Collecting Dragons from Hogwarts

A ridiculously impressive background. Compare that to the original story. Incomparable talent, a mere excuse. Remove all talents except for Dragon's Might and Dragon's Breath—good grief. Ancestor Dragon, the First Dragon? This is it. Shouldn't the talents of other fantasy dragon races be granted instantly, like getting whatever they want? Ancestor Dragon with nothing at all.

Why does it have to be with the main characters?

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The beginning was well-written, but the pace went too fast later on. You've only written a few chapters, and you're already in the middle to late stages of the first year.

Stop writing about group tours. What's the point of following three idiots? Besides, the protagonist's personality is nothing like a dragon's.

This is a good subject matter, but the author doesn't know how to write it.

Honestly, if the protagonist were a dragon, Draco would probably adore him. He's totally a male supporting character in the making! 🤔 He'll probably be the protagonist's best friend for life. After all, he's a well-known dragon enthusiast in the wizarding world.

The main character's name should be changed; it's too distracting and doesn't sound good either.

It was written really well, why haven't you updated it?

Collecting dragons? Norwegian Spinosaurus, Welsh Green Dragon, Ukrainian Ironbelly, Momonosuke? 😂