Become a Human Emperor Starting from Boxing Wish

What can I say... Although I am also a street person, I am not qualified to make any professional comments. But I have to say that the first few chapters of the author's book are honestly not suitable for quick browsing. I can only read it word by word, word by word. The author should have no obstacles when reading it, and so do I. After all, the outline is in my mind, so I can read it smoothly. But from a reader's perspective, after browsing Chapters 1 and 2, I can honestly say that the experience was really poor. Inexplicably, the first chapter starts like an urban novel, but in summary there are no highlights. For example, the conversation with Ma Fei and the introduction of the protagonist are all nonsense and have no nutrition and make people skip them quickly. Chapter 2 Then I traveled through a mirror... The process was also foggy. I still slowed down my reading speed to read word by word, but I still read it 30% to 70% to fill in the plot with my mind. Chapter 3 After Jian Zhen traveled across the world, to be honest, I read the beginning and stopped reading. In summary, the very psychedelic opening chapter makes people confused. Before the male protagonist has a good character or an event to set off the character, it is recommended not to casually set up a character for the protagonist. For example, in the second chapter, there are three or two sentences that directly say that the male protagonist is an abnormal person. If there is an opportunity and excitement, then try it and experience it. Regardless of the originally good city opening, it is very uncomfortable to suddenly change to a different world. There is no principled reason, only the reason for abandoning the original world to find excitement. Originally, the author might have wanted to tie the opportunity of time travel and the character of the male protagonist together. But the uncomfortable reality is that the travel of the world makes people feel that the style of painting has changed inexplicably. The first impression of the protagonist's frivolousness is not likely to make people think of it. Continue reading...

It looks good, but it's too little and needs to be raised.

Damn it, this shielding system is really poisonous