In the Original God, I Am Really Not Without Misfortune

First of all, the character of the protagonist in this book is seriously inconsistent with the value orientation of normal people. The protagonist is murderous and has no humanity at all. This is why I can't accept it. Some people will say that the protagonist is a ghost. Is human nature so important? I will answer: It is very important, because the protagonist is a ghost in the setting, but the author is not. The protagonist of a work can be said to be the most real emotion in the author's heart. As a fan novel, the protagonist must also give readers a sense of involvement. But this is not the case in this book. The protagonist of this book is completely a collection of negative values ​​such as greed, killing and prostitution. How do you let readers get involved? You ask readers to imagine themselves as a dregs of society who only kill to become stronger? Therefore, if the reader finds that he cannot find a sense of immersion and is extremely disgusted with the protagonist's character, the value of this novel will be close to nothing.

Can be exchanged for Tsukuni Enichi's Breath of the Sun

Discuss the matter as it is, don't start a fight, and don't say thank you First of all, I am a double chef. How should I put it? I have bought the Demon Slayer manga and read it three times, so I know many details. As for Genshin Impact, I am full of life in Kaminari and Kaminari Cooking. , I personally like the character of Ayaka Kamisato very much, so Ayaka's personality and behavior have been fixed for me. For Demon Slayer, regardless of skills, I just start with the protagonist killing innocent people indiscriminately, and then I can't accept the heroine being Ayaka Kamisato. In my opinion, Ayaka is a very independent, smart, and very talented girl. She dared to fight against the Eye Hunter Order not for herself. Do any Genshin Impact players remember how Ayaka used to impress the travelers to help him? Yes, we went to meet three lost people. Everyone who goes to God's Eye is miserable, which makes the traveler determined to help Ayaka. So I don't think Ayaka can stand with her after knowing that this is a person who kills innocent people for her own benefit. Kamisato Ayaka, she has sense and understanding, she is not a Mary Sue who doesn't understand anything. Above, this is what I read in the book review area and said, author, you can write about a person who will do whatever it takes for his own benefit. This is a character, but please don't take it for granted. When you write about a character who kills innocent people indiscriminately, you have to know that at this time the protagonist no longer regards himself as a human being, but as a superior being. The last thing that should appear in this kind of article is not the character Ayaka Kamisato, but the existence of the heroine. Do you understand what I mean 🤔

There are so many Qiuqiu people in Teyvat, treasure-stealing gangs, wild beasts, and sea-challenged ghosts. If all the fools won't eat them, they must eat people, right? 🤫Author, are you afraid that you have some serious illness?

Let me talk about my opinions on this book. First of all, let me explain that the following is just my personal experience of reading books. Everyone likes different types of books. Let's talk about the protagonist first. After traveling to this world, does he have the physique of a ghost king? I saw a lot of people in the comment area saying that the protagonist killed people randomly, but I think that the protagonist is ultimately a ghost, and he just has human nature. He does whatever it takes for profit, and he does it as a last resort (see Chapter 79 for details. The protagonist also wants to become a human) ) You have this physique after time travel, and the protagonist cannot choose. If you are a ghost, in order to become stronger, you can only kill people. . . So I don't think it's okay to kill indiscriminately (but if you continue to write like this, the book will definitely be gone). Overall, I feel that the protagonist's character is not broken, but the subject matter is a bit gray. Let's talk about the heroine Ling Hua, this emotional scene is really embarrassing. Besides, will she really fall in love with a ghost who cares about human life? Let's talk about other issues. To be honest, this combat system is a bit unbearable. Is it really so sloppy? To summarize, if this book is out of ten, I would give it a seven (personal preference). It may be dark in the early stage (dissuading readers who can't bear it), but later the author listened to the editor's suggestion and made the error tolerance higher, so that the protagonist's humanity will be stronger. I still want to see the next development of the story, and I hope the author can write a complete story. Read books rationally. Everyone has different tastes. If you don't like it, someone will like it; if you like it, others may not like it.

Author, didn't you read Demon Slayer: Kimetsu no Yaiba carefully when you wrote the book? For example, the protagonist knows breathing techniques. I want to ask you, didn't you read the introduction of breathing techniques carefully? Breathing is the result of specifically killing ghosts. You want the protagonist, a ghost, to practice breathing? At the very least, you have to let the protagonist conquer the sun before letting him practice it! Also, there are people in the world of Genshin Impact who won't kill, so why do you insist on killing people? Isn't this looking for trouble for oneself?

If you give this setting to any person, as long as he has correct views, his writing will be better than this.

Thor

If nothing else about your book, the main character is just killing people indiscriminately and will be banned.

I'm not going to discuss what's right or wrong, but killing 2,000 people who don't have any grudge against you at the beginning does feel uncomfortable, and the sense of immersion is gone immediately. Let's look at the fact that the heroine is Ling Hua. I can't imagine that Ling Hua's character would stand on the same side as the protagonist. In other words, imagine that Ling Hua kills 2,000 people who have nothing to do with her. Unless my XP is very strange, it will really collapse.

Different people will have different feelings when they read the same book, but this also describes what kind of person this person is, or maybe he is not a person. According to normal human thinking and moral concepts, when you read a book like this where the male protagonist hunts humans indiscriminately to upgrade, you will want to curse. People, on the contrary, are some non-human things who want to defend this book when they read it. This book can also reflect what kind of person the author is. Speaking of something else, the shogunate army hunted by the male protagonist at the beginning of the book is not considered a villain. The real villains are the Kujo family and the Fools. Although these shogunate sergeants also did bad things, they only collected the Eye of God and fought against the rebels. There were only two or three bad ones, but the male protagonist killed innocent people indiscriminately. The main reason is that in some of Inazuma's mission plots, we can learn that many people in the shogunate army were forced to beat their husbands, and there were also some people who were worthy of sympathy. Most of the individuals killed by the male protagonist were such people, so The male protagonist is really disgusting. The author said that most of the people who watch Genshin Impact fanfiction are Genshin Impact players. What everyone wants to see is the male protagonist upgrading by killing monsters and saving some tragedies, instead of watching the male protagonist kill people indiscriminately here regardless of good or bad. The male protagonist can completely kill Qiuqiu and Abyss mages to upgrade. These monsters, in addition to ordinary Qiuqiu people, have elemental abilities and must have more points than ordinary people. There are also Fools, you can kill them however you want. Also, the male protagonist actually wanted to kill Kujo Sara at the beginning. Kujo Sara is a decent character and she is very beautiful, but the male protagonist wants to kill her. This is difficult to accept. The female protagonist is Ling Hua, and he is worthy of being the male protagonist. The author deserves to be scolded. For a loyal Genshin Impact player and a normal human being, this book has three wrong views and is poisonous. I really don't know what to say. In short, I just want to curse.

The author was scolded on the forum, I feel sorry for the author 😂😂😂

Either do it in a completely bad way, it's both ridiculous and stupid, it's hard work and you want to be a good person, it's really a bit disgusting

... Too bad, the content of this book is completely different from the name. Apart from the name and sunlight immunity of the protagonist, which is different from Muzan, what else is different? I originally thought I would see a story in which the protagonist came to the world of Genshin Impact and became a ghost, but maintained his humanity, was unwilling to eat people, fought against his own rationality and instinct, and kept saving the world. What happened? The annihilation of humanity is exactly the same as Muzan. Even the harem novel and the God of War novel did not give me this feeling as if I had swallowed a spider.

What are you writing, a romance novel?

The ghost is a bit weak, let the protagonist use Frostmourne as the Lich King (it's pretty much the same anyway)

If the author changes the people the protagonist kills into monsters, this book will not achieve the same results.

What a good book. In Chapter 91, the change of behavior was successfully persuaded to quit. What did the author think? You said that the protagonist's character has already been persuaded to quit, so why do you want to change it? You are trying to persuade two waves of people to quit. Those who like the protagonist's character have been persuaded to quit by your changes, and those who don't like the protagonist's character have already been persuaded to quit. Why do you want to change it? I just don't understand

The writing is very good, but it feels inhumane. Don't give me the definition of human nature. If you follow the definition of human nature, you can't be called a human being at all. Killing everyone for power is really unbearable. In order to survive, abandoning one's subordinates is just not willing to spend points to exchange for props that may save lives. How is killing for the sake of killing and using any means different from Tang San? For your own benefit, you can really use any means.

Is there any good Genshin Impact fandom that you would recommend? I read this book after 9 chapters and was immediately persuaded to quit.

You don't feel good about these recent photos. So much nonsense, it makes people feel sick. There are some sentences that you might as well not write, because those few sentences you write will be fucking disgusting.

Writing this kind of novel and having a harem seems like a stud. Poison poisoning poisoning.

I feel like the main character has no brains. There are some enhancements in the first few pictures, but I didn't see them in the later ones. Of course, maybe it's because I haven't finished reading them all. To put it bluntly, with that rubbish strength, I really don't understand why the protagonist is so arrogant. Is it because ghosts can repair broken limbs? Is it difficult to kill? If you are pulled down, if you are stronger, I can use elemental power to grind you into slag. Just focus on falling in love. He is running away to Liyue, what a talent.

The protagonist feels superior to others from the beginning. I know this is a change in the character's personality, which may be related to his past life. This is a genuine villain, and nm is so well written, so good.

Author, why are your latest chapters out of order?

I don't recommend reading this novel. It's just nonsense. I don't recommend reading it. How could a Thunderbolt general who wants to drink blood become a couple with a man-eating monster? Moreover, Sky Island is originally designed to prevent outside invasion, so there must be a smooth transition before there is any risk. Why don't you die faster?

Newcomers come to see it and persevere, there is hope for becoming a god in the future. The author's proportions in the first few pictures are immature, and the emphasis is difficult to adjust. When he got to the back, he felt it clearly, and it was almost done. Persist in finishing it, and I hope to become a god.

The brothers are both from the same Genshin Impact, they both cook and fish for people, and they all have similar names. You made me famous and I was rejected twice, which makes me feel miserable.

Are there any other good Genshin Impact fanfics?