I Loaded the Social Death System

Chapter 17: Poisoned to Death😅

After reading the introduction, I feel like the protagonist makes money as a clown!

Being coerced by my roommate to eat together because of the girl, and then helping to hold back the drinks. Who are they? Puppet? It's a dog licking thing. I can't say it. I wrote that I didn't want to go there at the beginning. It's not a dog licking thing. There are facts.

I've read Chapter 20 and it's a bit too funny. Maybe I can change some ways to play, such as saying hello to strangers on the street, exchanging balloons with children for lollipops, meeting an old man and asking if I can put my hands in his pockets to keep warm, and seeing someone blasting a loudspeaker to collect scraps and sharpen scissors and say yes. If it were you who could shout, I would bring a Coke in KFC and invite everyone to drink together. If it were purely funny like this now, it would feel like a waste of the subject of social death. Now it feels like an ordinary urban pretentious slap-in-the-face article, without so many features at all.

I feel that the handling of a few girls is not very good, and it is quite jarring to read. If you want to have a single heroine, don't make it all ambiguous. If you want to start a harem, don't lie to her. The protagonist is like a scumbag. He likes this one, has a crush on that one, is flirtatious with others, and says he has no idea about the others.

The first 10 chapters are okay. It's no fun to pretend to be a slap in the face later. Later, when I saw that the school was going to be opened, I lost the desire to read it!

I suspect that the protagonist's brothers are being disgusting, but I have no proof.

This is not called a social death system, this is called a social terrorist attack system

It's boring. I can't stand it anymore after reading Chapter 21. The writing is terrible and the story is too bloody. It's still messy...

Youth Campus is quite good, but I can't stand it when it comes to business.

How about the main street becoming smelly? Can we arrange it for the smelly smell in front of the White House?

I'm quite confused, since I know how to use social death card to get the girl, why don't I think of going directly to get the guy? It is said that the protagonist and the woman have a feud, so the protagonist does not harm her mistress, but the previous article explains that the protagonist does not have sex with the man because his assets are not qualified. I don't understand.

The writing is readable, but the author likes Japanese things, including cars and food. . .

Okay, I almost died laughing

After talking about so many girlfriends, none of them got on base?

No sense of immersion at all

The previous chapter was okay. In Chapter 13, the poisoning started, and it was still a forced one.

Personal advice (don't comment if you don't like it, thank you!) The main character's social death is not interesting. Firstly, the social death happens too many times and he becomes numb after overcoming his psychological problems, which is not interesting. Secondly, he feels like a clown. But the feeling of letting others die is different. First, it requires a battle of wits and courage (others don't want to die). Second, the characters are different, the setting is different, and the feeling is different. Third, one or two weirdos can be set up, and the death point is different (different from ordinary people). That's about it. I hope it can be helpful to the author!

Take a lesson from Mr. Chen and the protagonist will take off immediately

If you want to die in society, go to a certain university. Senior sister will help you

Is the introduction unfinished? I really miss the coach and Goddess Zhao.

Well, the writing was pretty good, but why is it gone? Come on for the next one＾0＾~

Live-in teacher? It's not that I have evil thoughts. Is this thing really working? Won't it cause family breakdown?

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