact, it also hides the author's description of the protagonist's ideals and aspirations and an overview of the entire story. This introduction is well written, concise and clear without being tedious. Then let's talk about the plot. The previous plot part is very well written. Both the writing style and the rhythm of the story have the potential to be a fine piece of writing. Even the author is ready to praise the author vigorously for the story of this book. But the author would like to ask you what the contents of the chapters from Chapter 14 onwards mean? Is the literary youth suffering from a disease? Or do you think you've hit the mark and want to promote your ideas? Please, author, take a good look at the content of the first twenty chapters. Is this how you should write it? ! After laying out the main background, should you introduce the heroine? Should you write about the protagonist's future ideals and aspirations? But how did you do it, talk about ideals and ambitions throughout the entire article, instead of using a small incident to draw inferences about other cases, eliciting the protagonist's small ideals and ambitions, and then talking about revolution directly? Don't you think it's strange? The same goes for the heroine. If you, the author, think that you can't write about love and love, just mention it in one stroke. When it's time to get married, when it's time to hide the love line, just hide the love line. At first, he talked about ethics, and later he visited people's homes and played poems written by Internet celebrities. What, why don't you just go to the local love story? Why bother! As an author, you need to learn to take time off. But if you are a normal worker in the front, you will act like Mary Sue in the back. See for yourself, is this normal? As for the subsequent plot, although it has returned to normal, the author still advises that it is okay to add private goods, but you must understand what sustainability is. This is a novel, not an official news report. Please think clearly about this. As for the characters, needless to say, they are too superficial and lack a sense of three-dimensionality and layering. You can take your time with the characters, you cannot rush this thing. As for the entire story, the author believes that the historical and semi-fictional setting of steampunk style is quite selling point. But the author, you are too impatient with the rhythm of the novel and the use of private goods. Not knowing how to cut into it is a fatal problem. In this regard, the author hopes that you can learn more from others and hope that this book can be written well. Okay, I am an amateur book reviewer and an ordinary salted fish user Jiang Liuer. Goodbye everyone.

Very nice, pity TJ

Historically, the steam age was mankind's first industrial revolution, a huge step in the development of human technology, and also gave rise to the birth of capitalism. However, this revolution occurred abroad. The author has a wonderful idea, what would happen if the steam age happened in China's feudal society, the Ming Dynasty? There is no bloody plot at the beginning of the novel, nor is it a counterattack. Born into a noble family, he had an official position in Jinyiwei to monitor all officials and maintain social order. Anyone who breaks the law is governed by the law, not the so-called heroes who are the messengers of justice among the people. Nor should we use feudal superstition as an excuse. If society takes the right steps forward, the future will be bright; if it takes the wrong steps, the future will be abyss. See how the protagonist makes a choice!

Book Review: The name Steam Ming aroused my attention as a lover of steampunk and historical novels from the moment I saw it. Although there are not many chapters now, I still agree with the protagonist's operation. At least it is not so brainless. The other characters in the book also have their own characteristics; the world view of the whole book is quite grand, and the extraordinary system is not described too much at the moment. I hope the author can describe the content in the future; and in this book, I hope the author can explain the restraint of electricity in the world at the beginning of the book in a reasonable way. Overall, yes. This book is definitely full of expectations. I hope the author will give up his vacation and double the number of updates. Of course, health is still the first priority. Finally, I hope this book will become a god in one go. Come on＾0＾~!

The title of the book is simple and direct, and you can tell at a glance that it is a semi-fictional historical novel, which can arouse the reader's slightest interest in reading. With the advent of the steam age and the increase in civilian productivity, it is destined that there will be some difficult-to-mediate conflicts between the people and the royal power. If a suitable path is not found, perhaps this dynasty will fall apart. In that era, what kind of system was needed to alleviate conflicts and integrate the nation? This tested the author's imagination. As for the characters, I think what I want to see is how some characters highlight their own value in this era in this wave. Of course, it is inevitable that some people will make waves.

The name My Steam Ming aroused my attention from the moment I saw it, as a lover of steampunk and historical novels. Although the author has not updated many chapters now, I am still very satisfied with the whole book now. The protagonist's operation is not brainless, and other characters also have their own characteristics; the world view of the whole book is quite grand, and the extraordinary system is only discussed in detail now, not too much. I hope the author can describe it in the future; and the problem of the world's restraint on electricity mentioned at the beginning of the book can be given a reasonable explanation later. Overall, this book is definitely a masterpiece, and I am full of expectations. I hope the author will give up his spare time and hurry up to update it. Of course, health comes first. Finally, I hope the author and this book will become a god. Come on ＾0＾~＾0＾~.

The aesthetic characteristics of steampunk are very distinct: machinery, steam, and Verolia. Relying on these specific aesthetic symbols, steampunk has deduced a very unique artistic beauty. Steampunk mainly continues the mainstream design language of European Europe in the Victorian era. In terms of architectural design, Baroque and Rococo decoration styles are often used to contrast the magnificence of palace buildings in the classical era with the simple, crude, black and rough factories and B&Bs in the industrial era, creating a "punk" feel. The clothing design mostly adopts the British clothing style of the Vilorian era: women wear whalebone corsets and make extensive use of lace fabrics; men wear gentleman's top hats, leather riding boots and windbreakers, coupled with motorcycle goggles or monocles. At the same time, people would also wear some advanced equipment that was incompatible with the times, such as complex robotic arms, sophisticated flight watches, medieval beak-style gas masks, etc., Which were sharply different from traditional clothing and once again created a "punk" feeling. In the world of steampunk, the boundary between science and magic is very blurred. Many science and technologies were no different from magic in the eyes of people at the time, and humankind's love for strange powers and gods was still quite popular. So in the steampunk setting, you will see dark scientists using mechanical computers to study magical substances, and you will see mysterious scenes where giant steel ships and ancient monsters go hand in hand. Compared with the complete disenchantment of magic by science in cyberpunk, steampunk emphasizes the intertextual exchange between science and mysticism. Mechanical arms and flying broomsticks coexist, chemical industry and mysterious alchemy coexist, scientists and magicians coexist, giving steampunk unparalleled romance and imagination. To sum up, steampunk is a very interesting cultural proposition. The pure machinery of violent aesthetics, huge and bulky steam power, and the aesthetic tendency of coexisting science fiction and retro make steampunk present a completely different aesthetic from punk culture such as cyberpunk and wasteland punk. Cyberpunk is full of criticism of capitalism and dissatisfaction with the oppression of mankind by technology. Wasteland punk strives to exaggerate the tragic world after nuclear war and expresses pessimism about nuclear war and the end of mankind. These two types of punk have a pessimistic attitude towards technology and the future of mankind. In contrast, steampunk is full of admiration for technology and a beautiful vision of a future utopia. The heroic spirit of human beings to use the power of science and technology to transform nature and conquer the world, and the vitality of emerging industrial capital in the early stages of development, give steampunk a high-spirited and optimistic romanticism.

This book is about the protagonist using firearms from the steam age to conquer many martial arts sects during the glorious era of the Ming Dynasty. This is the collision between the new era and the old era, just like the collision between the Ming Dynasty and the Qing Dynasty. It's just that the two are in opposite positions. It was the Qing Dynasty that used artillery to blast open the gates and walls of the decaying Ming Dynasty. This has to be said to be a historical necessity, but we still feel that maybe the Ming Dynasty is better than the Qing Dynasty. Human memory is very wonderful, and they often value recent memories. Due to the decadence of the recent Qing Dynasty, people tend to ignore the prosperity of the Far Qing Dynasty and the decadence of the late Ming Dynasty, but they remember the glory of the early Ming Dynasty. However, it is precisely because of this that people who remember the glory know how to choose excellent things to strengthen themselves and create their own powerful romance. Only then will fictional novels appear. As far as being imaginative is concerned, the author's writing mentality is very correct.

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A refreshing steampunk novel, set in a common historical genre: the Ming Dynasty. Those interesting settings, various writing elements, but, but... A bit watery, the setting is good, but many stories are not much new, the steam inventions are also good, and the plots describing them are very different... It does not bring much satisfaction to people.

Write about your career well, don't have a harem, and write less about emotional entanglements.

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This book's Chinese and Western settings are very innovative, and its features really stood out to me! But then he said something about scientific electricity and the like, which made me speechless! If you focus on steampunk fantasy, just do steampunk. You can do witchcraft, martial arts, and magic, not science and steampunk hodgepodge, okay? Steampunk works and games are a world where steam and magic are combined! But don't add scientific elements! To add scientific elements, you might as well write urban modern writing!

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It's so funny that the protagonist still wants to revolution... Is there any soil for revolution? Who is your enemy? Who is your friend? Who do you get your rights from? I'm laughing so hard. You can't even see clearly and you're still talking about revolution It's so childish...

Go ahead, are you being raised to death by me? Didn't I say that the old author can still survive? What a great subject. Why don't you send me the outline and I'll make do with it. . . .

It's almost equal, let me tell you how I feel. Let's talk about the advantages first: 1. The subject matter is novel. I have read some steampunk, mostly based on the social background of the Victorian period, and I have also read some books about the Ming Dynasty, most of which developed technology based on Ming Dynasty society to resist invasion, and directly applied steam to the Ming Dynasty background. This is the first time I have seen it. I don't know what kind of sparks the two will collide with, it's very fresh. 2. A grand world view. The author's intention is not only to build the Ming Dynasty and eliminate foreign enemies, but also to develop the industrial revolution, promote social change, explore the world map, and launch the era of free trade and great navigation and colonization. There is a lot to watch, and I look forward to the follow-up. 3. Be well prepared and logical. It can be seen that the author spent a lot of time reviewing information, such as the official social situation in the early Ming Dynasty, the technological extension of steam weapons and equipment, production needs, etc. He has made some reasonable explanations and speculations, trying to make the development of steam and the emergence of new things consistent with the national conditions in the early Ming Dynasty. Although it is a magical world, he tries his best to ensure that the logic is reasonable and not obtrusive. The author is very careful about this, which is great👍 After talking about the advantages, let's talk about the disadvantages: 1. The biggest problem for me is that the author's voice-over description of the social background and the inner narration of the characters are too concentrated, which affects the development of the plot. Background information is necessary, but it is best to integrate it into the plot and gradually introduce the introduction as the plot unfolds, so that readers can remember it as they continue reading. For example, various new steam weapons are introduced one after another when attacking Jianghu sects in the first volume. The attack effects are shown in the plot, so the plot is smoother and these weapons are easy to remember. However, when the two armies in Jianzhou started to fight, they suddenly introduced a large section of what kind of new cannon it was, what kind of cannons and guns it had before, and what improvements had been made. In addition, the psychological activities of both sides and the protagonist's daily complaints were added, which greatly affected the smoothness of the plot. Another example is that after arriving at Shanhaiguan, there were several chapters introducing the situation. It took a lot of effort to finish reading it. Before I could digest it, the army was dispatched and the map was changed. The result was another long introduction to the background of Jianzhou. It was really difficult to read. It is better to design some plots and conflicts here, and let some supporting characters and new equipment appear to show the style and character relationships of Shanhaiguan. Jianzhou can also create one or two savage characters, and use their perspectives and psychology to show the situation of the primitive tribes and the surrendered tribes, their choices and encounters in the war, or they can later be integrated into the Ming Dynasty to develop Jianzhou, which can be used by the protagonist. Compared with the long introduction of Jianzhou's customs and customs, this will be easier to understand. 2. The character creation is relatively weak. Except for the protagonist, the characters are relatively flat and tend to be set on background panels. In the first volume, only the supporting role of the father is established, and the others are relatively weak. The female protagonist comes from a wealthy family of merchants, and she also goes out to manage factories. She does not show any shrewdness or ability at all, and her personality is not outstanding. She is just a moneymaker. In fact, since we want to write about the changes in industrial society, the heroine's textile factory is a typical social microcosm. We can write it in more depth, and even shape one or two lower-level workers, pave the way for some conflicts and contradictions, and foreshadow the subsequent free trade and social changes. There is very little written about the supporting characters, and most of them are forgettable when the scene changes. The protagonist has such great ambitions, and there must be someone behind him who he can trust, so he still needs to create some supporting characters that people can remember. 3. The plot is relatively straightforward, and there is no major suspense conflict to promote the main plot. According to the author's description, the main plot should be the social changes promoted by the protagonist, allowing the Ming Dynasty to enter the era of colonial exploration and exploration. The social contradictions and conflicts of interest between feudal royal rule and industrial society capitalism may be the main driving force. However, the current plot is basically that the protagonist constantly changes maps and fights monsters to increase experience, which does not reflect the protagonist's purpose, psychological journey and the difficulties he faces. Therefore, the plot seems a bit loose and not very attractive to follow. In general, the author's subject matter is very good and he is very attentive. He has made a lot of preparations and has his own outline plan. I still hope that the author can adjust the rhythm to make this book more exciting!

This book is very good, the writing is good, and the characters in the plot have good IQs, but in the end I only ordered it for the first time because I was poor. So I wish the author better and better results in the new year, good health, and happy family (*￣￣*)

Many people are asking about the direction of this book. Since steampunk has been mixed in, it will not be a hegemony or auxiliary stream in the traditional sense, nor will it be a pure revolution. All in all, just watch it, there are too many spoilers. ps. Refer to the history of European Renaissance and Revolution

Alas, after reading about ten chapters, I didn't want to read it until the sect was liquidated. The protagonist was just like the current keyboard warriors. He was a double-standard dog. He was self-righteous. You begged for the prince in the front, but after seeing it, I felt less vicious. Are you actually worried that you will be liquidated? If you really feel that you are right, you should unswervingly execute every order

I thought it was a good book after reading the beginning, but unfortunately it also had a good beginning.

Productivity determines the social system. With steam engines, even without time-travelers. Major social changes will also occur in more than ten years. Nor will the monarch be allowed to exist by the people. A hundred years is enough time for a lot of things to happen. It's a pity that the author doesn't know much about Marxism.

Until the author's update day, I will remember to tell Naiwen about family sacrifices.

Let's talk about it. Some of the previously unreasonable and problematic areas were all solved in today's update (it's not a spoiler). It's a pretty deep foreshadowing. Really, I haven't had this bright feeling for a long time. Except for the emotional drama, which is true, um, I won't go into details. Anyway, the latest one made me pull my pussy straight up. What does it mean to be a powerful person? Can someone who is not ruthless and ruthless be called a powerful person?😎😎

Is this TJ? The writing is pretty good, which is a bit of a pity.