Weird Diary

I just read one chapter. The writing is good and the ideas are clear, but it is too slow. The suspense left by the end of the chapter has been guessed, and the subsequent chapters have no appeal! It's not good, you can just refer to it

It's good, but some parts may be a bit obscure to read... Such as the part about shooting a fox with a gun...

I feel like the writing is okay and the writing style is good. If I have to say something wrong, maybe the sense of immersion is a little bit poor and the plot is a little slow.

Since it is not written in the first person, the first paragraph of the first chapter can be changed.

I've run out of motivation, so I'll step back for a while. When will I invest in, when will I come back! 😢😢😢😢