Douluo Yuelin

To be honest, I really don't know what you think about the half-level innate setting. It's said to be compressed, but are you planning to show off and slap it in the face? It's really not worth it, and you have to pay attention to typos and punctuation. The main character's mother's name is wrong, and she is 1.8 Meters tall. How old is the main character? Overall, there is a lot of room for improvement. There is really no need for a half-level setting, and don't think about pretending to be cool. I've read a few chapters, and you've already seen a trend... It is recommended to rewrite it.