Become the Godfather of the Second Dimension from Internet Writing

The writing was too messy and complicated. It gave me the impression that it was just a hammer here and there, just like a stick stirring up everything. The result was that it changed from the second dimension to business, which I didn't like. I feel like I should focus on one aspect and skip the rest. After all, few people who read this book are here for business.

How should I put it? If you copy the original text of Doupo and publish it in Little Japan, it won't bring much repercussions at all. Chinese online articles and Little Japan's light novels are two different things 😅

It feels like people's tastes are very picky now, talking about Dou Po rubbish and so on. You can't look at Dou Po from the perspective of 21 years. The routines in Dou Po were all unique and new things back then. Even now, if you take a look at Nikkei now, you will find that Nikkei is really not as good as Nikkei 20 years ago except for a few more online routines. As long as Dou Po is localized, even if it can't defeat monsters like Ginying and Monogatari, it's still very simple to beat those toilet paper

Daily guide or guide 🙂

Let's put it this way, most readers read the novel because of the subject matter (writing online articles in Japan). But the author, you just wrote a story about fighting, and then kept developing in other directions. You made most readers who wanted to read (write online articles in Japan) very uncomfortable. I skipped to read other parts, so I stopped and read slowly when describing the online article.

I've read Chapter 62 so far, and I feel pretty good about it. It's quite to my liking, but there are a few aspects I'd like to mention. First of all, it is a step too big. The protagonist starts writing web articles, which is fine, and then becomes a voice actor, which is fine, and invests in animation, which is fine, and opening a company to engage in vtb is fine, but starting to work on games in chapter 62, I don't have the mood to continue reading. It's okay to have multiple branches, but you just let a hundred flowers bloom, which I think is illogical. This book appeals to my taste, and I originally wanted to read it, but I'd better keep it for now. When it reaches 400,000, I'll start selling it depending on the situation. Secondly, there is the issue of family. I think family is something that you should not write about in one sentence. If you write about it, then you have to fill in the holes. Anyway, until Chapter 62, I have seen family and sister described twice.

Come on, author, it's normal for the protagonist to be so awesome and have a system. Without the system, the protagonist is definitely not a normal person if he is so awesome. If he is not a normal person, how can he have a sense of empathy? As an ordinary person, I also want to take on this kind of systematic life! ! !

Dou Po can still be said to be a thing of the past, but Zhu Xian, a mortal, will definitely be unaccustomed to Japan, and it will also make the Japanese doubt the character of the protagonist. Forcibly rounding it is so disgusting. Dragon Clan and Global High Martial Arts are pretty good...

I think I can buy Bilibili, a full-time producer of TV dramas and videos. Besides, Bilibili was still very small in 11 or 12 years ago, and it doesn't cost much to buy it. It's better than being made to care only about money by my uncle in the future.

When I saw the word "Xiao Wu", I immediately didn't want to read it. So the introduction is still the introduction to poison. Can Shen Nong tell me?

This is too biased and too complicated. I will follow you in the next book. I have retreated.

After reading the comment section, I feel that times have changed too fast, and few people have read The Devil's Law

The writing is too messy. The main character is busy with other things before the novel has made any progress. It seems very laborious to write a little bit here and there a little bit here and there.

The protagonist is too versatile, with one stick and four sticks. He started here to stir up the fire, but it took a long time to get results. The emotions that were stirred up before have been extinguished long ago, and the sense of satisfaction has been greatly reduced.

Ignore some irrelevant people and focus on the positioning of your novels. Light novels and this story mode without a main line will not be liked by everyone. Just keep the readers you want to keep. Forcing it will only make the article different.

How come we all have younger sisters in Wenyu? If you don't have a sister, you don't want a younger brother, and you don't want an older brother or sister. An only child is fine, and if you don't have a cousin, even better.

It's the same as ancient business literature, everything is necessary and nothing is perfect.

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